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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2011 6:06:15 GMT -5
Alberto Del Rio | Alex Riley | Beth Pheonix | Brie Bella |CM Punk | David Otunga | Dolph Ziggler | Goldust | Heath Slater | John Cena | John Morrison | JTG | Kane| Kelly Kelly | Kofi Kingston | Layla | Mason Ryan | Michael McGillicutty | Maryse Nikki Bella | Natalya | R-Truth | Rey Mysterio | Santino Marella | The Miz | Tyson Kidd | William Regal | Yoshi Tatsu A.J | Alicia Fox | Big Show | Christian | Cody Rhodes | Curt Hawkins | Drew McItyre | Evan Bourne | Eve | Ezekiel Jackson | Kaitlyn | Kharma | Jack Swagger | Jey Uso | Jimmy Uso | Jinder Mahal | Johnny Curtis | Jutsin Gabriel | Mark Henry | Primo | Randy Orton | Sheamus | Sin Cara | Tamina | Ted DiBiase | The Great Khali | Trent Barretta |
Undertaker | Wade Barrett | Zack Ryder Abyss | AJ Styles | Alex Shelly | Anarquia | Angelina Love | Austin Aries | Bobby Roode | Brian Kendrick | Bully Ray | Chris Sabin | Christopher Daniels | Crimson | D'Angelo Dinero | Devon | Doug Williams | Eric Young | Gunner | Hernandez | James Storm | Jaqueline | Jeff Hardy | Jesse Neal | Kazarian | Kurt Angle | Madison Rayne | Maguns | Matt Hardy | Matt Morgan | Mickie James | Mr Anderson | Ms Tessmacher | ODB | Rob Terry | RVD | Robbie E | Rosita | Samoa Joe | Sarita | Scott Steiner | Shannon Moore | Sting | Tara | Velvet Sky | Winter Al Snow | Balls Mahoney | Big Guido | Billy Kidman | Chavo Guerrero | Carlito Colon | Drew Hankinson | Finlay | Justin Credible | Kid Kash | Juventud | Nunzio | Pscosis | Raven | Rhyno | Sabu | Sandman | Shad Gaspard | Stevie Richards | Super Crazy | Tito Colon | Tommy Dreamer | Tony Mamaluke
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2011 7:00:11 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2011 7:26:46 GMT -5
Wrestling News
ECW Rebirth
-The return of ECW will happen on 4th September in a PPV called ECW Rebirth. It will happen exclusively on ecwrebirth.com because they have not made a TV deal yet -1 match has been announced and it started because of a row on twitter. “@shaddyg ECW... how the hell did I end up here in this s**t hole”. ECW legend Tommy Dreamer didn't take the insults kindly and said “@hardcoreledgendtd Who do you think you are ECW has heart and the wrestlers put everything into the company. If you don’t like it leave but what other company would take you.”
It has been announced that they will compete in a Hardcore Match for the vacant ECW Television Championship.
Impact Wrestling
- After the assault by Kurt Angle and Immortal on Sting last week he has been injured but will be back before Bound for Glory. In the next episode of Impact he will have an announcement from his home. -In the next episode of Impact Eric Young is holding an open challenge for his Television Championship and Winter and Angelina Love challenge Tara and Ms Tessmacher for the Knockouts Tag Team Championships. -After Mr Anderson won the 1# contenders ladder match last week he has announced that he will face Kurt Angle at No Surrender. But this week he will have to speak to Bully Ray and Immortal after he attacked Bully Ray as he tried to "help" him win the ladder match.
WWE
-Christian is using his rematch clause this Friday on Smackdown against Randy Orton. -The WWE draft occurred at Summerslam to see the new rosters visit wwe.com. Matches will not be inter promotional on Smackdown or Raw but they can be on Superstars the only titles that can be defend on both brands are the Divas Championship and Tag team championship. -Triple H has not explained why he attempted to hit CM Punk but then backed away. This incident happened after CM Punk shouted in his face and pushed him because of "slow counts".
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2011 7:27:02 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2011 10:52:40 GMT -5
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Post by Chris Hammers on Aug 18, 2011 11:02:57 GMT -5
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Post by chaz on Aug 18, 2011 11:14:25 GMT -5
The layout, the images/graphics, the grammar, the nonsensical storylines, it's all horrid.
I don't have high hopes for this, purely because you seem to have struggled to put together a decent roster and backstory. Therefore, I think this diary would be a nightmare to read.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2011 11:29:39 GMT -5
The layout, the images/graphics, the grammar, the nonsensical storylines, it's all horrid. I don't have high hopes for this, purely because you seem to have struggled to put together a decent roster and backstory. Therefore, I think this diary would be a nightmare to read. Which roster? and i could add a backstory for ECW is it... How could I make it less of a nightmare? Thanks will update
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Post by chaz on Aug 18, 2011 11:39:29 GMT -5
Ok, maybe I was a tad harsh on the rosters. They're fine. However, the title belt section is bad. Hammers has given some good advice there.
Just make everything seem less cluttered. Perfect a layout and set everything out to make it easier to read and to follow. Work on your grammar because it's awful. Stick to the storylines already in place, and tell us where your starting point for this diary is. If you do change the current direction of the companies, explain clearly why and what you have done to change them. For example, why is ECW back? How did it happen? Be more specific when you post updates.
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Post by Rule 30 on Aug 18, 2011 11:43:19 GMT -5
Here's a tip, write these shows out in Microsoft Word or a program like that for the handy spell and grammar check. Then you can just simply copy and paste the show onto here and code it.
Everything to be said has been pretty much covered by Chaz and Hammers.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2011 11:59:53 GMT -5
Better now guys? Not finished yet. Checked microsoft word and corrected the news. Raw, Superstars, TNA and Smackdown I will type up tonight and post tommorow. If its any help it starts the week after WWE Summerslam.
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Post by Elliot on Aug 18, 2011 12:13:18 GMT -5
I just can't see you keeping up the workload. This is a LOT to cover, and hasn't been done that many times with success. I'll be reading to see how you do though.
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Post by Jord on Aug 18, 2011 12:18:16 GMT -5
Big diaries like this rarely last, however, good luck as this is going to take a lot of effort and time to keep on top of.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2011 16:45:42 GMT -5
15/08/2011
Highlights of Summerslam are shown. The main highlight was CM Punk defeating John Cena for the Undisputed WWE Championship.
The pyrotechnics blast from the stage as Jerry Lawler, Jim Ross and Michael Cole introduce the fans to Monday Night Raw.
“Cult of Personality” hits as CM Punk walks out with his Undisputed WWE Championship. He walks down the ramp receiving a huge pop from the fans. “As much as Hunter hates this... THE CHAMP IS HERE.” The crowd give him another pop. CM Punk goes on to explain what happened at Summerslam and that Triple H tried to cost him the match but he didn’t have the balls.
“It’s time to play the game...”
Triple H comes down to the ring with mixed reactions. They exchange words going back and forth making valid flaws of each other. CM Punk continues to say he was afraid and he will always be better than Triple H. “You thought I was afraid... I wasn’t afraid I was just trying to call the match down the middle. You know I thought you would be glad I didn’t knock you out because you wouldn’t be standing here with that belt around your waist”. CM Punk laughed “Someday I’m going to push you over the edge and then you won’t be so afraid to face me”. Triple H announced “Well I know 2 people who aren’t afraid of you and are willing to take you on... The former Tag team champions David Otunga and Michael McGillicutty.” CM Punk laughed and stated that they won’t touch him because he made got them to where they are today. Triple H closed with “Just wait and see.” He smiled and walked out of the ring leaving CM Punk looking angry and confused as RAW went to a commercial break.
COMMERCIAL BREAK
Yoshi Tatsu w/ William Regal vs Tyson Kidd A good match to kick off RAW giving these 2 rising superstars some TV time. Tyson Kidd started his first match back on RAW well, slowing down the game. Yoshi Tatsu attempted a cross body but Tyson Kidd stopped him before he could jump. He then climbed up to the second rope and hit a superplex. Kidd went for the pin but Yoshi Tatsu showed some fighting spirit which was pleasing William Regal as he watched closely from the outside. Tyson Kidd continued to dominate reversing a hurricanrana into a power bomb. He attempted the Sharpshooter but Yoshi quickly crawled to the ropes. Yoshi Tatsu gained the upper hand when he was on the apron when Tyson Kidd approached him and Tatsu hit a kick to the head followed by a springboard clothesline. Yoshi Tatsu sped the match up as he hit a running arm drag followed by a dropkick in quick succession. Tatsu was distracted by William Regal when Regal clapped for him. He turned round and gave him some thumbs up amusing the crowd and commentators. As he turned around he was hit by a running clothesline. He followed up by getting Tatsu in a sharpshooter, it wasn’t long before he got Tatsu to tap out.
Winner: Tyson Kidd
Tyson Kidd celebrated his victory as Regal dragged Tatsu out of the ring. William Regal started to shout at Yoshi Tatsu as they walked out of the ring.
BACKSTAGE
David Otunga and Michael McGillicutty are being interviewed about their match tonight. David Otunga was doing all the talking. He explained why they no longer admire CM Punk “He left us to fend for ourselves, he deserted the nexus. He was meant to be our leader and he kicked us to the curb. In our eyes he is the reason we lost the titles last night at Summerslam. Oh and before I forget we are invoking our rematch clause for the Tag Team Titles this Friday on Smackdown” They walk off as Jerry Lawler says after their mix up last night can they work together to defeat their old mentor... that match is up next”.
COMMERCIAL BREAK
CM Punk vs David Otunga and Michael McGillicutty Otunga and McGillicutty were trying to get rid of some of their anger on their former leader CM Punk. But after what happened at Summerslam the two were far from getting along. Both men ambushed Punk before the match started giving them the upper hand. This didn’t last long as Punk got the upper hand when Otunga attempted a scoop slam but Pink slid down his back and kicked him in the back of the head. Otunga slowly got up into the corner but before Punk could do his signature running knee McGillicutty grabbed him, Otunga then bounced off the ropes off the ropes to go for a clothesline but Punk escaped and just like the night before Otunga hit McGillicutty. He then received a kick to the mid section. Punk then raised him up onto his shoulders and hit the GTS... 1 ... 2 ... 3...
Winner: CM Punk
CM Punk didn’t celebrate he just grabbed a mic and said “Hunter, Hunter, Hunter... you know if you want to face me all you have to do is ask instead of putting me in some stupid match like this”. He walked out leaving his old friends to argue in the middle of the ring.
Another look at the highlights of Summerslam is shown. After that a replay of what CM Punk just said.
1# Contenders Match for the Divas Championship. Eve vs Natalya vs Kelly Kelly The Diva of Doom was outnumbered in a triple threat match which looked like a 2 on 1 handicap match. But once Natalya was on the outside Kelly and Eve started to fight each other. In back and forth action between the two Eve came out on top and hit a DDT but before she could get the pin Natalya pulled at her hair and threw her back onto the canvas, Natalya got Eve in the sharpshooter but Kelly Kelly hit Natalya with a kick to the face, Kelly went for the pin but Eve broke it up. Eve then hit a swinging neck breaker onto Kelly Kelly to get the pin.
Winner and 1# contender: Eve
As Eve celebrated Beth Phoenix came from behind and hit her with the championship belt, she was going to hit the glam slam but Kelly Kelly came from behind and prevented her from hitting the move. All four divas continued to brawl as RAW went to a commercial break.
COMMERCIAL BREAK
BACKSTAGE “Ladies and Gentlemen I am joined at this time by John Cena.” Cena explained his thoughts about Summerslam. “I am glad that the match was fair and I guess the best man won. I would rather lose fairly than win because of some stupid outside interference and I hope that I can get a rematch soon.” A very brief and serious interview but before he could leave Heath Slater got in his face “Ha meet the newest member of RAW... The one man rock band, Heath Sla-“John Cena obviously not in the mood punches Slater in the face and walks off towards the parking lot as Slater looks on angrily holding his cheek.
Alex Riley vs Alberto Del Rio Dolph Ziggler and Vickie Guerrero join the commentary table yet again. He said he was scouting his competition. Alex Riley was always at a disadvantage with his injured shoulder, but he stated off strong taking some of his anger out on Alberto Del Rio. Every move he did seemed to hurt his shoulder more and more until it got too much, Del Rio was able to reverse an Irish whip sending Riley into the corner, he then hit a huge kick to Alex Riley’s shoulder. He then dominated until Riley threw him out of the ring and in front of Dolph Ziggler, he then threw Del Rio over the announce table into Ziggler. As Alex Riley was getting back into the ring Vickie grabbed his leg, Alberto Del Rio took advantage and booted Riley in the face. He then dragged him into the ring and locked in the arm bar on his injured shoulder. It didn’t take him long to tap out.
Winner: Alberto Del Rio
COMMERCIAL BREAK
John Morrison and Rey Mysterio vs R-Truth and The Miz The Miz started off against John Morrison, he quickly got the upper hand with a cheap shot followed by a clothesline. R-Truth and The Miz continued to dominate making frequent tags in and out. Morrison was able to gain control after hitting a roundhouse kick, he then crawled for the tag and was able to get to Mysterio, Rey Mysterio then used R-Truth as a step up to dropkick The Miz off the apron. John and Rey then double teamed R-Truth but before they could get a pin Miz came in with a chair and hit them both on the skull...
The arena went dark... When the lights came back on a masked man was standing in the middle of the ring holding a pipe. The Miz ran at him but got kicked in the mid section and then hit by the pipe on the back. R-Truth was hit in the skull with the pipe sending him into the corner, The Miz then got thrown into R-Truth, and both of them fell onto the floor and rolled out of the ring. Rey Mysterio got up and went to shake the masked man’s hand but the man kicked him in the stomach and hit a scoop slam, Morrison went for the drop kick but it didn’t do much as the man hit Morrison with a boot to the face as soon as Morrison stood up. Triple H came running down to the ring but the lights went off again and when the lights were back on he was gone. Triple H was in the centre of the ring looking confused as all four competitors slowly struggled to get up RAW went off air...
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Post by Overnight Sensation on Aug 18, 2011 20:41:50 GMT -5
for 's sake Mike Awesome is dead...
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Post by ✖ AJ on Aug 18, 2011 21:00:17 GMT -5
for 's sake Mike Awesome is dead... This. -.-
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Post by FollowTheBuzzards on Aug 18, 2011 21:37:48 GMT -5
for 's sake Mike Awesome is dead... This. -.- Reminds me of one of my very FIRST rookie mistakes.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 19, 2011 5:56:49 GMT -5
CARE TO COMMENT ON THE SHOW NOT A MISTAKE
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Post by Elliot on Aug 19, 2011 7:18:37 GMT -5
CARE TO COMMENT ON THE SHOW NOT A MISTAKE You just sealed your fate. Good luck.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 19, 2011 7:31:10 GMT -5
CARE TO COMMENT ON THE SHOW NOT A MISTAKE You just sealed your fate. Good luck. huh
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