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Post by ICW on Jun 14, 2010 18:57:17 GMT -5
This seems somewhat interesting. I look forward to reading your stuff..
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2010 22:57:06 GMT -5
Thank you so much!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 21, 2010 1:31:26 GMT -5
Monday Night Raw - Week 1
WWE diva enforcer Linda McMahon made her way to the ring
She welcomed the fans to the first show and promised to entertain them, she announced that she is and will always be in charge of all things diva related, the first order of business was crowning a WWE Women’s Champion. Linda booked a six diva battle royal at the Royal Rumble, Linda mentioned that over the next month the divas will have to win a qualifying match, if they win they are automatically in the title match at the Royal Rumble. She booked a 10 diva battle royal for the fans later in the evening. The fans cheered.
::cheers and applause::
WWE Interviewer Lillian Garcia made her way to the divas dressing room and questioned a few of the battle royal participants, a fight broke out between Chyna and Jacqueline after Lillian interviewed Chyna. Apparently Chyna was acting extremely arrogant and Jacqueline wasn’t having any of it, within 20 minutes of the show we managed to have our very first diva brawl. The WWE officials eventually separated the two as the other divas looked on.
TERRI RUNNELS vs. THE KAT vs. DEBRA vs. TORI vs. SABLE vs. LUNA vs. IVORY vs. CHYNA vs. JACQUELINE vs. BIBI
10 Diva Battle Royal
After all ladies entered the ring, the bell sounded. Chyna quickly went to work by eliminating The Kat, Terri and Debra (all at the same time!)
Lillian Garcia: Terri, The Kat and Debra have been eliminated
Jacqueline, Ivory, Luna and Tori quickly jumped on Chyna, after all of their efforts they weren’t able to get rid of Chyna. Bibi and Sable were trying to get rid of each other while on the apron, after a series of back and fourth strikes Jacqueline and Ivory ran up to them both and dropkicked them out of the ring.
Lillian Garcia: Sable and Bibi have been eliminated
Chyna clotheslined both Jacqueline and Ivory, she picked Ivory up by the hair and sent her flying out of the ring.
Lillian Garcia: Ivory has been eliminated
Chyna tries to do the same to Jackie but Tori and Luna (whom were wrestling each other) stopped her, all three quickly went to work on Chyna, they did everything from neck-breakers (Luna) missile dropkicks (Tori) and german suplexes (Jacqueline) while they did manage to weaken Chyna up, it was hard to actually eliminate her, Chyna then grabbed Tori and Luna (double choke slam position) and threw them out of the ring.
Lillian Garcia: Tori and Luna have been eliminated
Chyna unaware that Jacqueline was on the top rope turns around, Jacqueline goes for a head scissors!!! Chyna catches her mid air and has Jacqueline in a power bomb position, she power bombs Jacqueline. Chyna picks her up (while Jackie is still in position) and throws Jacqueline outside of the ring on top of Tori and Luna (whom just got up from the floor)
Lillian Garcia: and your winner is CHYNA!!!!
Chyna signals to cut her music, she cuts a promo stating that at the Royal Rumble the Women’s Championship will be hers and there’s not a damn thing anyone can do about it, Chyna states that she is here to stay and the crowd boo’s her as the show goes off the air.
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Post by ICW on Jun 22, 2010 20:11:29 GMT -5
It’s nice to see some new blood around here. I think in the 4 (nearly 5) years of being in the booking community, I’ve only seen two ‘all women wrestling’ feds. Yours looks quite interesting and the WWF did have some decent female talent in the late 90s.
It’s really interesting to see Lind McMahon run the show and it makes a hell of a lot of sense. I have to admit, I’m a little confused about the matches Linda McMahon booked...the wording was a little off. If I were you, make things sound more clearer, make sure your audience will know what’s going on. But as I understand it, we have a Battle Royal for this evening. Looking forward to it!
The Battle Royal seemed a bit rush. I can understand that those type of matches can be difficult to write, however, Chyna eliminating 3 of the 10 competitors in a matter of seconds was a little unrealistic. I would have liked to have seen more detail added to the match, more depth. It wasn’t horrible and it’s certainly an adequate start. I’m happy Chyna won the match, she looked extremely impressive.
I think you have some promise. Here’s the thing, though…if I were you, I’d book more matches. I would have liked to have seen promos as well, some words from the ladies before their matches. Keep up the good job!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 2, 2010 14:51:01 GMT -5
BEST COMMENTS EVER!!!!!!!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 2, 2010 22:09:23 GMT -5
Monday Night Raw - January 11, 1999 ::cheers and applause as Linda McMahon makes her way to the ring::  Hello fans! How was the show last week? ::cheers:: *laughs* well if you enjoyed last week’s show then you’ll love tonight’s show. As I said last week, I’m looking to crown our first women’s champion. So tonight Luna Vachon will face off against Jacqueline and the winner will join Chyna in the 6 diva battle royal @ the Royal Rumble to determine the first BRH women’s champion, I hope you enjoy. ::the crowd erupts:: Backstage Lillian Garcia is looking to get an interview with Chyna Chyna, Chyna, Chyna may I have a word with you? Chyna!!  WHAT?!? What do you want Lillian? Huh? WHAT? I um, I just want your thoughts on um Jacqueline and Luna Vachon. WHY? Why does it matter? It’s not like any of them are a threat to me. I understand that but what about Jacqueline? You two ladies had quite the altercation last week and she was the last one remaining in the battle royal. I actually think she may be a threat to you Chyna. SHE IS NOT A THREAT! I’ll make sure of it. Chyna storms offChyna! Chyna! Where are you going? Chyna! Lillian lets out a smirk as the camera pans away vs.  QUALIFYING MATCH - winner gets a 1/6 chance at becoming women’s champion The two ladies lock up, headlock takedown by Jackie. Luna gets up and gets drilled with a running shoulder block. Jackie covers Luna, 1.… KICK OUT! Jackie grabs a handful of hair and snap mares Luna 3 times! Jackie delivers a snap suplex. 1.….2.… KICK OUT! Jackie goes to pick up Luna. EYE RAKE from Luna, Jackie can’t see, Jackie can’t see. Luna Vachon goes up top, missile dropkick! Luna Vachon picks Jackie up, Airplane spin! Jackie is dizzy, Luna Vachon remains in control when she nails Jackie with a DDT. 1...2... KICK OUT! Jackie barely gets her shoulder up. Luna lets out a scream and takes her frustration out on the referee. This gives Jackie the opening she needs, Jackie is on her feet! She delivers rights and lefts. Jackie whips Luna into the corner, running clothesline! Jackie gets in position for her TornadoDDT. HERE’S CHYNA! Chyna comes running out and yanks Jackie off of the ropes, Jackie tries to put up a fight but Chyna overpowers her, Chyna slams Jackie face first into the railing and makes her way to the back. Luna (whom was distracting the referee) quickly runs out of the ring and grabs Jackie. Luna forces Jackie inside the ring. SWINGING NECKBREAKER FTW!!!! 1.…2.…3 Luna wins! ::crowd boos:: The show closes as we see Jackie with one of the saddest faces ever. :sad: Thoughts….. Comments…. Feedback?!  |
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