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Post by Ace Bennett on Mar 21, 2011 18:58:51 GMT -5
This has potential, but you need to slow down. Proofread your stuff to make sure there are no spelling and grammar issues. Keep it up man. Glad to see Ashton in the running for the championship right away.
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Post by stonecold316 on Mar 21, 2011 19:16:47 GMT -5
Intrigues me so with what you're doing here. Edwards debut is one i'll be atching VERY CLOSELY. .
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Post by Deleted on Mar 22, 2011 7:26:45 GMT -5
Location for Show #3 Announced! The show that Tyler Edwards will debut, will be in the Hammerstein Ballroom. The show will feature former ECW Star & current TNA Star, Tommy Dreamer will be competing in the Main Event. Tickets are already being sold. - Matt "Surge" Hardy |
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Post by Red Dragon on Mar 22, 2011 13:28:49 GMT -5
Damn man Cascade is getting the big push. He gets put in title contention, attacks four guys and defeats Wisp in the main event. I'm actually quite like this, its kinda basic though but it suits as is just a promotion the Hardyz set up. I'm unsure about the Hardyz using thier Omega names. Loving the title torunment thing way better than just brackets. Could do with a graphic. Keep this up and good luck.
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Post by The Natural Eddy Valintino on Mar 22, 2011 14:00:31 GMT -5
I love this sim! Not a lot of times we see different sims like this one. I also love the write up you did for my guy. The first show was great, can't wait to see the next one.
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Post by jonirocks on Mar 22, 2011 14:40:13 GMT -5
i dont know if its to late to sign up but il give it a shot anyway.
Ring Name: Amazing Austrian
Place of Residence: Hallein,Austria
Gimmick: A guy who speaks in an austrian accent. Lived in an Austrian Hood all his life till he escaped that life by immigrating to the US. (rags to riches kinda)
Preferred Wrestling Style: high Flying
Finisher: PaySnow(paydirt)
Face
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Post by CF9™ on Mar 22, 2011 15:38:58 GMT -5
I agree with Ace, start proofreading these and it could be loads better.
I liked the opening segment, good way to get things rolling. One gripe: 70 people, even for an indy show, isn't that much. If it's headed by the Hardy Boys in their home town, I'd expect there to be more. Terrell Wiley's match was short but simple, I can see him being a big big heel. Shane Helms' match was okay, I could see his little feud with Verbicide lasting long. If Cascade doesn't win the title after that, I don't know who will. He just beat Jeff freaking Hardy on Omega. Keep it up, man.
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Post by stonecold316 on Mar 23, 2011 18:51:22 GMT -5
Cascade is my pick for OMEGA World Champion now. Beats Jeff, attacks 4 OTHER GUYS, that's how i like it, focused, and unpredictable.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 24, 2011 16:46:21 GMT -5
OMEGA
Show # 2
As the second show starts, we see around 200 people in the Recreation Hall in Cameron, North Carolina. Matt Hardy came out and welcomed us to OMEGA.
Matt Hardy: Welcome to OMEGA! I will like to thank you for joining us tonight. We have a special surprise for you.
The crowd cheered.
Hardy: Tonight we will crown the New Frontiers champion right here, right now.
The crowd went crazy.
Terell Wiley def. Amazin Austrian to WIN the OMEGA New Frontiers championship after hitting Discriminate This!
Amazing Austrian made his debut, but had no luck as Wiley attacked him. Following the match, Jay Blake came out and attacked Wiley. Blake stayed in the ring for his match.
Jay Blake def. Jason Brockton after hitting Black Wind
Match of the night. Blake's high-flying style made the moves look harder. After the match, Blake did a belt motion on his waist.
A promo was shown for the debut of Tyler Edwards next week.
Jack Joseph def. The Roadblock after hitting a DDT off the Top Rope
After the match, The Roadblock got up and started to attack Joseph. Shane Helms came down to break it up but Verbicide came from under the ring and hit Helms with a Chair. The ring then cleared up for the next match.
Ashton Vengeance def. Dr. Punisher after hitting Extinction
The match was not that great but it was okay. There were a couple of botches. After the match, Matt Hardy came down to announce the next weeks guest.
Hardy: Next week, we will be holding a show from the Hammerstein. Our special guest will be Tommy Dreamer. Matt then got ready for our Main Event.
Cascade def. Surge after hitting Oblivion
Cascade was showing how good he is. Surge went for a clothesline but Cascade hit Oblivion. After the match, the lights went out and when they came back on, Cascade was down.
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Post by CF9™ on Mar 24, 2011 20:28:29 GMT -5
Glad Wiley won a title, man! I like Jay Blake as well, fued between him and Wiley? Verbicide and Shane Helms is an interesting angle, I hope to see them have a realgoo grudge match. Oooh, they're already going to the Hammerstein? Not realistic but the show should be crazy. Wow, Cascade is on a roll, don't know how I feel about him beating both Hardy's with barely any build up but whatev. The ending was very interesting. Overall, this was an okay show, that with a little bit more detail, could have been much better. Keep it up, dog!
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Post by stonecold316 on Mar 24, 2011 20:29:56 GMT -5
Cascade being pushed like this is AWESOME.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Mar 24, 2011 20:54:17 GMT -5
A good show. Glad Ashton picked up the win, but seems like Cascade will be the clear man to win the title. I like the push, but really think it would work better as a face. That's just me though. Good show.
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Post by Red Dragon on Mar 29, 2011 10:33:39 GMT -5
Sorry about not replying earlier. Like I said before I like the simple-ness of the write up as it goes well with the promotion feel. I really don't like the random crowning of the "New Frontiers" champion. I would have just stuck with one title. I like the Jack/Roadblock match and aftermath sets up perfectly for a tag match. Unsure about Hammerstien so soon would have liked big build up to it and why book it if your only getting 200 people. Cascade winning is huge, I an't gonna complain about my character beating both Hardyz but I see CF9's point. Good luck and keep this up.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 29, 2011 18:42:24 GMT -5
Breaking News!
As of today, March 29 2011, OMEGA wrestling will have several individual teams (Each with 3). At the end of each month, the 3 partners will fight each other in the Main Event of the supershow.
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Post by jonirocks on Mar 30, 2011 21:16:36 GMT -5
^ Finally. Something the AA can Win.  |
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Post by stonecold316 on Mar 30, 2011 21:24:38 GMT -5
Stumps me as to why Willow wouldn't be in Management.
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Post by TheNinthCloud on Apr 1, 2011 14:06:24 GMT -5
Decent shows, but it's way to short and lacks detail. Give us some promos and segments, also.
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Post by stonecold316 on Apr 10, 2011 17:34:55 GMT -5
not to be rude, but, any idea on the next show?
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Post by Deleted on Apr 27, 2011 19:55:29 GMT -5
OMEGA: Live at the Hammerstein!
The doors open and we see about 2,000 fans waiting for the show to start. Matt Hardy came out and greeted us to OMEGA. He then announced that tonight's show will be in dedication to Larry Sweeny. Matt then asked for a moment of silence. After a few seconds, Matt told us that it is time for our opening contest.
The Roadblock def. Dr. Punisher after hitting a Big Splash
After the match, Roadblock got up and conitnued to attack Punisher. Jack Joseph then came down to the ring and saved Punisher. Joseph then told Roadblock that he wants a match at the next show. Roadblock accepted Jack's match and all three men left the ring for the next match.
Ashton Vengeance def. Amazin Austrian after hitting Extiction
After the match, Ashton got on the mic and told the crowd that they need to bow down to him. He got a good amount of Heat. He continued to say that he is better then everybody in wrestling. He told the crowd that he is going to win the OMEGA Championship. He then left the ring to much heat.
Tyler Edwards came out after Ashton and asked the crowd to welcome Tommy Dreamer to the arena. Tommy Dreamer came out and got a good pop. Tommy was about to get on the mic but Terrell Wiley came out and interupted him. Wiley told Dreamer that he could beat him in a second. Edwards then told Wiley to stop telling Dreamer he sucks. Wiley then punched Edwards but as soon as Edwards got up, Dreamer stopped the fight. Dreamer then told both men to setle their differences in a Extreme Rules match in tonight's Main Event. Edwards accepted but Wiley got cocky and told Edwards that he will put his New Frontiers title on the line. Dreamer told them that he will be the Special Referee. All three men left the ring so that we could start outr next match.
Cascade def. Antonio Rossi after hitting Oblivion
Intermission
After Intermission, the fans got ready for our Main Event of the night.
Terrel Wiley vs Tyler Edwards went to a No Contest after both men got Dreamer DDT'ed through a Table.
After the match, Tommy Dreamer got up and thanked the fans for the night. A 'ECW' chant broke out in the arena. Tommy Dreamer signed autographs to end the show. |
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Post by Red Dragon on Apr 28, 2011 6:04:11 GMT -5
Nice tribute to Sweeney, nice win for Roadblock and a nice set up for next time match with Jack, no match write up really sucks, Ashton's win and promo was nicley done. The Dreamer promo was nice and in good detail too, sets up the main event nicley, another win for the on roll Cascade is always a good thing but I feel you need match write up's even if its short, nice main event unsure about the finish but it kinda works as does the stip because of the promotion you have here, good luck and keep this up.
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