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Post by Deleted on Aug 2, 2012 22:31:53 GMT -5
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Post by punksnotdead851 on Aug 2, 2012 22:36:36 GMT -5
What about part 4...
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Post by Deleted on Aug 2, 2012 22:55:12 GMT -5
I mentioned it wouldn't be up until tomorrow morning. The wait is worth it though! |
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Post by punksnotdead851 on Aug 2, 2012 22:59:53 GMT -5
cool... thanks man. karma given..
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StingerSplash
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Give em' the Scorpion Death Drop.
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Post by StingerSplash on Aug 3, 2012 13:04:54 GMT -5
Hey! Sweet, a new fed!
First recommendations: Center your pics. It makes them look better. Also, put some space in between each photo. That way when you add commentary, it doesn't look so squished in between the pictures!
Where's the ref?!
Try and use string as well. It'll make your poses ten times better.
NICE string on the Ziggler dive to the outside. It wasn't edited, and the pose could use some work, but it's good to see you trying to use string. You'll catch on to it.
One thing I can comment on is the overhead camera angle you use a lot. Don't be afraid to shoot a shot with the ropes in the way. The overhead angle just looks a little off.
Miz and Jericho was a nice main event. Some good poses. String will help.
Overall, a good first effort. You have a pretty good foundation. Just a few production tweaks and you'll be good to go in no time! Looking forward to more!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 3, 2012 13:12:08 GMT -5
Hey! Sweet, a new fed! First recommendations: Center your pics. It makes them look better. Also, put some space in between each photo. That way when you add commentary, it doesn't look so squished in between the pictures! Where's the ref?! Try and use string as well. It'll make your poses ten times better. NICE string on the Ziggler dive to the outside. It wasn't edited, and the pose could use some work, but it's good to see you trying to use string. You'll catch on to it. One thing I can comment on is the overhead camera angle you use a lot. Don't be afraid to shoot a shot with the ropes in the way. The overhead angle just looks a little off. Miz and Jericho was a nice main event. Some good poses. String will help. Overall, a good first effort. You have a pretty good foundation. Just a few production tweaks and you'll be good to go in no time! Looking forward to more! Thanks for your input! Im starting Episode 002 on Tuesday, ill be using string alot. Damn cruiserweights. Haha. |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 3, 2012 13:31:31 GMT -5
OK well i have sat down and going to go through your show! Before i start check out my fed which is called ETW! I have done 3 shows and a PPV!
Here we go........
First of nice arena entrance way! Good to see! Maybe add your shows logo!
OK R Truth, champion vs champion nice! Nice match! Some of the poses were a bit stiff! But it flowed well!
Nice backstage area and look foward to the extreme rules match!
Very nice effects bro! And also love the wasy you do your entrance's!
Another decent match! Less stiff poses and glad dolph won!
Loved the main event very well put together!
My tips would be:
1) MORE commentary! A bit more would make it better!
2) Also maybe add a commentary team, with a table! That would also improve it!
Well Done though on a very good first show!
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Aug 3, 2012 17:48:20 GMT -5
I'm in a bit of a lull right now, both as a fedder and a follower so I excuse the short replies, but I still want to at least let you know I checked out your show and it was pretty well done for a first episode. The first show is always hard to knock out, nobody knows you and you are just getting those feuds and storylines going, making people fall in love with the characters and the fed takes a bit of time, but I think you are definitely heading in the right direction, man.  Oh, yeah, you said it yourself, that you had a lot of fun doing it, that's the most important part of it, so just keep going, bro. |
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Tyler Black
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the former #1 Tyler Black fan/Tyler F'n Black
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Post by Tyler Black on Aug 3, 2012 18:22:35 GMT -5
Awesome new fed
First off love the entrance way
cool champions match love that u have a CW title it looks really cool would love to see a close up pic
As others have already said stiff poses try bending all the joints nice dive to the outside with ziggler
overall I loved it can't wait for episode two looking forward to the cw's (cruiserweights) most wish all feds had a cw division sorry for short reply
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Post by East Coast on Aug 4, 2012 18:31:04 GMT -5
i checked them all out. Not bad. I agree w/ other posters.....some poses were stiff and u need a referee.
maybe find shorter themes. I found when i would get to the next entrance....I would have to scroll up to stop the other one....before i started the next wrestlers them. Maybe find 30 second themes.
pretty good first effort.
for some shots that were too dark, u can always use Pic Monkey to edit pics
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Post by punksnotdead851 on Aug 5, 2012 10:09:49 GMT -5
That is good. Is that IC title silver?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 5, 2012 13:26:41 GMT -5
That is good. Is that IC title silver? Yeah, the gold faded. |
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Post by punksnotdead851 on Aug 7, 2012 22:16:45 GMT -5
Oh that is weird...
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