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Post by Deleted on Jul 9, 2012 2:44:32 GMT -5
I left the building on my crutches. Alex Shelly had offered to drive me back to Detriot. "What are you going to do now?" Alex asked "I'm thinking of retiring and staying home": I answered "You're going to do something" 'Alex said "Yeah, I'm going to take up golf" I joked "Yes, Very Funny" Alex said "I got it! Me and you start a wrestling School" "Your Joking right" "No, We can train young wrestlers" The next Night, Detroit Alex and I are walking to a old sporting arena "This building use to host Wrestling shows it's got a Titantron and the seats are set up, and the ring should be here tomorrow" I said We enter the building "We need a name" Alex said "MCW' I said "Let me geuss the belts are coming tomorrow" "Yes"
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Post by Deleted on Jul 9, 2012 2:47:46 GMT -5
[/img] [/center] Sign up: PIC: NAME: HOMETOWN: RINGNAME BIO FINISHERS: DIVISON(World,Tag Team, Hardcore, X):
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Post by FollowTheBuzzards on Jul 9, 2012 2:50:16 GMT -5
PIC: Jesse Sorrensen. NAME: Nicholas Starker HOMETOWN: Indianapolis, Indiana RINGNAME: Nicholas Casso BIO: Average 16 year old kid from Indiana, low-class. FINISHERS: ROugh neckbreaker. DIVISON(World,Tag Team, Hardcore, X): X-Division
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Post by Red Dragon on Jul 9, 2012 5:26:34 GMT -5
That was a pretty bad start to a diary. Things just seem to happen to fast. For example "Let's start a wrestling school", "your joking" and suddenly thier going through with it. Also the fact that the name was just decided like that, no thought process in there. Not even explaining what the letters meant. On top of that there are little mistakes and errors, one of your main guys names being spelt wrong, little grammar mistakes, no real punctuation. And an indy company just founded having a titiantron. The layout doesn't look that good either so you need to work on that. Looks like you want four divisions too, but your not going to get enough sign ups to fill four divisions. Esp with such a badly written start. Just stick to one division and grow as yoy go along. I can't see this doing too well, but I'd like to be proven wrong. Put effort into this and you'll see the results. Good luck. Sign up: PIC: www.wwepictures.co.cc/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/WWE-CM-Punk-Walking-of-Outside-of-The-Ring.jpgNAME: Samuel Jones HOMETOWN: Cardiff, Wales RINGNAME: Sam Kineval BIO: Young, brash and cocky FINISHERS: Chaos Death Shot (Reverse Gutbuster), Welcome to Kinevalville Motherf*cker (Diving Cutter) DIVISON(World,Tag Team, Hardcore, X): World
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Post by Deleted on Jul 9, 2012 6:53:36 GMT -5
PIC: Chris Jericho NAME: Tommy Staxx HOMETOWN: Bronx New York BIO: Charasmatic, brawler Finishers: Samoan Drop, Texas Piledriver Division(World,Tag Team, Hardcore, X): World
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Post by The Natural Eddy Valintino on Jul 9, 2012 12:43:02 GMT -5
Sign up: PIC: Eric Escobar NAME: Edgar DeHostos HOMETOWN: New York, New York RINGNAME: "The Natural" Eddy Valintino BIO: 25 year old charismatic wrestler who's cocky, but can back it up in the ring and can adjust to any style FINISHERS: The Third Degree (Pedigree), Senton Bomb DIVISION: X
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Post by Overnight Sensation on Jul 13, 2012 14:10:24 GMT -5
PIC: Davey Richards NAME: Anthony Richards HOMETOWN: Chicago IL RINGNAME "The Strong Style Icon"
BIO:Local Midwest Wrestling Star, Wrestles everywhere around the Midwest, a few shots at ROH, 2 tours of Japan. Well Decorated Veteran.
FINISHERS:A-R Driver (Tiger Bomb) Kimura DIVISON(World,Tag Team, Hardcore, X): World
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Post by ariestopdog on Jul 15, 2012 13:56:16 GMT -5
PIC: Trent Baretta NAME: Sawyer Calloway HOMETON: Country of Nebraska RINGNAME: Sawyer Calloway
Bio:face who loves to go high risk and fly.
FINISHERS: Angels Falling(450) Sky is the Limit(tilt-a-whirl DDT to outside of ring) DIVISION: Hardcore or Tag Team(someone can make an offer to be my partner but must be a face)
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