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Post by Deleted on Apr 9, 2012 8:38:33 GMT -5
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Apr 9, 2012 9:09:06 GMT -5
Mmmmm, nice show, man, but I'm beginning to wonder if you are rushing into these, because though this one had some very nice spots, there were many parts that seemed rushed and sloppy, like quality was sacrificed just to be able to put the show live.
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June
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Post by June on Apr 9, 2012 9:41:32 GMT -5
Can you say Rushed, and lacking of logic?
Seriously man, cranking out shows this fast would be great if you were not rushing them out. The matches do not tell a story, the moves look terribly unrealistic, too many reversals, there is absolutely no selling, no ref, and nothing to really care about.
Not sure if I'll be watching the next episode, which I'm pretty sure won't air next week, but more like tomorrow.
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Apr 9, 2012 9:49:26 GMT -5
Again, if you are just having fun knocking out the shows in this fashion, the more power to you, man. However, I believe giving some breathing space between episodes is good, otherwise you'll saturate the audience and it's likely that people will just skim through the show instead of taking their time checking it out. I know I skimmed this one.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 9, 2012 9:54:40 GMT -5
Masspick. I love your enthusiasm, and its great your putting out shows quickly. This one had a lot of great spots, but please take your time and fix those blurry pics! This fed feels like the wwe version of E.C.W and thats great if thats what your going for. I still dont see those turnbuckles I sent you, but hey whatever man. Your fed could REALLY benefit froma plain black background, like a black posterboard or something. Just take your time and if you are going to go to the trouble of making a great spot, make sure the pic comes through clearly so we can all see it. Keep up the energy and thanks for fedding.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 9, 2012 10:02:13 GMT -5
Masspick. I love your enthusiasm, and its great your putting out shows quickly. This one had a lot of great spots, but please take your time and fix those blurry pics! This fed feels like the wwe version of E.C.W and thats great if thats what your going for. I still dont see those turnbuckles I sent you, but hey whatever man. Your fed could REALLY benefit froma plain black background, like a black posterboard or something. Just take your time and if you are going to go to the trouble of making a great spot, make sure the pic comes through clearly so we can all see it. Keep up the energy and thanks for fedding. those are the turnbuckles you sent me =P I just turned them inside out to get rid of the logo as for rushing this episode in sepcific was kinda rushed but the next one wont be I taking my time with #4 I just had the first 3 already filmed so I wanted to put them out #4 will come soonish but I want to fix up these candles I found to look more like light tubes along with the fact that I am going to write out what will happen in the matches for episode 4 so that it feels smoother and doesnt become a rushed match that I didn't see coming cause I just randomized crap  |
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Post by derekbrazen on Apr 10, 2012 2:22:08 GMT -5
Just fin Ep. 3, i liked it but I enjoyed the 1st two shows a lot more. I agree with BigEvilJohn that your shows could really benefit from a black backdrop or just a non bedroom backdrop. Your show is starting to develop it's own world, but your current set up takes away from that.
Desmond Wolfe has an very intense promo, yes there were a few curses in it, but I don't care about that.
The Cody/Ted vs Holigans match was ok. Sometimes it was awkward with some of the pics as they didn't transition well, and there were a few blurry pics. But an okay match.Honestly, I was surprised that this wasn't a cage match; I think you're over exposing your gimmick matches.
Example, ladder spots don't really mean anything to me anymore since its happened at least once every show so far. And the two previous tag-team matches were cage matches for no real reason, but this match that has #1 contendership at steak is just another random hardcore match.
I didn't care for the commercials this time around, maybe because they have nothing to due with wrestling but at least they had a theme.
I liked the Sabu vs Desmond Wolfe match.
Good that you addressed who's counting the pins, but it should have been addressed earlier in the show. My only issue with the lack of a ref is; whit's stopping them from just strangling each other? Or killing each othter, there seems to be no rules in your ECW so far.
Dreamer vs Christian was good. After the match, I'm looking forward to Raven vs Dreamer next time.
Okay main event, kind of surprised that you have Kurt Angle and didn't promote him really. I was starting to get into the match right before Punk got involved. So boo him, such a heel. At least it built this Punk/Austin feud.
I like your shows so far. I don't think your fed has a fully thought out world with it's own rules, logic, etc. It doesn't really have that ECW real, more of WWECW but with violence, lots of it, and for no real reason. But that's cool if that's what you want.
I really enjoyed your 1st two shows, but this one wasn't that good imo. I'll watch ep 4 cuz I like your track record, but I hope Ep. 4 is better.
On the subject on if you're putting these out too fast. I'm fine with your show the way it is, it's not perfect but it's nice to read new stuff. But there are so many good feds here that part of the reason they're good is bc their creators take the time to make sure their shows look good, make sense, and are the best they can be before posting.
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Post by T on Apr 11, 2012 3:33:25 GMT -5
First show I've seen of yours:
-Firstly, I can't say I'm a fan of you calling your fed ECW. I'm guessing it will have hardcore matches and the like, but it doesn't make it very unique
-Some poses in the first match were a bit stiff/lazy, e.g. Kendrick getting hit by the cookie sheet
-Some decent spots though and I liked the ending, haven't seen a stretcher like that in years!
-I like the Desmond Wolfe character, will be interesting to see who breaks his streak
-Never a fan of Christian losing, but that's just because he's my favourite wrestler!
-CM Punk interfering was predictable, but necessary for the angle I suppose, would've liked to have seen him interfere in maybe a more sneaky way or even botch the interference
A decent show, not spectactular but seeing as it's only your third show you'll improve no doubt. I'd be a bit more focused on developing feuds, but you have some interesting characters, especially Desmond Wolfe so will be good to see your next episode.
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