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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2011 3:59:43 GMT -5
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Tylor
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Post by Tylor on Sept 26, 2011 6:42:27 GMT -5
It's pretty stiff throughout the ani, and the punch with turnaround from attacker happens way to fast. Nice ropebounce and impact though.
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Ethan
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Post by Ethan on Sept 26, 2011 15:36:48 GMT -5
there is a major lack of frames here, use more frames to smoothen it out, stop motion is a different board sorry no offense, not your best
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2011 22:20:29 GMT -5
I know I was just testing the stip
dos it look anything like a fall from grace?
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Post by extragravy on Sept 29, 2011 15:34:50 GMT -5
I like this Sam! Its nice and smooth, maybe a little stiff, and fidgety, but I really like it, keep it up.
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Post by picfedguy on Sept 30, 2011 22:22:42 GMT -5
Yeah the first thing that pops out to me here is that it needs more frames in parts. like I'd say up until the impact of the punch you had enough frames with it even bordering on being a bit slow but then the next parts are choppy and need more frames to smoothen it out. Besides that though stiffness wasn't too big a problem though there were a few parts were the joints went unmoved for a bit too long. Your movements seem alright (though i would have had the stick get some more height during the toss of the move), and the originality is good. The reactions and impact were reasonably good too. Overall for now you should mainly work on getting a nice consistent speed going, but yeah keep at it man.
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