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WCM's Izzy
Main Eventer
Joined on: May 23, 2007 16:30:00 GMT -5
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Feb 28, 2012 9:01:02 GMT -5
Wow, well this was totally unexpected. Interesting showing, Benji. I thought you were going to wrap things up REALLY fast after the "lights out", but glad to see you extended the match. The run in was interesting, an odd mix of personalities there, but hey, let's see where you take it. Congrats, bro.  |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2012 9:52:05 GMT -5
This one came from left field! Congrats on putting out a show Ben, I liked it. You had some good spots especially the batista bomb, but I thought your show suffered from being overly dark. Other than that I really liked the action and fast pace of your show. Cant wait for the next one!
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derekbrazen
Superstar
Joined on: Sept 24, 2011 20:54:16 GMT -5
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Post by derekbrazen on Feb 28, 2012 16:05:31 GMT -5
Enjoyed it, thought the ending was interesting, I'd like to see how you follow it up.
Your show could benefit from better lighting, and trying to keep your arm's shadow out of the pics. But I like the show, can't wait for more
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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2012 22:13:49 GMT -5
I felt the poses were pretty stiff, honestly. However you did have a couple of really good ones. I liked the one with Rey jumping up out of the ramp, like he does.
First match was just a slaughter. I don't really know what that was about...
Main event was nice, but show felt short because of only the two matches and the first was barely a match. Same sort of critique I had on Stinger's show the other day. Felt like it needed at least one more match or segment to really tie it all together.
Still a decent little outing. Should be interesting to see where it goes from here.
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Squatch
Main Eventer
Joined on: Feb 17, 2010 14:16:53 GMT -5
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Post by Squatch on Feb 28, 2012 22:42:56 GMT -5
Thanks for the replies so far! I really appreciate it. I will have to try getting back to your shows. There were some stiff poses and some bad lighting in some pictures on the show. I noticed that after I filmed. Next time I will have a Background Defocus effect in use to make the picture look a lot better! All of the constructive criticism is great. Thanks for watching and replying!
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Post by brm on Mar 4, 2012 20:55:15 GMT -5
Glad to see you getting a show out finally! Ok, it looks like you're doing a WWE style show, which is great. Right off the bat you're establishing who the champion will be, which is always a good thing to do. Triple Threat sounds good. Batista ripping through Yoshi was a good way to establish Batista, but Batista is pretty much established anyway. Man, I love that Rey jumping mid air entrance pic. First time I think I've seen that done. Main event was nice. I didn't like that it started out with a sweet chin right off the bat, but it balanced out a bit as it went on. Some of the poses like Shawn's diving elbow and some of Rey's stuff was good, but other stuff like the Wasteland were pretty rushed and lazy. The Corre coming in seems a bit unoriginal, but it does establish a clear opposition in the fed. One thing I didn't like is that Punk, Gallows, and Orton are just in the Corre, but they didn't stand out. Having big names like that in the group, I would expect that they would be given a lot of the focus, but they just seemed to be there. Overall, I'm glad to see you putting this out, and I hope you stick with this. As you make more episodes, all the shortcomings of the first few shows will iron out and you'll really find your place. Good job man.
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