Takerfan814
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Post by Takerfan814 on Mar 24, 2013 0:39:04 GMT -5
WWEAFS is the newest show hitting the world! World Wrestling Entertainment is this show! Our first show is the Royal Rumble! We have 3 Raw shows in between every pay per view and im going to be trying my best every show! I know the first two matches have the pictures long but I noticed this and changed it for the last two...enjoy the show! Please tell me how I did! I will take all into consideration and try even better for Monday Night Raw! Here's the show... wweafs.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=payperviews&action=display&thread=9 |
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Post by T on Mar 24, 2013 5:08:33 GMT -5
First impressions:
+Match lengths were good, maybe a touch long. Could you keep that up for each show though?
+Commentary was good and nice to see Styles with Mean Gene
+You've got lots of figs, so hopefully you can pick the right ones to use well
Development points:
-Poses were very stiff. Have a look at FIW and C2W or the Poses Board for some good examples
-Commentary text could do with being a bit smaller
-I hope you'll start to mix up the feuds a bit - we had Sheamus/Del Rio and now Punk/Taker, both of which we've had in the WWE recently
-Resize the pics
-Camera angles sometimes made it hard to tell what was going on, particularly the overhead one. I'd stick to a side on.
For a first show, it's about par for the course. I'm sure you'll get better. Check out some of the other shows on the board for ideas on presentation (again, C2W uses the Proboards format so you can see how big pictures can be and text). Looking forward to seeing what you produce next time!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 24, 2013 13:41:24 GMT -5
Hey Man, nice to see some new blood around here, I am going to take Titch's feedback set up as I feel it works well and is clear.
Positives
+I thought you put a good amount of effort into your matches that is very clear which is a very good thing to have as it means that hopefull having short matches and such wont be a problem.
+Your figures are mostly pretty new which I feel makes your fed seem pretty unique. We dont have to many mattel shows atm really.
Negatives
-Poses were siff throughout. What I mean by that is that the poses had joints that didn't fit how the person is meant to do the move. Look at other peoples poese, they move every joint to make sure it looks realistic.
-As I said above your originality with using newish figures is good but I will have to agree with titch when referring to your "WWE" like rivalries. Dont be afraid to go for something different.
-Your pictures seem to long and narrow, try and size them down abit.
-Camera angles seemed a bit high for me. Look at other shows angles they are more down and like "Pro-Wrestling" angles.
-The text was pretty big and a bit of puting for me.
It wasn't a bad first show but there is alot of room for work. Try and get the basics right and I am sure you will do well.
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Rxlph Lxuren
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Post by Rxlph Lxuren on Mar 24, 2013 17:48:04 GMT -5
Basically The Same Tery one Else thing Every One Else Said But You Shold Get Rid of Headless On The Ref Or Give Him A Head
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Takerfan814
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Post by Takerfan814 on Mar 24, 2013 20:46:07 GMT -5
Thanks for all the tips guys! What do you think is a good size for font? And im going to play around with storyline, one more thing...how can I mass change the size of all the photos? Like after I upload them to my computer?
Thanks again
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Post by deskjet on Mar 25, 2013 7:21:52 GMT -5
couldnt even watch it becasue the pics were ginormous! From what I saw poses were stiff and arena looked bland. Cant offer much advice if I cant watch it.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 1, 2013 10:44:04 GMT -5
i like when peopel mix legends with the current wwe stars
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Post by Deleted on Aug 1, 2013 10:45:19 GMT -5
joey style and mean gene definitely was a interesting combo choice
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Post by attitudesback on Aug 9, 2013 13:48:07 GMT -5
Foundations of a good fed, but again, maybe better lighting, so we can see what's happening a little more. I can tell there was a lot of work on this but I think maybe work on some poses; check the poses board for a few FAQ. I think for a first show it was pretty good, mix up the feuds a little and I think we could be on to a good show!  |
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