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Post by Ramos on Dec 1, 2010 16:31:59 GMT -5
 Bio:Name: John Morrison
Hometown: Los Angeles, California
Height: 6 ft 1 in
Weight: 223 lbs
Finisher: Starship Pain, Flying Chuck
Accomplishments: WWE Tag Team Champion, World Tag Team Champion, ECW Champion, Intercontinental Champion[/size][/u] |
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Ramos
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Post by Ramos on Dec 1, 2010 16:32:31 GMT -5
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Post by duan on Dec 1, 2010 22:23:36 GMT -5
RAMOS! ftwwwww
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Jack.
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Post by Jack. on Dec 2, 2010 4:08:58 GMT -5
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Post by TheNinthCloud on Dec 2, 2010 17:18:38 GMT -5
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Post by Ramos on Dec 2, 2010 17:42:21 GMT -5
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It's been a pretty hectic week guys, sorry for the lack of updates. I spent alot of the week in meeting with Sheamus and Ron (Killings) talking about the direction Sheamus and I wanted to go in with what should be our final match against each other. However I got a surprising voicemail when I arrived back at my hotel room. The voicemail was from John Laurinaitis who said he needed to speak to me in the arena before Raw. I'm pretty worried about the meeting since I've not really had any experience with John but the stories tell themselves. It's also a well know fact in the locker room that John doesn't really talk to talent unless he has something planned for them or unless they are on their way out of the door. Could JoMo be leaving the 'E? Or is the Guru of Greatness looking at a possible push? I'll keep you guys posted. Happy Reading.[/center][/quote]
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Post by Mike Bockwinkel on Dec 2, 2010 18:13:58 GMT -5
I think this is really good so far, I would've liked for you to start a little further back for Morrison, like a bigger timeframe for him,(teaming with Miz, ECW Champion, debuting with MNM, or even Tough Enough).
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Post by Jack. on Dec 3, 2010 4:49:33 GMT -5
Nice first update, I'm pretty sure it's going to result in a push, hence the title of the diary.
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Post by Ramos on Dec 3, 2010 15:19:38 GMT -5
[/u] "So here we are, I was so close to being John Morrison 2010 King of the Ring winner. Instead I am out here in front of the WWE Universe as John Morrison 2010 King of the Ring runner up. Now I know Sheamus will come out here and brag about how he is the "King" but we all know that he only won that match because I had wrestled one more match than him.
But I didn't come out here to whine, as that's something Sheamus would do. I came out to here to inform Sheamus of the fact that we are now 1-1 and to challenge him to a match at TLC."
*At which point Sheamus came out to a chorus of boos*
Sheamus:[/u] Morrison, I don't know where you get off thinking that you are in my league. I defeated you convincingly last week because as you said I am the King of the Ring. You may have pinned me at Survivor Series but you definately did not beat me. You only got the victory in that match because of the actions of an extremely stu-
*I cut him off*
JoMo:[/u] Wait wait, you are saying I only beat you because of Santino's interference? Sheamus I had you beat in that match and would have picked up the victory even if Santino hadn't come to ringside. You rely on your size and think that because you are a genetic freak you will be able to beat everyone. But you're wrong, you can't defeat me fairly.
Sheamus:[/u] I can't defeat you fairly? Well that's just a lie, I beat you in that ring last week.
JoMo:[/u] You beat me after I had already came out on top in 2 matches. And you had only competed in one so far. The fact of the matter is Sheamus, I'm better than you and you know I am. But if you are so confident of being able to beat me again why don't you accept my challenge for a match at TLC?
Sheamus:[/u] Fine, if I have to beat you again I will. But Morrison I will tear you apart and after our match at TLC you won't be able to enter that ring again.
*Sheamus then left to a chorus of boos from the audience*
I was extremely happy with the segment tonight. And I am eagerly anticipating the run up to our match at TLC as our last two encounters have been great matches and I have a feeling that the more we work with each other the better our chemistry will be.
Till next time guys,
Happy Reading[/center][/quote]
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Post by Jord on Dec 3, 2010 18:19:23 GMT -5
You've picked a good time to pull off a WreSpi because the board seems to have died down with them. I'm looking forward to where you're going to go with the JoMo/Sheamus feud. You've got off to a good start and you're putting just the right amount of detail. Looking forward to TLC and onwards, I just hope you don't have JoMo go on a winning streak and win the WWE Championship in a few weeks as some people push their WreSpi character to the moon and back. Good luck!
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Post by DTP. on Dec 3, 2010 22:09:30 GMT -5
Hopefully you make the John Morrison and Sheamus feud unique. That promo was pretty well written in terms of dialogue, but the out of character side of Morrison seems generic and optimistic. Be more visual and imaginative, perhaps Morrison feels he should have performed better, or is not so sure where his career is going. Hope Morrison and Sheamus don't get the TLC match at TLC either.
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Post by Matt on Dec 3, 2010 23:25:24 GMT -5
I think this would have been a little more fun if you had started from an earlier point; regardless, this should still be a great diary. It is nice to see how excited Morrison is over his feud with Sheamus. I was actually pretty surprised that Morrison and Sheamus did not get into a brawl, but at the same time it might be nice to see the two wait until TLC to fully explode on one another. I really hope you can add a little more serious edge to this feud because it needs some intensity to really get Morrison over. My biggest complaint is how similar Sheamus and Morrison sounded in the segment. Trying to get the different character’s voices across is the hardest part in a dairy like this, but I am sure after a while we will see growth in that area. In the end, I really liked the write up and I am eager to see where you go from here.
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Post by legendkiller8 on Dec 4, 2010 14:22:02 GMT -5
Good entry, I'm hooked.
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Post by TheNinthCloud on Dec 4, 2010 19:29:46 GMT -5
Interesting, I say this a lot, but this time I mean it. I'll be following.
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Post by shiftyeyes on Dec 6, 2010 7:20:21 GMT -5
Some solid diary entries so far dudeski, liking this a lot! Keep it up man!
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Post by Mike Bockwinkel on Dec 6, 2010 13:49:15 GMT -5
This may be just me nitpicking, but I don't care for the "happy reading" ending.
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Post by ✖ AJ on Dec 6, 2010 15:07:52 GMT -5
Sorry for the lack of reply towards this so far. However, I do think these are some good summarized entries with some decent work in dialogue. JoMo is a great, talented wrestler but I've never found him that great with microphone skills. So that might be a challenge throughout this. I hope that Morrison eventually gets a push, but I hope he doesn't get rushed.
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