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Post by Deleted on Jul 6, 2012 14:57:37 GMT -5
Hey Guys! This is a very early revealing of Episode 003! I decided to let it go early to really build the excitement for my first PPV "A New Beginning!" I will need quite a bit of time to work on the PPV! It will hopefully be up a week on Sunday! As usual FEEDBACK is what keeps me motivated! The more feedback the quicker and better the PPV will be I can assure you1 BTW thanks to Tyler and River Rebel for all their advice and comments! Thanks Guys and Enjoy! Jack fireballx90.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=general&action=display&thread=13 |
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Post by The Golden Gimmick on Jul 8, 2012 0:41:09 GMT -5
Here we go! Episode 3. The progression of Cena/Show is moving along nicely. Should pay off good at the PPV. (one thing, Vicki has her hand in the first two shots and then is missing her hand in the following shots. What happened there!?) Alright, a contract signing, let's make this HHH/Punk official. MUCH prefer the elite Sin Cara to the basic. Good choice on that. I notice you're using a lot of shots where you're still holding the figs. You might try and experiment with string or wire. Just see how if feels for you. If you're not comfortable with it, or it just doesn't work for you, you can always rely on the hand-held approach. But I think you're evolving enough to where you can at least test the waters and see where you stand on it. Very good match between Sin Cara and Bourne. Length was nice for an episode. The commentary is improving every episode. That's really nice to see. Ziggler vs. Del Rio at New Beginning! Solid match up. I'm a Ziggler guy  The show kind of ended suddenly after Cena dropped the AA. All in all, I think you're getting much better at evolving the storylines and setting up matches. New Beginning is gonna be sweet! |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2012 2:53:23 GMT -5
Thanks! Yeah i broke vickies hand  !!!!!!! Trying to get microphone in! I will try and use string a bit more in some shots! I am about to sit down and read through your episode 2 will give feedback wen done obviously! Thanks again |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2012 11:36:07 GMT -5
Hoping for a few more comments!
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Post by BrianBaker on Jul 11, 2012 15:31:41 GMT -5
This Will Probably BE Awesome
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Post by PhoeniX™: Valoween on Jul 15, 2012 13:31:48 GMT -5
Time to review show three! I hope you invest in a stage soon, as the rest of the arena is nice. Cena has a good point about Show screwing overs. Oooh, like the GM stipulation. The HHH and Punk contract signing should be good. Liked the opening match. Your poses and pace are definitely improving. Interesting idea with Show and Sheamus. Swagger vs......Savage? Interesting. Glad Savage won. Nice ring set-up for the contract signing. Haha, Punk resting his feet on the table. Ended in a fight. Surprised no-one went through the table though lol. Kelly Kelly won Christian didn't share his thoughts. His peeps will be upset. Dolph won decisively..wait, here is ADR! Should be a good match at A New Beginning. Big Show and Sheamus vs Cena and......Yoshi? Didn't see that one coming. Liked the fight at end, but as it a match? If so who won? Or was it thrown out when Sheamus and Tatsu thought out the arena? Nice show overall, a lot of improvements, can't wait for the PPV. |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 15, 2012 13:39:24 GMT -5
Yeah it kinda fell apart a bit in the end with tatsu and sheamus brawling backstage! Wanted to build the heat!
Thanks for the reply!
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Post by CWE OWNER on Jul 15, 2012 20:42:59 GMT -5
First complaint please dude your arena is calling out for a made up or any kind of entrance way Big Show vs Cena bit WWE like but liking it all the same. Where Vickie's hand ? Wow i'm jellous that Evan Bourne figure looks really good. And i'm speachless on the Evan , Cara match that was ace. I was really taken back by the poses. you excuted in there Sheamus and Show what an undefeatable team  Swagger vs .................... Arghhhh you commited the ultimate fed sinn in my book lol not your fault just i really don't dig passed guys in a modern fed. But good match non the less. Lol is everyone using my idea with the Punk trackies lol its cool Triple H / Punk fued should be good. Divas cool i'm not the only one. That damn Alberto !! Tatsu as the team partner of Cena. Its original i'll give you that lol Good fed man. Add an entrance ways and possibly a crowd and it will be more enjoyable tho. Really enjoyed it tho |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 16, 2012 3:01:41 GMT -5
Thanks for the reply! yeah vickies hand broke!!!!!!!
And today i am doing my arena!
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Post by hCo.Bro™ [brandon_lee] on Jul 16, 2012 21:58:16 GMT -5
I know Ive mentioned it before, but this so much better than the youtube style.
Cons:
The main fixes I can think of have already been mentioned. 1) Fix up some type of entrance stage! Even if you just added black material over the dresser? and put the ramp under it alittle ways. 2) Use string. Im not a hardass about this one as long as you cant obviously see your fingers. Plus you mix your angles up enough that it kinda blends and the figs hardly look stiff.
Some small things I can think of are Vickis hand and Christians arm during his promo. I dont know how you feel about superglue, but if it were me id rather have it stuck than missing! Christians arm shows how simple positioning can spoil a moment (hands and feet also).
Also something about your segment/match hype shots. I think they should be closer up, like waist up and use that curtain in the background closer behind them. I think it would look better than just two guys standing there.
Pros:
Its traditional syle! Really though, I like how you are playing fueds that are relatively fresh like Punk-Triple H, Sin Cara-Hunico, and Cena-Big Show. What I like is that dispite being done before, your doing a good job at making it unique to your fed. I wish youd use a different championship though, its hard to look past the big W in the middle of it. You are sparking originality with pushing Tatsu and Del Rio/ Ziggler.
You are doing great and pumping out shows/ matches left and right. I am glad you are starting to get some praise. Keep it up and thanks for sharing!
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