derekbrazen
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Post by derekbrazen on May 6, 2012 1:39:46 GMT -5
Hey Grant, nice to see some fresh blood here in the Pic-Fed section.
I don't have time to read it right now (2:40AM East Coast time) so I'll read it tomorrow and give you feed back.
But for future reference, you need to make a website for all these pics. RSC doesn't want to host your pics, they'd rather u make a free website (freewebs.com, proboards.com) post your pics there, THEN post a link in a thread here.
There's a chance a mod might delete this thread bc you didn't follow that rule.
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derekbrazen
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Post by derekbrazen on May 6, 2012 2:44:55 GMT -5
So I sat down n read this and I though it was good.
I'm happy you used Mattel Elite & Marvel TNA, and not JAKKS DA & Mattel Basic, bc the figs you used have more articulation which means more poses. I'm not a fan of the JAKKS TNA line bc they're not in scale w/ each other really and they don't size well with Mattel or Marvel figs.
You've got quite a few interesting story lines.
I'm curious how Cody/Sheamus will build/turn out.
Good match with Kane establishing him as a monster.
I liked the Yoshi/Miz match too.
The Main Event was very interesting, and I want to see how that story continues.
So overall I thought it was a good show, esp for a 1st timer.
But, your bedroom backdrop takes away from your fed. Try to get a plain black background, or print out a crowd and use that. Your goal should be to create a "world" in which your fed takes place in.
There were a few blurry pics, my advice is to take multiple shots of the same pose and then pick the best one.
Also a few pics were too dark, so work on the lighting.
I like the commercial breaks, it's realistic, and kind of sets up breaks for the reader.
I also like the dialog/commentary bubbles, and a small touch I like is the ref.
Again, good overall and I hope to see more from you.
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