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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2013 17:16:50 GMT -5
Hi everyone, this is my first attempt at a pic fed so I need as much help as I can get, lol But anyway, heres my first show, I hope you enjoy aweofficial.freeforums.net/
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Post by T on May 25, 2013 17:33:39 GMT -5
Nice to see a new fed on the board. -Liked Bossman being Vince's security. Hopefully he becomes a character rather than just using the figure as a security guard -Some dodgy poses in the Miz/Morrison match, glad to see Miz go through -Ryback will take some beating -Cena/Jericho was very chaotic. Better poses/better commentary could have helped to texplain what's going on -Two Kanes is a pretty cool idea Nice effort for your first show. The camera had a weird red hue on it, it seems, which affected picture quality. Poses will improve as you do more shows. Would change DiBiase from your referee, as I kept thinking he was a wrestler. Either get a different ref in an official outfit, or just don't bother with one, which other people do and it works fine. Hopefully the Sheamus/Vince feud will develop, as that interests me. Looking forward to your next effort.
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2013 17:58:02 GMT -5
Thanks, this was my first time uploading like 100 photos and some got lost, I will hopefully put everything together more smoothly for ep.2 and I have a ref shirt which I forgot I had, I will use it on ep.2 and If I can't fix the issue with the camera I'll just use a different one. Thank you for looking
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Post by Wicked on May 26, 2013 9:12:27 GMT -5
Nice try. I enjoy the story but I think you should try to work on some posses.
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The Shiniest Wizard
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Post by The Shiniest Wizard on May 27, 2013 13:09:19 GMT -5
I agree, good ideas, but I recommend three things: 1) New Camera...worked for my shows. 2) Poses could use some work, but I'm pretty sure those will get better over time. 3) Get a referee I suggest going to eBay and buying a referee shirt and pants. Can't wait for you next episode, I'll stay tuned my friend!
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Takerfan814
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Post by Takerfan814 on Jun 6, 2013 3:38:00 GMT -5
Not a bad show man. For sure needs some work but nobody's perfect! Just dont give up. Ill be checking out the next episode!
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