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Post by The Immortal One on Jan 5, 2011 15:41:35 GMT -5
Hey people, My third animation so far:  I'm happy not really that happy with the result, but it was a good practice. I'm not really happy with the SSP itself. The RKO turned out good IMO.  Please tell me what you think so I can improve myself. Thanks for looking!  -Coenronaldo |
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Post by picfedguy on Jan 8, 2011 1:38:14 GMT -5
Might want to resize the animation a bit. First off I'd say that you should try and get a consistent amount of frames going, like the jump looked rather choppy and way done in a few frames where as the SSP was quite smooth in compassion and had a lot more frames. Stiffness is a problem also, like look at the Blue's arm, for the better part of the animation the elbow and forearm joints aren't moved at all. Also, you should always do the reactions as they are just as important as any other part of the animation. Mainly work on using a consistent amount of frames and the stiffness for now, hope to see more from you in the future.
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Post by The Immortal One on Jan 8, 2011 5:15:53 GMT -5
Might want to resize the animation a bit. First off I'd say that you should try and get a consistent amount of frames going, like the jump looked rather choppy and way done in a few frames where as the SSP was quite smooth in compassion and had a lot more frames. Stiffness is a problem also, like look at the Blue's arm, for the better part of the animation the elbow and forearm joints aren't moved at all. Also, you should always do the reactions as they are just as important as any other part of the animation. Mainly work on using a consistent amount of frames and the stiffness for now, hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks man, Now this really helps me. Thanks for the comment! |
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Post by The Immortal One on Jan 8, 2011 7:26:27 GMT -5
Here is my new animation:  Please Rate! Thanks! Also, from now on, I will only post my new animations in this topic. |
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Post by thepickledpigeon on Jan 8, 2011 8:15:24 GMT -5
i think it should be slowed down a little bit. but anyway good job
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Post by The Immortal One on Jan 9, 2011 5:04:38 GMT -5
Here is my new animation:  Like always, please rate and tell me what you think about it. Thanks! |
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Post by picfedguy on Jan 14, 2011 3:35:42 GMT -5
(On your newest animation...) Okay, the animation seems to have a more consistent speed throughout which is good but there were still some parts that could of used some more frames, like the jump and the reactions. Though still getting a bit stiff at times there is improvement over your first animation. The Green stick during the mid-air part was really nice, looked smooth with all the frames flowing together, you should try to get the whole of the animation as well done as that. Reaction could of used a few more frames though the idea was good. Overall an improvement, still some of the basic stuff for you to iron out though an improvement nonetheless.
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