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Aug 3, 2011 20:53:32 GMT -5
Post by dustinpwi on Aug 3, 2011 20:53:32 GMT -5
Credz to alex for background and ring
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Aug 4, 2011 0:13:50 GMT -5
Post by -The Autistic Animator- w.S.e on Aug 4, 2011 0:13:50 GMT -5
Nice One Dustin
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Aug 4, 2011 12:08:08 GMT -5
Post by dustinpwi on Aug 4, 2011 12:08:08 GMT -5
thanks anymore?
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Aug 6, 2011 2:02:41 GMT -5
Post by picfedguy on Aug 6, 2011 2:02:41 GMT -5
These are really really good man. ssp; So the jump looked nice, smooth, spaced and not too stiff. The take off though again it was smooth and such the movements looked off, like the legs didn't really extend at all so it just looks like the stick flew up in the air as apposed to jumping, the air time looked off too, like there was a fridget in one the frames and i dunno, the spacing looked a bit forced as apposed to just flowing together, in particular the fall, it's because you need more frames on the way down and you moved the back joint a bit too quickly and on the way up it was on an angle but on the way down you just ha the stick go straight down instead of on a slight angle. Reactions and impact were good though. Corkscrew moonsault; Jump to start off was great though the back looked a bit stiff and there was a slight fridget in the legs. The lift off was nice too but the leg movements looked off, the back was still stiff and the arms could have used some more movement. Air time was pretty good but the arms were really fridgety and the back movements were too fast, the reactions were nice though did look a tad rushed. Overall you have some very nice animations you just need to iron out all the smaller things like occasional stiffness, fridgetyness and movements, once you have those down your animations will be much better.
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