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Post by mrrocky619 on Aug 29, 2010 16:19:10 GMT -5
powerbomb:  codebreaker:  sweet chin music:  i will try to make pivots more often and hopefully i will get better, advice and tips would be appreciated  |
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Post by thepedigree22 on Aug 29, 2010 16:25:27 GMT -5
Its good for a first, a bit choppy great air time.
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Post by johnmctossy on Aug 29, 2010 22:59:56 GMT -5
These animation were pretty good
Powerbomb: The lift looked kinda weird, the impact on the slam
was ok but there was no reaction
Codebreaker: The codebreaker was awesome except the black
sticks was to tall and the reaction could have been better
Sweet Chin Music: Plain and simply great
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Shikari Ferrari
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October 14th o2 arena newcastle <3
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Post by Shikari Ferrari on Aug 30, 2010 2:57:58 GMT -5
Powerbomb- Well spaced, fidgets here and there, a bit choppy on the lift for the powerbomb. 3/5
Codebreaker- It is my favourite of the 3, keep the characters legs together for jumps instead of making it try to be 3d, the jump was incredibly smooth, the reactions were off with him falling back on himslef, but it was good. 4/5
SCM- Plain and Simple, although it could need better reactions and less stiff positions it was great. 4/5
11/15
great for firsts, check out my ani if you have the time
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matfin123
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Post by matfin123 on Aug 30, 2010 11:29:59 GMT -5
they are good the codebreaker is the best though
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Post by alexgg on Aug 30, 2010 12:24:11 GMT -5
Powerbomb:
Looks good, I Like the movements in the backs but more work is needed with the legs.
You should try keep the legs together as it looks awkward sometimes when theyre apart like that
Taker's legs should bend for the pickup and again a little when he does the move to show pressure and so they dont look stiff.
Overall it looks smooth, and has good spacing, just need to work on the joint movements.
Codebreaker:
Again the legs look kinda weird cause they are facing two separate ways, when they should just be together or slightly apart. If that was fixed the jump would of had looked better.
Reactions looked funny, his arms were crazy behind him and his back was wavy. lol.
Sweet Chin Music:
Stiff Legs again, they should bend more instead of staying straight. And the arms shouldn't dangle like that either.
The reactions were weird due to the awkward back arching and the wavy arms again.
Overall:
You should try working on bending the legs more, trying to make it appear more 2-D with legs/arms together and not facing separate ways (unless needed)
And try to keep the arms and back from swaying around like they have no bones.
Otherwise fantastic work for firsts, they all look pretty good and you have good potential. And i look forward to see more from you.
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