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Post by wweuniverse47871 on Sept 21, 2011 7:54:09 GMT -5
Ok, So I haven't posted a new animation in a while and I haven't made an animation in a while. The Jeff Hardy entrance in this was going to be for Summer Catastrophe but I just didn't have the time to put it all together. The Christian entrance I don't know when the I did that one Anyway here it is Please leave proper responses!
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Post by TTF4eva on Sept 21, 2011 7:59:45 GMT -5
Next time, if you're gonna use blue tack, cover it up, or put it away once your done take the photos, you can clearly see it on the ramp. Kinda distracting imo. Other than that, it was great. You have really improved, its unbelievable. Just work on the stiffness a little bit. The Jeff Hardy figure you have is very hard to move its joints (trust me, I know), so probably should use a different RA figure with better articulation. The light constantly flashing was annoying, but can't really say that since that happens to me as well. For it to lessen though, get a better lamp. Have it position to the front rather than on the side, cause not only does that create a lot of shadows on the wall, it also has that constant flashing of light. Good job though, keep it up
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Post by Deleted on Sept 21, 2011 8:04:08 GMT -5
Jeff Hardy: Very Smooth, saw sometimes string and it was a bit shaky! I like jeff's Taunt, it looks really good! ONE OF YA BEST! Overall: 9,2/10
Christian: Not that good as i though D: Christian was stiff and i saw some light changes. Overall: 3,7/10
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Post by wweuniverse47871 on Sept 21, 2011 8:05:48 GMT -5
Next time, if you're gonna use blue tack, cover it up, or put it away once your done take the photos, you can clearly see it on the ramp. Kinda distracting imo. Other than that, it was great. You have really improved, its unbelievable. Just work on the stiffness a little bit. The Jeff Hardy figure you have is very hard to move its joints (trust me, I know), so probably should use a different RA figure with better articulation. The light constantly flashing was annoying, but can't really say that since that happens to me as well. For it to lessen though, get a better lamp. Have it position to the front rather than on the side, cause not only does that create a lot of shadows on the wall, it also has that constant flashing of light. Good job though, keep it up Thanks Blake I think I can explain the problem with the lighting, I was not doing it in my normal spot, I had to do it in the lounge room cause my table wasn't big enough for the ring and ramp so it was all different lighting and also I was doing 1 hour animating and then a 30 minute break so the lighting probably would have changed during then aswell.
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Post by [The Ukrainian One] Dimburuk on Sept 21, 2011 8:44:12 GMT -5
Really nice Jeff entrance. Smooth, which is really great. Dance at start was really awesome! Walking needs to be longer, but i understand that ramp is not big. Walking was nice too, saw string.. Liked how Jeff looked to both sides before entering the ring. In-ring was nice, but a bit choppy. Saw shadows and string in the end. Really nice! But no fireworks Christian entrance was meh.. It looked rushed up, fast, saw hands, string.. Not your best..
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Post by cooperman on Sept 21, 2011 10:56:28 GMT -5
Dude, hardy's is P-E-R-F-E-C-T It's so damn fantastic so smooth and realistic But christian's is so choppy ...
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Sept 22, 2011 3:27:59 GMT -5
Both of them looked good Will, You should use them for a match. Finish the Christian one and make Jeff Hardy vs Christian They were both pretty smooth. The Jeff one was very nice imo. Just need the walking/running to be worked on abit. The dancing part looks very nice. I always messed up on doing that part when i made his entrance. Good stuff Will, animate more!!! ;D
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