WF: Halloween Havoc II: MATCH 2

No you didn't, but you posted it on the board so i thought it couldn't be used?

evidently not^...

josh: i thought the lift up was 'ok' at best. Yes orton had a good lift and impact, but the lift by cena didnt look forceful enough, randy sorta levtated on his own im afraid :/ anyway, after that, randy's turnover was nice, but the walking backward was just slow walking, which looked fairly fidgety. the splash's impact wasnt to great either. appologies, but not your best ani :/ 7/10

rocaastar: quite dissapointing....you shouldnt be animating at this level, if we are still going to see hands in the animation. No offence but i think you should have a bit more practise in the beginners race. The ani was smooth, but in the lift up, they both moved halfway across the ring? then the walking was slow when it should be running, and the camera was shaky, a good attempt, but you need to make sure your hands arn't in the way of your ani, its disturbing to see. 5.9/10

wes: I liked how you had cm hardy? (wierd custom) anyway, have him go down, only to thrust him back up again, looked nice but it was unrealistic, how far down he went. Anyway the ani was reasonably smooth and the splash had decent impact. ive seen better off you but not a bad ani...7.6/10

Vote: WES

Vote: Josh

josh:yours was extremely smooth, flowed very well, and i liked the camera movement.

Wes: Extremely stiff, very choppy, definitively not your best work.

Roccostar: Smooth in places, Stiff, saw your hand and shadows were very distracting.

Vote : Josh

Vote: Josh
His was the smoothest out of all three, least stiff, yet it's still abit stiff in both Orton and Cena. Wes' wasn't really that good, very fidgety, stiff, choppy around the splash, and Ultimate Drugged Punk made the victim levitate. Rocca's yours was super choppy, very stiff, and fidgety.

Great match over here guys!

Wes : Wow, a really nice animation brother! I'm definitly, in love with it. It wasn't really stiff, didn't see shadows, but it was a bit choppy and saw some strings, but it's so far, your best one.
9/10

CarltonFan2010 : A nice animation, but the camera was shaking, Cena was stiff, and the reaction from Orton seemed a bit rushed. No shadows which is nice, but i think that you had to work on the move before handing in.
6/10

roccastar28 : Well, a nice improvement from the last animation i've seen from you. The photos' quality was really bad, no good lighting. The animation was stiff and really choppy. Needed more pictures. Actually, I don't think that you're ready for the Euro title yet but anyways... 4.5/10

My vote's definitely going to Wes.

Vote Josh
out of all the animations it was the smoothest and least stiff

omg fml,I was typing a really long vote for this match and then,it closed itself,fml. Great match guys,it's down to Josh and Wes but I'll comment on Roccastar's animation too(again .-.)

Roccastar:Great Job,but tbh,your not really worthy to be in the mid carder division,sorry First of all,this animation is VERY fidgety,I mean look at the starting of this animation and you'll already know why. How can John Morrison first stay in the middle of the ring then pop! he transferred to the left side of the ring? The gorrila press itself was really stiff,you should have bend Evan Bourne's leg and elbow joints more,I mean a lot more. John Morrison himself is also stiff,when he's putting his arms down,it's too slow compared to the rest of the animation.You should have moved his arms in every picture,not just 2 by 2 or so. The walking(?) was very..weird,normally when people walk,they dont swing their arms so far way up,they walk just like people,not alien or some sort of different organisms. But in this animation,the walking was actually the best part of it. BUT next time,animate running,I swear,it'll help you out in animating a LOT. During the walking,also to mention,I like how you animate Evan Bourne,most people dont do that and I am glad I could see that from you. The splash itself was bad. Not only you shook the camera,John Morrison didnt even jumped. You should have made him jump because in real life,people normally jump before a splash,right? I dont think they'll just drop down like that unless there are newly born babies that is learning how to walk. You should always make your animations realistic,it'll help to make great animations. The reaction for this animation is....bad. You should had made Morrison moved away while Evan Bourne showed the pain from the splash. But to the other parts of this animation,I saw strings,which of course,ruins the animation,you should always remove them,I suggest watching wwestevo07's string tutorial,keep doing what he's doing and sooner or later you'll have no strings in your animation. I also saw shadows,which of course,ruins the animation more,you should NEVER have light behind you,this will cause shadows.You should put it where it wont show in the animations and will avoid shadows,or if you needed,you could also use flash. And last but not least,camera shaking,you should NEVER have a picture where the camera is shook. By that one little picture,it'll cause the whole animation to look bad,really really bad. I suggest you removing it or if you need to,retake the photo. Great Job tho,3.5/10

Josh:Great Job,your really improving man. The Gorrila press was amazing,the air time was perfect and there's barely a flaw,other than Randy Orton being stiff. You should have moved the leg and knee joints more. You could have made Randy Orton spread his arms too. During the walking,John Cena was really stiff,his arms never moved and his knee joints were not moved at all too,this is basicly the bad part of this animation.During the walking,also to mention,you didnt moved Randy Orton,He looked like he was playing dead or something.During the splash,I like how you have made John Cena jumped,unlike Roccastar's ani.During the splash,I like how you made John Cena spread his amrs and how his legs moved a lot further to the back. The reaction was okey since you made a pin.Now to the other parts of the animation,I saw strings in some pictures,you should always remove them cause they can make animations bad. There's no shadows,which I like. Not really any flaw after all Josh,just add more impact next time,great job,8/10

Wes: Man,your getting better each time,First of all,Your custom figure didnt even touched Chavo But that didnt mattered much because I will do the same thing if I were animating this move.I like how you make the custom bend down a little before the throw,that totally made the animation a lot better.The walking was great and the jump was amazing,I like how you bend his arms down a little before the jump and moved his arms during the air time. Now to the other parts of the animation,I saw a little strings but it didnt mattered much,I found strings only when I am checking if there is or not so it didnt really bother the animation. Great Job man,I can see you being a future WHC anytime soon 8.5/10

Tbh,Josh and Wes both should have main evented before me,you two really impressed me,great job to all three of you but my vote goes to Wes

Hard one to decide, but i'm going with Josh because it was a lot more smoother than Wes'. I really liked the movements in yours Wes, just work on getting some more frames in.