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Post by Deleted on Apr 28, 2012 9:40:48 GMT -5
Hey Guys! Thanks for your advice,
I am currently developing my arena but here is something I made in my spare time!
#1 Contender's Match for ETW Championship
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Post by Deleted on Apr 28, 2012 10:19:08 GMT -5
since this is only one match I would say i belongs more in either the pic fed sub board or the posing board other than that same stuff as usual love the posing work still need some arena fixing but the crowd looks pretty nice what're you using for that? like the music not really sure why though, still need string no real improvements since last time but that doesn't mean it's bad it just needs work
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Apr 28, 2012 11:02:10 GMT -5
I like the posing and the photography angles. The match itself was interesting, lost count of the near falls, but still interesting.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 28, 2012 11:26:39 GMT -5
Wasnt bad, nice crisp pics, decent action, tidy arena. Would like to see a proper pic fed from you with commentary and such.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 28, 2012 12:14:43 GMT -5
its in the works bro! Finishing new arena working on storylines! It will come bro! I was just putting that up to make sure i had something new up!
Thanks
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Post by T on Apr 28, 2012 12:59:56 GMT -5
+Decent match
+Cool entrance
-Not a fan of the YouTube setup
-No commentary
I think you need to branch out into a more tradition pic fed set out to your fed. Have full shows with commentary would improve it ten-fold, as I think you could run a pretty good fed.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 28, 2012 13:35:21 GMT -5
Hi Bro
thanks for the feedback!
Yeah i am currently starting my traditional fed!
Do you have any advice for me in how to run my own fed?
I would really appreciate it!
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Post by derekbrazen on Apr 29, 2012 12:59:30 GMT -5
I enjoyed watching that, most of the poses were quite good. The match told a decent story.
But, Im not a fan of the Youtube setup, and you could use commentary and real ref counts to improve your set up.
Over all it was good, hope you do more.
My advice when it comes to starting a pic fed is to pick a small roster, 12-16 people.
Most people do a tournament to crown a 1st heavyweight champion.
Start with a small roster, have a reason for your fed (title) and build characters thru backstage segments/promo/packages. Then after you've establsihed who your main event/middle card/jobbers are you can expand your roster.
I for one have a whole 1st season planned out, so I have real direction and a plan to stick to. Other write show by show, But I think its better to plan ahead.
Hope that helps.
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Post by danthecollector on Apr 29, 2012 16:24:20 GMT -5
I like it mate, I think this belongs in the Discussion part though, As it's not an entire show... It's just a match. But I really like the match, Good Job!
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