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Post by jonirocks on Aug 21, 2010 17:11:10 GMT -5
The other matches are all done and finished i just need to edit them.
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Post by TheNinthCloud on Aug 21, 2010 17:16:51 GMT -5
Please, put your shirts on. It didn't seem like you guys were all that serious in the beginning. Your attire looks nice. You guys need to work on selling & working a bit better together. Seems like the victoms of the moves have to guess what's happening.
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Post by jonirocks on Aug 21, 2010 23:21:08 GMT -5
Please, put your shirts on. It didn't seem like you guys were all that serious in the beginning. Your attire looks nice. You guys need to work on selling & working a bit better together. Seems like the victoms of the moves have to guess what's happening. You know you liked It.
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Post by TheNinthCloud on Aug 22, 2010 10:18:02 GMT -5
Please, put your shirts on. It didn't seem like you guys were all that serious in the beginning. Your attire looks nice. You guys need to work on selling & working a bit better together. Seems like the victoms of the moves have to guess what's happening. You know you liked It. No, it looked like a bunch of pre-pubescent kids who think they look cool cause they are wrestling in their backyard.
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Post by jonirocks on Aug 22, 2010 15:27:57 GMT -5
^ thats why i dont go Shirtless untill my abs come through.
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Post by TheNinthCloud on Aug 22, 2010 16:48:47 GMT -5
^ thats why i dont go Shirtless untill my abs come through. Don't go shirtless regardless. Abs would just make you look like a Douche.
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Post by jonirocks on Aug 22, 2010 16:51:17 GMT -5
^ thats why i dont go Shirtless untill my abs come through. Don't go shirtless regardless. Abs would just make you look like a Douche. Any Suggestions?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 22, 2010 19:57:01 GMT -5
I turned it off after 30 seconds honestly.
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Post by jonirocks on Aug 25, 2010 0:44:41 GMT -5
I turned it off after 30 seconds honestly. and why?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 25, 2010 0:47:48 GMT -5
You guys clearly were fooling around, and didn't really seem liked you cared. So I shut it off.
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Post by shiftyeyes on Aug 25, 2010 11:18:59 GMT -5
I know I'm not a regular poster or anything, but a suggestion that could improve the video is if you got rid of the audio, ie, you guys shouting and making it seem like a joke. It just makes the entire thing seem unprofessional. Keep the music though.
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Post by jayrod2009 on Aug 25, 2010 12:21:50 GMT -5
I will go ahead and try to be a little nicer about this. The kid in the white is obviously taking it seriously, somewhat. But with all the tween chipmunk laughter, it really killed everything. Well, actually, the trampoline, non-wrestling, hardcore wanna be killed it. I will say, the only part of the whole video I liked, was one of the screen shots that guy in white took to the head. So, thats like 4 seconds out of the whole video i liked. Lose the tweener laughter, and the trampoline, and you will be somewhere. Use the internet to study how to build and play out a match, with move sets, and some spots...
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Post by roewking93 on Sept 3, 2010 13:26:41 GMT -5
if you're amazing ausrtian, i think you have the same problem as me. you are wrestling with people who dont take what you want to do seriously. and usually people dont watch the whole match, so edit the video to be highlights of the match, and add some music
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Post by Wes. on Sept 4, 2010 2:08:40 GMT -5
I've never backyard wrestled before but I can still give you guys advice. You are lacking the ability to sell moves, and you do indeed need to plan this out a little better. It was kind of all over the place like it was in no way constructed in a proffesional manner. But you gotta start somewhere.
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Post by jonirocks on Sept 15, 2010 23:09:42 GMT -5
if you're amazing ausrtian, i think you have the same problem as me. you are wrestling with people who dont take what you want to do seriously. and usually people dont watch the whole match, so edit the video to be highlights of the match, and add some music Thats exactly my problem. People arnt as serious as I am.
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Post by thepedigree22 on Sept 19, 2010 20:18:11 GMT -5
yea didn't seem like a serious match. Just some guys pretending to be pro wrestlers.
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Post by jonirocks on Oct 28, 2010 22:26:37 GMT -5
any more thoughts???
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Post by Nick on Oct 31, 2010 6:24:39 GMT -5
I would have enjoyed your match, but I couldn't take your opponent seriously. You are a good wrestler, just get new opponents. I think that is about all the comments you will get here in WFigs BW section.
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Post by WCWA Online on Nov 7, 2010 23:32:46 GMT -5
Follow through with your weapon shots. Especially if you aren't using anything dangerous. If you're using stuff that falls apart easily, go wild. Just clobber each other with them. Not sure if that white thing towards the beginning was chalk or what, but you really should have just laid it in with that. This isn't ballet. you're going to get some scratches, some bruises.. Make it look good. If your weapons are going to fall apart when they are first touched, at least make it LOOK like it took a lot of effort to break it. Work on selling. Make things look like they are killing you.
Remember, pain is temporary. Pride is forever. Man up.
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Post by rohguy1265 on Nov 10, 2010 11:25:43 GMT -5
i liked it but the selling was awful. practice selling before posting matches it was also awkward with the laughing and stuff. dont talk during your matches.
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