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Post by Robert69 on Jun 19, 2010 3:12:27 GMT -5
Hey everyone, finally got started on Episode 1 of HCW, psyched for how it's turning out thus far. Hopefully I can FINISH it later today (It's 4 in the morning, need some sleep)...hope you enjoy the start enough to check back in later tonight or over the next couple days... Oh yeah, please be sure to leave comments, questions, concerns, thank you.  www.xrfhcw.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=picfed&thread=4 |
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Post by calhil8 on Jun 19, 2010 5:07:08 GMT -5
I like it so far man. I like the use of mattel however I dont know why you didnt use the commentators or the owners real names. I also think you could add a crowd to the side to give it more of an arena feel. I liked the commentary and some of the poses were really sharp however some werent so good. Looking forward to seeing the rest of it later
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Post by Robert69 on Jun 19, 2010 5:21:30 GMT -5
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Post by calhil8 on Jun 19, 2010 7:24:43 GMT -5
The next bit isnt up though  |
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Post by Robert69 on Jun 19, 2010 7:28:43 GMT -5
nah, I just have through the Primo intro done right now, I was just updating given that I posted 2 seperate parts for it
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Post by calhil8 on Jun 19, 2010 7:42:22 GMT -5
yeh i've seen all that look forward 2 the rest later
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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2010 8:20:04 GMT -5
nah, I just have through the Primo intro done right now, I was just updating given that I posted 2 seperate parts for it why would you post something that isn't complete? |
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Post by deskjet on Jun 19, 2010 11:11:22 GMT -5
to be honest, arena needs work, poses are stiff, and commentary is poorly proportioned. Definately work on the poses and arena a bit more.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2010 11:31:48 GMT -5
I think this says it all...  |
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Post by Robert69 on Jun 19, 2010 14:17:41 GMT -5
nah, I just have through the Primo intro done right now, I was just updating given that I posted 2 seperate parts for it why would you post something that isn't complete? Because it's about feedback, it starts the show, sure, but I'm a beginner, I want to IMPROVE, I want to know from those who have done it longer, and better, what they feel can be worked on...that's why... |
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Post by Robert69 on Jun 19, 2010 14:18:41 GMT -5
to be honest, arena needs work, poses are stiff, and commentary is poorly proportioned. Definately work on the poses and arena a bit more. Thank you. The Arena setup is being worked on at the present time and the poses and commentary I'll try to loosen up and even out a bit, you're show is awesome, btw. Thanks for your input, much appreciated. |
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Post by Robert69 on Jun 19, 2010 14:19:39 GMT -5
I think this says it all... That is a fantastic shot sir and I'm sorry if you don't like it or feel a "Headbutt to the balls" sums up my show thus far...but I laughed pretty damn hard just taking that picture, seeing it put into play is even better, to each their own though, and thanks for at least looking. I hope whatever issues you find are improved along the way. |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2010 15:30:42 GMT -5
Who says headbutt to the balls is a bad thing?
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Post by kc on Jun 19, 2010 16:02:06 GMT -5
if you want a reply, please post a COMPLETED show. thanks. |
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Post by Robert69 on Jun 19, 2010 17:11:20 GMT -5
Who says headbutt to the balls is a bad thing? I was assuming, its all how each individual fan takes it I suppose |
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Post by Robert69 on Jun 19, 2010 19:29:14 GMT -5
if you want a reply, please post a COMPLETED show. thanks. I look forward to finishing it and hearing what you have to say, and hopefully people will enjoy it, I got it all written out today and I'm very happy with it, but what can I say...the life of a filmmaker is hectic at best...I will have it done as I can get it, hopefully in the next 2-3 day have it 100%, but thank you. |
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Post by WarMachine08 on Jun 23, 2010 13:46:03 GMT -5
its looking pretty good so far. you are definitely heading in the right direction.
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Post by Byron F'N Saxton Fan on Jun 26, 2010 20:40:32 GMT -5
Nice to see your Fed debut, finally.
Good about your Show:
Entrance Way; I REALLY like it.
Basic Arena set-up. I like that your Wrestling area is nice and neat, but maybe put the Announce Table and/or some Barricades around it to kind of give the Arena a, well "Arena" feel, as it look skind of like you just put a Ring down and started taking Pics. Again though, it's still a nice Ring area.
The Wrestlers. While you had only one Match on an episode of your Show, I like the figures you used. I'm on the fence about Hornswoggle, as it looks like he may be going in his WWE direction, but I really did like the Wrestlers you used for your debut Match.
Announcing. The commentary was pretty good. I'm pretty picky when it comes to Promos and Commentary, so I would think yours is pretty good for me to really like it.
Bad about your Show:
Poses. Some are decent, but those are usually hindered by the Camera Angles you choose. Try to bend at least the part(s) of the figure that's hitting the opponent so it looks real.
Camera Angles. I touched on it above, but your Camera Angles were either too close to the Wrestlers or occasionally, too far away.
Kind of ripped off wwefan617's replying method, so sorry about that, wwefan. You have a ways to go, but I have expectations for HCW.
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Post by betibes on Jul 13, 2010 7:11:02 GMT -5
Nice start, I'm liking the commentary, but the poses are a bit stiff, good work though man.
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