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Post by joshuaggranberg on Jul 1, 2010 14:52:12 GMT -5
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Mr.W²
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Post by Mr.W² on Jul 1, 2010 15:01:54 GMT -5
Your Problem is Your Too Negative... imo its quite perfect, Other than the reactions starting to late, and the choppyness of the attacker on the last 2 frames, its near perfect.  |
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BRYAN
Superstar
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Post by BRYAN on Jul 1, 2010 15:32:33 GMT -5
What happened in the end?? Finish it bra  Otherwise, it's smooth not fidgety at all and i LOVE the airtime and i also you think you should have made the red stick respond before the blacks tick actually hits him. Nice Job! |
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Post by alexgg on Jul 2, 2010 11:35:17 GMT -5
Looks good man, jump is quite good but I prefer it off the turnbuckle and not the post.
Air time is good, but the arm is stiff, and the legs a little bit choppy at the end.
Needs finishing tho, looks good so far.
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