knlanimations
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Joined on: Dec 27, 2009 1:40:27 GMT -5
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Post by knlanimations on Dec 30, 2010 1:22:44 GMT -5
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Post by thepedigree22 on Dec 30, 2010 11:43:04 GMT -5
wasn't bad, the running was ok, the animation was stiff and there was a small reaction. i give it a 6/10 not bad thougn
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Post by picfedguy on Jan 1, 2011 8:01:14 GMT -5
Honestly, there is a lot of potential here. First off though do post in .GIF format if you can, you can still post them on youtube just if you could provide a link to the .GIF version that would be good. The running was really considering that your new(?). Though the back was extremely stiff the leg and arm movements were fantastic. It did feel a bit slow however so I'd advise that you cut a few frames. The flip thing to the power bomb was alright just the person doing the power bomb didn't have any jump preparation sso it just looked like he floated up. Reactions seemed kind of have done too. Overall I really like the smoothness and movements in this animation - you just need to work on your stiffness and then a little later on get started on spacing. As I said before though, a lot of potential here.
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Post by alexgg on Jan 1, 2011 9:26:28 GMT -5
go to PivotUp.com to make your gifs into links to post here, makes them easier to watch.
or sign up to a photobucket account or something.
anyway animation is pretty good, the spacing is there and the movements seem good.
theres stiffness throughout, but if you do more animations I think you'll do good.
the run looks good to me, your bending the knees which is good and moving the arms, although it needs more work in expanding the limbs in and out.
The jump looks effortless, no actual jump appears, needs bending of the legs a few frames before
I like the idea at the end although animation is cut short.
Overall it looks good.
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