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Post by pxkgotosleep on Oct 10, 2012 10:53:03 GMT -5
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Tyler Black
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Post by Tyler Black on Oct 10, 2012 11:04:11 GMT -5
I love it so far nice pictures good champions looking foward to this!
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Post by pxkgotosleep on Oct 10, 2012 11:10:16 GMT -5
I love it so far nice pictures good champions looking foward to this! Thanks. Keep refreshing as I'm constantly working on it. Do the pictures seem a good size so far? Is the white on black easy to read?
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Post by hCo.Bro™ [brandon_lee] on Oct 10, 2012 11:23:05 GMT -5
The pictures are a great size and text is very easy to read. Everything looks crisp so far. My only recommendation would be to add a black back drop to the other side of the ring or white on the other side. Looking good man, hope you hang with it!
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Just checked out part two, and Im actually getting excited about this. I thought you had somthing when you posted that recap type show earlier.
I know its early to tell, and I sense you want to stay close to the current format, but I might consider merging the TV title with the X division or World. I think you said the roster you posted wasnt the full one, but getting rid of one of the singles titles might help beef up the tag division or other singles. Keep it coming man.
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Post by pxkgotosleep on Oct 10, 2012 13:52:35 GMT -5
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Tyler Black
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Post by Tyler Black on Oct 10, 2012 17:10:41 GMT -5
just watched all four pages very awesome stuff i loved it. Very nice camera quality and it looks like you pumped some serious $ into this fed, with the ring skirt and titles and clothing loved the promos cant wait till you finish!
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Oct 10, 2012 17:44:20 GMT -5
Wow, that's crispy photography. Everything is looking very neat so far, love the fact that you went out of your way to get everybody clothes. Looking forward to the finished product.
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Post by pxkgotosleep on Oct 10, 2012 18:17:24 GMT -5
The pictures are a great size and text is very easy to read. Everything looks crisp so far. My only recommendation would be to add a black back drop to the other side of the ring or white on the other side. Looking good man, hope you hang with it! *EDIT* Just checked out part two, and Im actually getting excited about this. I thought you had somthing when you posted that recap type show earlier. I know its early to tell, and I sense you want to stay close to the current format, but I might consider merging the TV title with the X division or World. I think you said the roster you posted wasnt the full one, but getting rid of one of the singles titles might help beef up the tag division or other singles. Keep it coming man. Thank you so much to everybody who has checked it out and is as excited as I am, most of you post your own feds which have inspired me to start myself. Currently looking at the division's, I think I'm doing okay. I've dropped the Knockout Tag Titles, as (although loosely) this fed is suppost to be based around 2010. I currently have Team 3D, Steiner/Booker T, MotorCity Machine Guns, Beer Money, Raven/Stevie Richards, L.A.X, Kevin Nash/Sting and a couple other teams that I could probably put together. - Don't forget the Hardyz! The T.V Title is very difficult to book for (because I got rid off my Rob Terry figure! Damn.) mainly because of how TNA just completely threw the title down the drain the last couple of years.
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Post by pxkgotosleep on Oct 11, 2012 10:28:45 GMT -5
Half finished through the first match on the show! New to using string.
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The Warsman
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Post by The Warsman on Oct 14, 2012 11:18:43 GMT -5
Pics are a good size, i like the contrast of your text. Your background is plain, but with a lot of effort, you can overcome a bad setup with a lot of action and great posing. Let's see...
Whats up with the pink belt strap on AJ's title? Is that a real title? You have a lot great R alph gear, and I for one like the inclusion of music on shows, so Hulk's theme starting was a great thing. Maybe find one to open the show?
Kind of a long segment to open the show, but...that's TNA, brother, lol. It did set up the fed nicely, and let viewers see where the ship's headed in the coming weeks.
I liked the slow pan up on your female ring announcer...until we saw her face. Ouch. Lol. Is that a big mole on the bridge of her nose near her right eye? Lol
The black and white background is a strange contrast, maybe just go with black as it makes the arena seem larger.
Sabu-Amazing Red, no commentary? Did someone cut the mics? Wild brawls need commentary to let the viewers know exactly whats going on.
The Sabu arabian facebuster to the table was very cool, but next time maybe crop out your finger holding the string. Its still a cool shot, but its the little details...
The ending was odd due to no visible 1,2,3 but i guess AR won? He kinda raised his hand like...I won? Lol
Page 7 only loads the header? No action? Is the show finished or not? If not, wait until your show is finished to post.
Lots of potential, good luck!
Wars
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Post by pxkgotosleep on Oct 14, 2012 13:47:30 GMT -5
Pics are a good size, i like the contrast of your text. Your background is plain, but with a lot of effort, you can overcome a bad setup with a lot of action and great posing. Let's see... Whats up with the pink belt strap on AJ's title? Is that a real title? You have a lot great R alph gear, and I for one like the inclusion of music on shows, so Hulk's theme starting was a great thing. Maybe find one to open the show? The title is indeed real, that's the TV Title (Global/Legends title). Unfortunately, something came up and I've been unable to add commentary till now. Shame that I Missed a picture out during my editing, will look through them all again to make sure. Thanks for all your views Wars, I'll definitely work on the points you've made.
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Post by zulitethegreat173 on Oct 14, 2012 20:18:20 GMT -5
Dude I got to page six & found myself double checking TNA Facts. I thought I was seeing a TNA recap from a real show of Impact. Dude great story Love where it's going & the first match looked great
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Post by pxkgotosleep on Oct 16, 2012 19:04:56 GMT -5
Huge update! Including: Tara vs Daffney /with the Gathering. The Return of L.A.X.
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Tyler Black
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Post by Tyler Black on Oct 16, 2012 19:52:33 GMT -5
theres no link anymore to page six it stops at page 5
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Post by Deleted on Oct 16, 2012 20:32:23 GMT -5
looks really good, definitely beats the hell out of my TNA attempt. I like the storylines you got going on and I love the LAX return although I kinda wish Hernandez was there. In any case I like this ongoing thing you got going on but I feel if you posted the whole show at once later on you would get more feedback. a crowd would be nice but I think that's about it besides that I love what you have going and can't wait for page 12& more
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Post by pxkgotosleep on Oct 17, 2012 6:14:34 GMT -5
theres no link anymore to page six it stops at page 5 Thanks. I'll fix that right now. I feel if you posted the whole show at once later on you would get more feedback. Thanks for your input, this will be the only time I talk about parts before the entire thing is posted. I just wanted input to make sure picture size, font, etc. was all good. As well as music links and broken stuff. Makes life a lot easier in the long run. But seems I'm doing an alright job
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Post by Deleted on Oct 17, 2012 6:33:49 GMT -5
Hey Bro! I havent had a look at your fed at all...... I am about to read through and have a look at your photo's. I will then edit this and gve you as detailed a response as i can. *RESPONSE* Like the fact you are using Tazz and Foley.... great duo and I am sure you will be able to make the fed interesting. Also love how you are doing a TNA fed. We don't get enough of those so i congratulate you on that. Your Champions I would say are pretty standard and I look forward to seeing where you take them. Hopefully I will see lots of originality throughout your fed. Also love your custom tops on AJ and on MCMG makes it more realistic. Nice to see Hogan in your show and your quality is AWESOME! Awesome Kendrick VS Red should be SICK! Awesome! The action Starts Next! Your photos are awesome and your layout is as good defo bro. Nice to see Flair in your show. Looks like you are really structuring your divisions which is nice to see. Here we go with some action. Some of your poses were good but some not so. Just get plenty of practice in working with string and u will get better. But overall i enjoyed the match but i have to sayt i would like a bit more commentary to be honest I applaud you for having a divas division. The match was good and you paced the match well. I will be interested where you take the LAX stuff! I love those figs bro!
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Post by pxkgotosleep on Oct 17, 2012 13:26:34 GMT -5
Hurray! 2 more pages done.
Once I've finished episode 1, episode 2 should take around a month and I'll just post it straight to the other board instead of us discussing it.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 17, 2012 18:13:46 GMT -5
while the Hardy segment was freaking incredible what happened to the 3 on 3 tag match?
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Post by pxkgotosleep on Oct 17, 2012 18:18:24 GMT -5
while the Hardy segment was freaking incredible what happened to the 3 on 3 tag match? It's coming! I would of kept working on it but webs.com completely shut me down today. Not sure what happened too it.
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