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Post by sicknicholas on Jun 7, 2010 3:23:59 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jun 7, 2010 11:37:11 GMT -5
Looks like you got some good ideas, but camera ia really grainy. Gives it a vintage ECW feel, though.
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Post by shiftyeyes on Jun 7, 2010 12:33:39 GMT -5
- Huge pictures are bad! - No string editing is bad! - Ring looks in bad shape. Buy some black electrical tape to cover the torn ringskirts. - The entrance way looks cool, but is obviously a shoe box and some videos! Buy some black paper and cover it up! - While the camera is bad quality, it fits this fed really well imo, as you're trying for an indie/underground/uv feel. - The poses were ok overall. Effort is clearly there. - Lack of commentary is bad, dude. - Like the use of Toybiz as well btw. Overall, the match was entertaining, but the big pics made it hard to follow and lack of commentary. Keep trying, dude! PS; Check out this thread for how to edit string out. wfigs.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=wfposes&action=display&thread=67813Ask in the discussion thread how to resize large amounts of pics in short amounts of time. |
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Post by sicknicholas on Jun 7, 2010 14:06:40 GMT -5
- Huge pictures are bad! - No string editing is bad! - Ring looks in bad shape. Buy some black electrical tape to cover the torn ringskirts. - The entrance way looks cool, but is obviously a shoe box and some videos! Buy some black paper and cover it up! - While the camera is bad quality, it fits this fed really well imo, as you're trying for an indie/underground/uv feel. - The poses were ok overall. Effort is clearly there. - Lack of commentary is bad, dude. - Like the use of Toybiz as well btw. Overall, the match was entertaining, but the big pics made it hard to follow and lack of commentary. Keep trying, dude! PS; Check out this thread for how to edit string out. wfigs.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=wfposes&action=display&thread=67813Ask in the discussion thread how to resize large amounts of pics in short amounts of time. Thanks, well this is only my first show, so it will get better. I actually didn't want to put commentary indyshow there is none. You can only hear who's talking on the mic. My printers been broken, but I'm gonna make a new setup tonite thanks for the comments guys:D aha waht did you think ofthe characters ala BLACK REF? |
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Post by coffeman3 on Jun 7, 2010 19:48:03 GMT -5
Nice first show, love the ending.
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Post by deskjet on Jun 7, 2010 21:48:32 GMT -5
It's not bad. has a unique look to it. The darkness of it really adds to the fed. Some twistedness in there, I like it:)
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jun 12, 2010 19:14:11 GMT -5
I love how creepy, crazy, and controversial this fed is. It is honestly a breathe of fresh air. No matter what people say, keep doing what you are doing. Of course there are limits, but I think that you are crossing them respectfully.
But be ready for some harsh criticism from those who may get offended. Those replies are sure to come. Don't let that deter you from your work.
The pictures are pretty fuzzy, but that's not a problem in my opinion. The picture size is the real problem. Try making them a tad smaller. Commentary could be beefed up as well.
With some minor adjustments this could be a great fed. Keep working hard, man! =)
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Post by Byron F'N Saxton Fan on Jun 26, 2010 21:15:25 GMT -5
I like your Arena and the idea you have for your characters, but there's some stuff that I didn't care for:
The huge Pictures are kind of loud, if that makes sense. It just makes it a little harder for me to take in everything when everything is huge and RIGHT in my face. Cut the Pic-size down some.
No Commentary. I get that Commentary can be a bit strenuous, and it's not always read by viewers, but it adds to the Show and provides a sense of realism to it. Maybe get one Commentator so you don't have to do Commentary under each pic, but some occasional lines to help explain the Wrestlers would be nice.
One Camera angle for the Match. Try to branch out in terms of Camera Angles as I feel kind of stuck with one Camera position for the entire Match.
String. Yeah, just read how to do it. Should be easy to edit the string out with your all black blackground.
I like Black Ref, BUT HE'S NO JUSTIN KING, DAMN IT!
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