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Post by Deleted on Jul 4, 2012 19:19:45 GMT -5
I decided to change style hope you'll like .. * And because of a technical problem I had to change ring
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Post by Deleted on Jul 5, 2012 6:32:31 GMT -5
Nice Effects bro! Decent clean shots! If you went traditional pic fed then i think u would have a decent show
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The Golden Gimmick
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...but brother, I am bad. And they know I’m bad.
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Post by The Golden Gimmick on Jul 5, 2012 15:12:42 GMT -5
Youtube feds are hard for me to get into, mainly because the lack of commentary kills it for me. This vid had nice effects, the length was decent. Context would be nice though, i.e. What's the occassion for the rumble? Is a belt on the line? How does it impact the fed as far as ramifications go? Things that commentary could solve.
The arena and set up are great. I did notice that right at the start you swapped rings as you noted. That 6 sided ring looked really small, I was wondering how it would play out in a rumble scenario. I think I would've preferred it if you re-shot the start with 1 ring, although I'm sure you put in a good amount of time with the animation and the previous shots to just re-shoot, so it's understandable.
I would like to see a standard pic fed from you, chalked full of commentary and the likes, as opposed to the Youtube thing, but I know there's people out there who prefer the whole Youtube, short and sweet style.
All in all, It was a good match, context would be nice just to know why there's a rumble and where it's headed to, if you decide to expand to an episodic format.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 7, 2012 4:07:49 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments I read the suggestions and I will try to apply them next time
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