Jesseversion1
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Oct 6, 2010 11:47:38 GMT -5
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Post by TheNinthCloud on Oct 6, 2010 13:29:14 GMT -5
Hehe, seems like your fail is my epic.  The speed of the (first) flip was way off compared to the force of the jump. He just slung his arms up and suddenly began to fly backwards. The shadows are obviously visible, but are not too distracting in my opinion. The one really big problem with that is if you forget to edit the shadows of the string when editing out string itself. The animation had a solid amount of frames and it was a bit stiff. nothing much to complain about, (as far as stiffness) but try to move the joints a bit more. The reaction from Jericho was sad. With that much momentum from Bourne he could've crushed his ribs. Overall it was decent. Not so much WHC worth, but easily a contender in the high flyer's division. Guess that's why you've got the belt. I just noticed the small ladder seemed to twitch around the time Bourne landed. Why the hell did it move? To end this reply I'd like to say the main problem would be physics. Overall: 7.0/10 (Because 6.9 would be weird) |
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Jesseversion1
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Oct 6, 2010 13:36:15 GMT -5
Hehe, seems like your fail is my epic. The speed of the (first) flip was way off compared to the force of the jump. He just slung his arms up and suddenly began to fly backwards. The shadows are obviously visible, but are not too distracting in my opinion. The one really big problem with that is if you forget to edit the shadows of the string when editing out string itself. The animation had a solid amount of frames and it was a bit stiff. nothing much to complain about, (as far as stiffness) but try to move the joints a bit more. The reaction from Jericho was sad. With that much momentum from Bourne he could've crushed his ribs. Overall it was decent. Not so much WHC worth, but easily a contender in the high flyer's division. Guess that's why you've got the belt. I just noticed the small ladder seemed to twitch around the time Bourne landed. Why the hell did it move? To end this reply I'd like to say the main problem would be physics. Overall: 7.0/10 ( Because 6.9 would be weird) Nah  , Thanks for a good replay. And havent been animating very much. The reacation was crap because i just wanted to be done with it. I hate only doing half of an ani. I might try animating again later. Maybe live but without sound so it will suck and no one will come Btw +1 for the good reply  |
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Post by TheNinthCloud on Oct 6, 2010 13:47:45 GMT -5
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jwsowner
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Post by jwsowner on Oct 6, 2010 14:31:31 GMT -5
^ hahaha lol.. Anyway, Jesse. It wasn't horrible. Right off the bat I noticed that the moonsaults need more pics. The squat was weird. In real life, when somebody swings there arms back for a jump, it doesn't look like that. The arms should go all the way back and the elbows should not be bent at all because it looks stiff, and it's unrealistic. If he would do too moonsaults, then it definitely needs a good squat and arm swing so that it looks realistic. To me, the third camera angle was unneeded. The impact wasn't your best, and it really needed a better reaction. I saw string on the canvas. And the little bit of reaction that was made was kinda choppy. Don't worry dude, everybody has there off days. I get lots of those. Some ani's I would never upload because of that. lol. 7.5/10 |
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Post by Wes. on Oct 6, 2010 21:42:11 GMT -5
Umm, it wasn't all that bad. You can do way better though. Nice try Jesse, it look very hard to make aswell. The only things that were kind of fail about it was the speed and the reaction.
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