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Post by highflyer329 on Jun 10, 2010 10:15:49 GMT -5
..Its horrible lol. This is my first attempt at any type of corkscrew.  Alex Kinda Made me wanna do this. But it is bad lol. |
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Post by alexgg on Jun 10, 2010 10:20:06 GMT -5
Lol I was expecting to see a swanton. 
It looks okay but its too choppy and looks fast, make smaller movements no giant ones and practice on the running, prehaps find a tut on it and other stuff.
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Post by joshuaggranberg on Jun 10, 2010 13:01:21 GMT -5
The starting pose was okay I guess, could of been better though.
The run had no leg movement at all.
Choppy, And stiff.
The jump was okay.
Work on impact, spacing, flow & running.
I like your style by the way, Not that I want it or anything I just think it's nice. Look in the old First Aid Thread and you'll learn some stuff. Untill then, Good luck!
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Post by Mr.W² on Jun 10, 2010 15:11:32 GMT -5
it is quite choppy but as said above, just work on using smaller frames and stiffness you'll get better in no time  |
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