Squatch
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Post by Squatch on Jul 14, 2011 23:35:21 GMT -5
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Post by ctln4rko on Jul 15, 2011 7:18:52 GMT -5
Finally! Lol and you said you were tired but you stayed up two hours to do this. Great match, I liked Kendrick vs London better. In a few places, edit string a little more carefully and take a few more pictures because sometimes I didn't even know a move was starting or the middle of the move was missing. Also, sometimes the pictures were blurry.Great show! A decent simple arena as well.
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RatedWWEF
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Post by RatedWWEF on Jul 15, 2011 12:54:55 GMT -5
Really in all honestly you needed to STICK with this, finish the filming, the string was edited out poorly, there was no entrance way attempted and we even discussed that on the blogtv. The matches didn't even last long enough to be classed as matches to be honest. You had some good ideas but I expected more from you Ben, even if the ppv was going to take you at least a month or 2 to complete you should have stuck with it and got it done and I read your 'match card' and it looked good, but again there was no build up, no shows. What would have been better was to film short little segments building up the PPV instead of jumping in at the deep end. Sorry Ben, but from what I have seen from you in the past I did expect more.
Lets just hope your next show will be longer and will look as though you were bothered. Thanks for posting though.
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Post by Squatch on Jul 15, 2011 14:12:32 GMT -5
This show had to be stopped because of an issue I had. Just sit tight because a better KoH show will be out soon.  |
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Post by RatedWWEF on Jul 15, 2011 14:18:01 GMT -5
As long as it wasn't too bad of an issue  Looking forward to it dude cause I know you can do a lot better. |
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Post by brm on Jul 15, 2011 23:12:52 GMT -5
Ok, FINALLY we see something new from you. First off, I would try to cover the VHS tapes with black construction paper so that you cannot tell they actually are VHS tapes. Flair on commentary seems a bit odd for an indy fed, but maybe you're going for a "passing the torch" type thing. Anyway, RVD vs. Malenko is a pretty original match up, and I'm looking forward to what you're going to do with them. Ok, I am very glad to see you using string. Even if it's rather hurriedly edited, the fact that you used it enhances the show a ton. Haha, I like your Chikara sized ring. Kind of odd seeing stars like RVD and Malenko in a Chikara sized ring, but whatever. HOLY that chair landing was sick. I must say, I've never seen somebody keep a chair on their head and keep wrestling before, and that suplex with it was scary. Nice to see Lethal show up, as he does not get much mileage in pic feds, if any at all. "I hope you can see space travel because I will be destroying that man." Kendrick is almost reaching Bryteren levels with this promo! Ok, I'm really looking forward London / Kendrick. Some of these 'ranna poses, especially that sunset flip powerbomb on the outside were very hard to follow. You might want to keep the number of 'ranna poses down until you master posing a bit more, because they look bad compared to your diving poses and others from before. Also, it looked like both men teleported from the ramp to the other side of the ring right after that move. Both matches were pretty short, and I could tell Kendrick was going to win by how hyped he was by everyone, but overall, this was a good showing. You obviously are still new at this, but if you continue to actually put out shows for the SAME PROMOTION on a consistent basis, you will be polished in no time. Keep going with this fed.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 17, 2011 19:00:09 GMT -5
I liked this show Ben, you're wise to listen to the criticisms and nobody here is trying to steer you wrong as others have in the past. However, there were just a couple of minor issues. I agree with Samcro that a few more interviews/segments can make your matches more important. The string was pretty poorly edited, but I understand that's not always easy.
Beyond that, though the matches were pretty solid and to me a decent length. The Kendrick/London match was quite fun with high paced, frantic energy. However people missed the most obvious issue. You had RVD submit because Malenko hooked in the submission for a second time... But he actually hooked it on a different leg. It would have been better had he actually hooked the half crab on the same leg again. Psychology is the most important part of the match, so focus on that.
You can improve the arena all day long, but if the matches lack psychology, it's pointless. I've seen people with super fancy arenas and pics and horrible matches because they don't make sense. Focus on the things you can improve, such as that. Otherwise your matches were fun and the show was short, but the idea is solid. Build it up, improve it, you can do it.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 17, 2011 20:07:16 GMT -5
Ok Ben I see you sticking to your KOH fed and thats good news. I enjoyed the matches just kinda a weird bare bones setup when we already seen a pretty nifty setup before. Please stick with this fed and build up a following before jumping again and you'll be able to go places with this.
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