Nick
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Post by Nick on Dec 6, 2010 23:17:02 GMT -5
Newest (Credit to alex and KV3 for the sticks and the ring!:  Older:  |
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Post by thepedigree22 on Dec 7, 2010 20:38:03 GMT -5
its good for a first (ive seen alot of bad first ones) its very stiff and choppy. The fall was slow and bad. I hope this helps
I give it a 8/10 for a first
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Nick
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Post by Nick on Dec 7, 2010 20:44:32 GMT -5
its good for a first (ive seen alot of bad first ones) its very stiff and choppy. The fall was slow and bad. I hope this helps I give it a 8/10 for a first Thanks. How do I speed it up? |
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Post by thepedigree22 on Dec 7, 2010 20:48:46 GMT -5
on the side where it says play and stop and repeat. next to that there is a bar that starts off with 12. depending on how long your animation is is the speed u pout it. I would recommend 16 speed
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Post by Deleted on Dec 9, 2010 20:45:20 GMT -5
I run my speed at 18. It tends to help me smoothen my animations out so they aren't to fast or to slow.
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Fave
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Post by Fave on Dec 10, 2010 0:23:17 GMT -5
Pretty good for a first from what ive seen.
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Nick
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Post by Nick on Dec 10, 2010 1:31:48 GMT -5
Thanks for all the nice comments!!!! I will definitely make more!
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Post by Ian on Dec 10, 2010 3:31:45 GMT -5
well you are not like amazing. but you have got to be one of the best beginners ive seen. its stiff, choppy and fidgets. there are not enough frames in the animation itself and you should put the legs together making the animation 2-d. Choppy- when an animation doesn't run smoothly Stiffness - when the joints are not moved enough Fidgetyness - when the joints move randomly. like going in 1 direction then another making it look unhuman. hope i could help  keep going and dont leave because of activity im on everyday soo i'll leave a comment  |
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Nick
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Post by Nick on Dec 10, 2010 20:43:00 GMT -5
well you are not like amazing. but you have got to be one of the best beginners ive seen. its stiff, choppy and fidgets. there are not enough frames in the animation itself and you should put the legs together making the animation 2-d. Choppy- when an animation doesn't run smoothly Stiffness - when the joints are not moved enough Fidgetyness - when the joints move randomly. like going in 1 direction then another making it look unhuman. hope i could help keep going and dont leave because of activity im on everyday soo i'll leave a comment Wow. Thanks for the comment!! I've seen your anis. You are awesome!! |
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Post by Nick on Dec 10, 2010 21:12:32 GMT -5
Here is my newest animation. A dropkick. I hate it.... Please give constructive criticism!! Enjoy!! ;D  |
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Nick
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Post by Nick on Dec 11, 2010 2:01:33 GMT -5
One MOAR!!!  |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 11, 2010 10:52:50 GMT -5
The general movement of the hurricanrana is very nice. Although the animation is choppy and fidgety. Which is an exception for the newcomers in pivot. But if you want I've got nothing to do this winter since it's snowing, I can help you with animations.
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Nick
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Post by Nick on Dec 11, 2010 13:38:13 GMT -5
The general movement of the hurricanrana is very nice. Although the animation is choppy and fidgety. Which is an exception for the newcomers in pivot. But if you want I've got nothing to do this winter since it's snowing, I can help you with animations. I would very much appreciate that! |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 11, 2010 22:34:16 GMT -5
Alright man. You got MSN?
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Nick
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Post by Nick on Dec 11, 2010 22:40:37 GMT -5
No. I have a facebook though.
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Post by picfedguy on Dec 17, 2010 23:33:27 GMT -5
As Famous Man said the movements during the move were very nice. Some thing you should work on though, see in the jump how the Blue's stick's legs were all over the place? Well you need to do your best to keep them in place, also try to use a consistent amount of frames, like during the jump you hardly used any then during the move you used much more. Stiffness is a bit of a problem, like look at the Yellow stick during the move and see how little the joints bend. Also always do the reactions and don't skip them as doing that hurts the animations a lot. Lot of potential here though, just keep trying and hopefully you'll start to pick things up, also not needed but you should maybe go to the first aid thread and pick out a style to use, not a must but I'd recommend that you do.
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Post by matfin123 on Dec 19, 2010 11:04:16 GMT -5
you have good first animations they get better as they go on and i like the movements
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Nick
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Post by Nick on Dec 24, 2010 16:04:57 GMT -5
Thanks for all the comments!!
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Post by alexgg on Dec 24, 2010 18:58:40 GMT -5
Not bad man, try spacing it out more with extra frames.
The joints should move more too, dont just sping the arms and legs, bend them too.
Good start though.
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Nick
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Post by Nick on Dec 24, 2010 22:58:34 GMT -5
Sorry if this is a noob question. But, what is spacing?
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