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Post by alexgg on Jun 1, 2010 17:38:28 GMT -5
Now this ain't going to be as harsh as the last one,
Post here if you are a Beginner or someone trying to get better (a Noob).
When you post your animation(s) it will be reviewed by others and if I say you don't need to be in this thread then you can post on the Main Board.
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BRYAN
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Post by BRYAN on Jun 1, 2010 21:33:36 GMT -5
First beginner post Stiff, but i like the blue guy's reaction!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 1, 2010 22:45:30 GMT -5
me. First beginner post Stiff, but i like the blue guy's reaction! Pretty good. The jump looked off, it would of been alright if the other stick was closer but it didn't work for this, you should of moved the legs so that the whole stick moves forward if you get what I mean? Air time was decent but looked odd because of the jump. Reaction was good just a bit too fast on the way down. Good job.
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Jesseversion1
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Jun 2, 2010 0:22:02 GMT -5
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Post by alexgg on Jun 2, 2010 2:24:16 GMT -5
Ryan: Looks okay but the jump needs work, the idea is creative but the reactions look good. The airtime needs improving because it looks fidgety and has a lack of spacing.
Jesse: Nice but the airtime needs work also, prehaps a frame removing as well becuase he looks like he sticks mid-air. Jump isnt so bad and niether are reactions. Good work.
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Post by Dan. on Jun 2, 2010 5:40:09 GMT -5
you're my rookie so i'll comment on yours. It did run too fast in my opinion, the air time was faster than it should've been. The jump was alright, the ropebounces worked well, the reactions were okay, but the bounce added impact, which is good. and Alex, i know you were hesitant to bring this place back, but its a good move i'm telling you.
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Post by trøy on Jun 2, 2010 7:16:38 GMT -5
Jesse's: Looked alright, but looks way too fast and the spacing isn't totally there. The jump was alright, and the mid air was kind of weird, because he just went straight down. Your improving.
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Post by Mr.W² on Jun 2, 2010 8:21:46 GMT -5
Alex you need to make a list at the top of the thread saying who is outta bz
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Post by joshuaggranberg on Jun 2, 2010 10:35:46 GMT -5
Crap. Don't mind the brown hands...
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Post by alexgg on Jun 2, 2010 10:45:33 GMT -5
I dont understand why the color changes... It dosnt make sense!! The first part with the walking is great, its smooth and well done but the rest looks dodgy. I hate the pick-up out of no where, the legs should bend and blue needs better movements going into it. The reactions look horrible becuase you skipped frames and made no iMPACT! Whats Cash Doing in the iMPACT! Zone?!
Keep it up, you will improve.
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Post by joshuaggranberg on Jun 2, 2010 11:12:26 GMT -5
More Crap.. 1.1A.1B ( With Spacing ).
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Post by wweanimation09 on Jun 2, 2010 11:58:00 GMT -5
Not very good compared to everyone elses but i guess because i am quite new to pivot. Credit to Alex for the stks and ring.
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Post by alexgg on Jun 2, 2010 12:16:54 GMT -5
KA$: The climbing was nice but the jump needs work, it looks like a slow small. V3 was the best due to the removed frames but it needs more reaction. Good Style.
Jack: Not bad for one of your first, its got some good movements, its just stiff in places and needs a reaction. A few frames looked unnessacary, remove some that stay in the same place for so long to even out the spacing.
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Post by joshuaggranberg on Jun 2, 2010 14:01:27 GMT -5
My running has improved Alex You better reply
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Post by alexgg on Jun 2, 2010 14:03:29 GMT -5
Its good But I dont like the arm movements.
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Post by Ian on Jun 2, 2010 14:45:24 GMT -5
i most personly love it wat do u think
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Post by joshuaggranberg on Jun 2, 2010 14:54:28 GMT -5
Fixed :
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Post by Ian on Jun 2, 2010 14:56:28 GMT -5
ka$ where the hell are the arms ?
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Post by Sabin on Jun 2, 2010 15:02:46 GMT -5
jump and reactions are pretty weak cred to alex for sticks and kev(?) for style
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Post by sicknicholas on Jun 2, 2010 15:10:03 GMT -5
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D this is gonna suck
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