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Post by Deleted on Feb 17, 2012 11:14:39 GMT -5
Hope u like it thanks highfligher329 and cena0024 for all your help this could be called a transition pic fed and will try and build storylines as well as consitency over the next few!
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Post by hCo.Bro™ [brandon_lee] on Feb 21, 2012 13:05:20 GMT -5
You have a clean set up, decent poses, and good quality. No commentary makes it really hard to connect with what is going on. I get why Christian and Ziggler fought but had no idea it was title for title, or was just the US title on the line? The background music didnt bother me, but that is one thing you have to consider about who else might view. Sure we can mute it, but then youre just watching a slideshow of pictures. Look at IZZY, WARSMAN, and MIRCO'S feds and how they add the commentary on the picture. Even if it were just one commentator/ narrorator doing play by play it. I think there is a place for youtube feds if you can cover the fundamentals of basic pic fedding. Stick around and keep improving. Thanks for posting.
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derekbrazen
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Post by derekbrazen on Feb 21, 2012 21:07:27 GMT -5
I liked it. The poses were good, sometimes a little stiff. But the matches were good, epically since even without dialog/commentary I could follow the story of the matches. Next time you gotta try to get more evenly lighted pictures. My fav match was Kane vs Kane, here's where the lack of dialog/commentary hurts, because I wanted to know why I'm seeing Kane vs Kane. Good job, keep it up. I hope you do more.
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