Dustin
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Joined on: Feb 10, 2013 2:14:37 GMT -5
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meh
Feb 24, 2013 1:17:13 GMT -5
Post by Dustin on Feb 24, 2013 1:17:13 GMT -5
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meh
Feb 24, 2013 11:08:10 GMT -5
Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Feb 24, 2013 11:08:10 GMT -5
Pretty decent animation from you there Dustin. At the beginning I really like the running going into the Lionsault but it seemed a little stiff in the back. I think the spacing in the Lionsault was a little bit off because of the position you put the green stick, perhaps if you moved the green stick a bit farther it would have flowed better and look more realistic. The Lionsault itself looked a bit stiff and choppy in mid air but I like the impact and reaction.
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Dustin
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Joined on: Feb 10, 2013 2:14:37 GMT -5
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meh
Feb 24, 2013 13:18:20 GMT -5
Post by Dustin on Feb 24, 2013 13:18:20 GMT -5
thanks for the comment mac!
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Sicks
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Joined on: Jan 20, 2013 17:55:54 GMT -5
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meh
Feb 26, 2013 6:31:03 GMT -5
Post by Sicks on Feb 26, 2013 6:31:03 GMT -5
Overall: Simple animation where you could have work on some parts.
Pros: The background is very effective for me. Impact might be the only part where I would not change something, altought the receiving sticks might need a couple extra frames on those reactions.
Cons: The running is a bit too fast and choppy, same as air time wich deserves more air time to sell that impact properly. Make that receiving stick move a bit more while purple is in mid air.
Keep up the good work Dustin!
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meh
Feb 28, 2013 10:50:29 GMT -5
Post by alexgg on Feb 28, 2013 10:50:29 GMT -5
The running is getting better, but try to land the feet a little more forward each step and try to bend the back a little bit more. It felt a little choppy going into the lionsault. Animation is pretty stiff throughout though, but the movements were good all the way through including the airtime.
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