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Post by Deleted on Oct 13, 2011 19:40:45 GMT -5
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Tylor
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Post by Tylor on Oct 13, 2011 20:08:07 GMT -5
Fidgets:Minor fidgets in the feet of the attackers at the end, nothing too noticeable. Victims back fidgets when getting thrown of the rope. Attackers arm during toss off. Not too bad.
Choppiness: Don't see any choppiness.
Stiffness: There is only some stiffness in the back of the attacker at the end. Thats it. Otherwise, no stiffness.
Smoothness: It's pretty smooth. Get rid of the fidgets, and It will be better.
Reactions: Ok reactions.
Overall: It's a pretty good animation. I think you have a good chance at the ppv.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 13, 2011 20:17:14 GMT -5
I sent you the final one
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Post by Tylor on Oct 13, 2011 20:52:41 GMT -5
Yeah, I got it. Pretty good.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 13, 2011 21:16:05 GMT -5
thanks
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Post by picfedguy on Oct 19, 2011 11:57:40 GMT -5
Think this is your latest animation, anyway this is very good probably your best to date. Jump at the tart was alright though looked a bit quick considering the throw. There was a bit of a fridget in both sticks around the end of the jump of the move. The joints were pretty well bent though there were some like arms on the attacker and legs on the defender that could use more movement. Reactions and impact were reasonable though did look a bit rushed. On the whole could use a few more frames just to slow it down a bit. But yeah your best animation yet, keep it up.
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