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Post by jonirocks on Dec 24, 2010 3:04:06 GMT -5
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Post by darthwwewwe on Dec 24, 2010 3:07:17 GMT -5
Your Getting Better.It Was Slow And Really Stiff But It Had A Nice Flow To It.Reactions Are Ok But A Bit Weak.The Impact Was Great Imo
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matfin123
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Post by matfin123 on Dec 24, 2010 4:30:04 GMT -5
good flow and and creative idea bit of rust but good animation.
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Jesseversion1
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Dec 24, 2010 4:49:45 GMT -5
Way better from what i last remember seeing from you. Keep it up.
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Post by alexgg on Dec 24, 2010 18:48:16 GMT -5
Its not bad, improvments have been made.
Try to keep the joints moving as its stiff, but the animation is smooth.
The spacing is good, again its the stiffness that lets it down.
For example the way Green sits there hardly moving,and when hes hit dosnt change shape too much, the back needs to have more movement to make it look a little more realistic.
The jump isnt bad but could have more bending at the knees, I liked the movement mid air into the kick.
Reactions were slow and stiff again.
Not a bad animation, spacing is good, like I said its just stiff.
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Post by picfedguy on Dec 26, 2010 6:58:11 GMT -5
Ladies and gentlemen, your world champion! Animation was pretty good actually, joints were well bent though in a couple frames it looks like you skipped them. It was smooth though a few more frames here and there wouldn't of hurt. Some parts are very fidgety too, like look at the legs during the jump - their all over the place! Both sticks were kind of missing a decent impact and reaction. Overall better then your other animations if I remember correctly just don't forget to bend the joints and throw in a few more frames to smoothen it out for now.
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