Takerfan814
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Joined on: Nov 21, 2011 19:08:05 GMT -5
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Post by Takerfan814 on Mar 28, 2013 16:11:24 GMT -5
We are just coming off our first show, the Royal Rumble! Come and see what's going to happen on our first ever Raw! wweafs.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=rawshow&thread=11&page=1(I took your guys tips into consideration, resized the photos, look at other feds, change font size and attempted to but less stiff, feel free to join the board to keep up to date! Thanks for checking it out! I appreciate it  ) |
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Post by T on Mar 29, 2013 4:29:54 GMT -5
Hey man, nice to see a new show up so quickly. -Presentation immediately looks 10x better with the resized text and pics -Main event should be good -Interesting end to the Rey match, don't think I've seen that before in a pic fed -The Henry/Riley match was the type of match I fast forward through each week on the real Raw. I hope you can do something different with his gimmick -Wouldn't mind Punk facing any of these three men -Main event was entertaining and looking forward to the Punk/Batista feud Overall a decent follow-up show. Presentation was much better and you have some interesting storylines that you can start to develop. Major bug again would be the poses. Compare your tie-up pose, for example, with C2W's.   You need to bend the knees and use the hip joints more as a lot of the time the legs just seem uncomfortably straight. All it takes is a little tweak and it'll make a big difference. You took the advice on board last time though, so hopefully you'll do the same again. P.S. I'd appreciate you viewing and replying to my show, and so would wwefan617, Jack and brm. Viewing other shows will help you get more ideas and it's also good etticate.  |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Apr 2, 2013 22:29:30 GMT -5
Just stopping by to drop a quick reply.
I think that you have a good grasp on how to develop feuds, which is great. But I think that your weakest area is your posing.
You really need to bend the joints to make some of the shots look more realistic. At times, some of the figures' joints are twisted at awkward angles. Paying attention to small details will make your shows much more clean and enjoyable.
Overall, I enjoyed following the storylines, but would like to see more realistic poses. I'm looking forward to seeing you improve with your next show.
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Takerfan814
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Joined on: Nov 21, 2011 19:08:05 GMT -5
Posts: 291
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Post by Takerfan814 on Apr 3, 2013 14:15:32 GMT -5
Thanks for the replys and the feedback, Im almost finished Raw #2 and ive been working more on my poses, also I have a crowd now to. So im slowly getting better! Hopefully I keep improving!
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