WWEAFS Raw #2

Hey, great to see another show out from you so soon

-The first picture is a massive difference from the first pic of your debut show



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That in itself shows how far you've come on!

-Would've liked Teddy Long to have just said to Eddie to find another partner rather than vacate the titles
-Poses could still do with a bit of work - bend those knees and move those hips!
-Tag match could've been
-Pretty good interview from Punk, got his character across well there
-Was just about to say that I didn't like Henry doing his usual WWE thing of beating up someone random, but it was to set up the Cena match so fair play
-Kane/HBK could be a good match if set up for NWO
-Didn't like the overhead camera angle you used for the main event, preferred the more standard TV angle
-Enjoyed the ending, smart having Batista go over Del Rio rather than Punk

Another good show, you can definitely tell that you're listening to everyone's advice and you've improved greatly since the RR debut event.

The main thing to work on now is your poses. Too many of them just look like the figures lying down with the occasional arm movement. It would be a shame for this not to be sorted in time for your No Way Out event, as poses do take away quite a lot from a show. Have a look at C2W and FIW shows, and go over to the Poses board for some tips. Hell, even copy some poses exactly, even the camera angle, and that'll help you get used to the different poses.

I always think - "what would this arm be doing? Where should his head be facing?"

E.g.

Batista's left arm wouldn't be like that.



That one's perfect. Right arm is lifting Punk up, left arm supporting his head, Punk's holding onto Batista. Massive difference. Just goes to show you can do it!

It's a shame you didn't get signed up to the Pic Fed Festival in time as this would've been good there. Maybe next time!