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Post by Sleazyness on Feb 5, 2012 12:55:57 GMT -5
I found this. I posted this before. I dont think everyone seen this. I think I might get back into animations but im not sure if I should Well check it out..  |
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Post by wwextreme25 on Feb 5, 2012 12:59:43 GMT -5
you seem to pot a lot, so i think it'd be cool to comeback
you need to work on-:
choppyness-take more pics as it will make it flow better and smoother
stiffness-move the joint like, the legs apart and bend the torso or something, as though it would happen in real life - overall i give it a 5/10
and also, a better reaction
i know its an old ani, but i thought i should still comment on it
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Post by Sleazyness on Feb 5, 2012 13:01:28 GMT -5
you seem to pot a lot, so i think it'd be cool to comeback you need to work on-: choppyness-take more pics as it will make it flow better and smoother stiffness-move the joint like, the legs apart and bend the torso or something, as though it would happen in real life - overall i give it a 5/10 and also, a better reaction i know its an old ani, but i thought i should still comment on itThanks. I dont know I might comeback. Its the string and stuff doesnt go well with me. I dont know man :/ I appreciate the comment though. |
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Post by jwsowner on Feb 5, 2012 14:02:09 GMT -5
you seem to pot a lot, so i think it'd be cool to comeback you need to work on-: choppyness-take more pics as it will make it flow better and smoother stiffness-move the joint like, the legs apart and bend the torso or something, as though it would happen in real life - overall i give it a 5/10 and also, a better reaction i know its an old ani, but i thought i should still comment on it ww...whh...wwwwhhhaaattttt???!! But yeah, basically what Rob said. The only part that really needed the most work was in the air, take TONS more pics! Also work on the lighting/editing. Keep practicing. I have tips on the side of my You Tube channel, too. |
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Post by Sleazyness on Feb 5, 2012 15:18:29 GMT -5
you seem to pot a lot, so i think it'd be cool to comeback you need to work on-: choppyness-take more pics as it will make it flow better and smoother stiffness-move the joint like, the legs apart and bend the torso or something, as though it would happen in real life - overall i give it a 5/10 and also, a better reaction i know its an old ani, but i thought i should still comment on it ww...whh...wwwwhhhaaattttt???!! But yeah, basically what Rob said. The only part that really needed the most work was in the air, take TONS more pics! Also work on the lighting/editing. Keep practicing. I have tips on the side of my You Tube channel, too. Thanks Jay. I appreciate it. I really need to take more pics. Just string slips off constantly and I cant seem to get it. But I hope to improve from here out. I have no setup area really so finding where to animate is a pain. Thanks yall. Anyway I can talk to you guys like on skype or something? |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 5, 2012 15:58:48 GMT -5
You've posted this like 5 times already, make a new animation or GTFO :l
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Feb 6, 2012 16:44:17 GMT -5
You've posted this like 5 times already, make a new animation or GTFO :l Lol, I've never seen this, Anyways onto the animation. I like the bend at the beginning but the jump itself was choppy and only a little bit stiff. The impact was ok, but Undertaker positioning was very weird throughout the animation. Edit: I think it's a good idea that you make a comeback Kyle, It would be cool to see how you still animate as of now. |
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Post by wwextreme25 on Feb 6, 2012 17:04:51 GMT -5
his names jordan, not jay but if you were calling him jay as a sorta nickname the fair do's
ad i meant to say you seem to put a lot of effort into your anis, so it'd be a cool comeback...but my keyboard obviously stopped working causing me to put "you seem to pot alot" lmao
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Post by jwsowner on Feb 6, 2012 17:07:08 GMT -5
his names jordan, not jay but if you were calling him jay as a sorta nickname the fair do's ad i meant to say you seem to put a lot of effort into your anis, so it'd be a cool comeback...but my keyboard obviously stopped working causing me to put "you seem to pot alot" lmao oh, haha. I just thought it was a funny slip-up. Actually made me laugh yesterday...kudos.  |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 6, 2012 17:08:43 GMT -5
Kyle, I commented on this a year ago when you used it at AniMania, and again when you posted it in your goodbye thread, and again in your "return" thread.
I'm not commenting on it again.
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Post by wwextreme25 on Feb 6, 2012 17:12:03 GMT -5
OMG A NEW KYLE ANI?  |
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Post by Sleazyness on Feb 6, 2012 21:44:57 GMT -5
OMG A NEW KYLE ANI? Sometime soon this week. Got Drivers training and hanging out with my girlfriend to do first  |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 6, 2012 21:52:07 GMT -5
Nice animtion,
That JoMo figure is amazing D: I've been looking everywhere
for it xD It needs loads more pictures, stiff and saw channel.
Could've bend the joints and had more reaction and set up.
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