Fave
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Who survived and what was left of them?
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Post by Fave on Oct 11, 2011 22:00:07 GMT -5
 Choppy and suckish spacing, i'm sure you guys can find more wrong with it  Credit for style goes to mr.version1 |
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Tylor
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Post by Tylor on Oct 11, 2011 22:11:50 GMT -5
Choppy and suckish spacing, i'm sure you guys can find more wrong with it What about the slow reactions? Arm movements that makes them look like they are broken? And I'm surprised the move hit considering the sticks ARE NOT IN THE RING  .  Nice to see you tried some rope bounces, but they aren't the best, but good considering you're using sprite ropes. |
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Fave
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Post by Fave on Oct 11, 2011 22:36:30 GMT -5
^ Darn i forgot to put them behind the ropes Anyways i just finished this smoothness test, all of it is mine besides the jump preparation, the liftoff and ssp are mine....credit to whoever made the first part...sorry if it isn't allowed to post part work of someone else but i downloaded it a few months ago from a jump tutorial? not sure.  |
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Tylor
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Post by Tylor on Oct 12, 2011 6:52:35 GMT -5
That would make it a collab. Which is ok. The back is pretty stiff. And arms are always high, which isn't good.
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Post by picfedguy on Oct 19, 2011 12:08:03 GMT -5
Yeah on the whole this was quite choppy, obviously that mean that you need to use more frames, the speed of it seems a bit odd, if you haven't already put it up to speed 17. When using more frames do to be sure that you don't use too many - just enough to get a nice smooth speed going. Besides that it didn't look too stiff, maybe a bit more movement on the legs during the SSP and the same for the back during the run. Movements seem pretty right on and the reactions were reasonable though could use a bit more impact (mainly on the attacking stick here.) Overall I'd say if you got the speed down you'd have quite a decent animation here.
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