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Post by tumbleweedtrumpet on Feb 2, 2011 12:23:48 GMT -5
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tirva
Main Eventer
wTw pic fedder
Joined on: Apr 24, 2002 15:47:49 GMT -5
Posts: 1,999
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Post by tirva on Feb 6, 2011 9:08:10 GMT -5
Everything seems so rushed. Edge got hit with a DDT then got up and tossed Balls head first into the buckle made no sense. You should try and edit out the string with the touch up tools from an editing program. Focus more on those big poses like when Edge speared Ball through the plank. That should be your best pose of the match! Take your time and try to zoom in more with your camera and back up the position of the camera. Try using more creative camera angles like the one in your champ's entrance! RVD & Sabu! SWEET!@!!!! Don't be afraid to have a ton of pictures for your main event match. You should think about getting a ring. This was better than your first episode. Try and work on improving at least one thing with every show. Your fed has some good potential. Even take your figures to different parts of your house to film things so it's like a backstage segment. Keep working at it dude!
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Post by averagejoe on Feb 6, 2011 9:21:30 GMT -5
It looked rushed. And CCW was kinda made in early 2007 by mbg1211. Work on taking a few shots per camera angle. Its alright I suppose but put more time into it. And work on a bit more on your posters. 6.2/10
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Post by deskjet on Feb 6, 2011 9:49:13 GMT -5
Your effort is noted. But I can't take this seriously because of several things. Number one, there are tons of wrestling figures out there, good ones, that could be nicely customized or just used in place of the dollar store figures. I understand, that may be your preference but it just looks tacky. Your arena needs work but I've seen worse.
It's understandable that not everyone can edit string, but when you'r done using it, I don't want to see it hanging around, or your hand in the shot for that matter. Just some advice, and perhaps view and reply to some other feds. Welcome to the community.
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Post by tumbleweedtrumpet on Feb 6, 2011 10:17:36 GMT -5
Thanks guys. I'm a beginner, and will try to make it better. When I am shooting. it seems longer.
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