ECW episode 2: War and Pieces!

I think it would be best if you focused on making a quality show with actual matches rather than a series of poses being cranked out on a daily bases.

The violence is uncalled for and out of the blue. Your ECW reminds me of a person paying tributevto something he's either never seen, or does not understand.

Have you ever seen a Terry Funk promo, or a Raven promo for that matter? My guess is no.

That being said this show was better because of the bloid and cussing.

E C Dub!

Wow not only a quick turn around on the shows, but a HUGE turn around in quality. The commentary was better, the pics were better and you were amazingly creative this time around. The use of weapons, blood, spray paint. Gotta admit Mass, I'm always hesitant with your feds cause they tend to come and go, but I really hope this one stays. MASSIVE improvement on the second show.

I must have been the only one who understood what was happening with your cage match the first time, but you managed to do a better job this time around anyway. I suppose my only concern would be if you're a one trick pony with the hardcore stuff. After a while that will get old if we don't care about the characters, but for now it's fun.

Of course you do have storyline elements, so you're doing fine overall.

Like that you're building up Wolfe as a monster. Also love that you made mention of the computer box.

Only minor issues would be some string here or there. Also it was a bit odd to see Sandman do a C-4 haha. Although I've seen Sandman do some incredible stuff that he shouldn't be able to and it's your fed, I mean, Micro has Khali as a high flyer, lol.

Great stuff man. Looking forward to more.

I like the new set up, and think it's great that the backdrop of the set has a logical reason.

AJ vs Desmond Wolfe. Good match, got pretty crazy with the barbedwire. AJ looked like a jobber, or Desmond is just that damn good, Idk yet. He's got a 31-0 record so maybe he's just that damn good.
I liked the ECW commercial, but I don't like how it interrupted a match. Idk why ECW wouldn't just wait for the match to end to plug their shirts. But I like the idea of commercials.

Sandman vs Carlito was cool, I got a kick out of Sandman going to the crowd for a weapon and what they gave him was a bookcase.
You really should have retook the pic where Sandman kept spraying Carlito with spray paint. The marker is RIGHT THERE.
Loved the Austin promo. It was really good that he didn't point out the Pepsi can.

Really like this "Non-stop action match" concept.
But there were a few shots where it doesn't make sense how the previous pic led to the next. Honestly, with out anyone selling moves it kind of gets too crazy how long they go. I do enjoy the concept so I wanna see what the next one looks like. I like how Taz explained why there was no dialog cuz as the match went on, I was like "Why isn't anyone talking?"
It was a good match with some very good poses. Just gotta learn to hide the extra sting in some of your shots.

Main Event Time: "The Hooligans" Paul London & Brian Kendrick vs The Hardys
Good match, with a lot happening in it.
I like how The Hardy's had different gear than the 1st time we saw them. Nice touch.
Not sure what to make out The Hooligans win, seems like The Hardy's might have won if Desmond Didn't get involved. Jeff was on-top of the cage, he might have climbed out, or gone from some crazy dive. Idk, so idk what to make out of the ending.

So next show we get Legacy vs The Hooligans (I assume in a Cage Match?) winner gets a shot at Tag-Team gold against Beer Money (In what i assume is a Cage Match).

After the match Desmond Wolfe beat up the Hooligans & then The Hardys. He pushed/threw Jeff so hard into the cage that one side fell down. Kind of unbelievable, seems like these cages aren't strong enough or put together properly. (Or this could just be the internal logic of your ECW. If this type of stuff continues then I'll be able to just accept it as "This is how it is in this fed" which is cool)

Overall another good show. You're only 2 shows in, but I think I'm starting to get the rules of this show/fed/world. I think you do need a ref tho, cuz your matches tend to have no rules what so ever, anything goes. And with that logic idk why they'd stop with just a pin. Or who's counting the pin to begin with.
An idea; maybe you have the crowd count the pin. IDK if that's been done before, but it could be interesting if the fans knew their job was to count the pins. Just an idea.

Again, this was fun to watch. I can't wait for more, idk how you post them so fast, but you do. And that's good for us bc there good shows. I half expect two more by next sunday cuz when you get going you tend to put out a lot fast.

Good Job.



Masspick, I like what you're doing and as long as you're happy with your work then keep doing what your doing.
But I do agree with June that your version of ECW doesn't have much of the feel of the original ECW.

Have you ever seen a Terry Funk promo? Cuz with some of your characters they don't seem anything like how they are in real life.
This can easily be fixed if you just tell us to accept these characters on face value. But if they're supposed to be the "real" Raven, Funk, etc then I tihnk they're not realisitc. Because their promos don't have the right tone, speech pattern, or words that these guys use.

I was shocked at the AJ blood, kind of nasty when you think how he got it. But again if this is your version of ECW then cool. Mayb you should put a warning at the beginning of your next show.