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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2013 0:02:25 GMT -5
I apologize in advance for this episode in advance, it was filled with lighting and computer issues, and right when I was about to finish uploading the 2nd half, I accidentally hit the back button and lost all my progress. Most of the matches I lost were on the short side anyway, and all the storylines are addressed in the first half. I honestly do not have time to start over on this show, seeing as I have to complete Over the Limit: Freedomania by july 1st. So here are the results of the 4 lost matches: Ryback def. Miz, Chris Jericho def. Christian, Edge def. Kane and Del Rio won the battle royal for his team. With all that being said, I hope you enjoy this half of raw and please forgive me  I will try to make sure this doesn't happen again. aweofficial.freeforums.net/thread/5/raw-episode-3-1 |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 20, 2013 1:29:30 GMT -5
It's a bit rough, honestly, but I'm guessing from your sig, that you're a younger dude. So props for putting together a show at all. I kind of got the feeling that you were basically just playing the matches and taking a few pictures along the way. So in that sense, I liked it. Always fun to a get a bit of a hint of that childhood enthusiasm.
I liked the end where Cena ran Funkasaurous into the post. Good way to set up a future match.
Probably my main complaint, oddly enough, would be that you took your photos on the side of the ring where it's tied together. We can see the little band holding them together. I think it would look nicer if you turned the ring around so that we don't see that in almost every shot. Other than that, work on the posing a bit, general presentation, and you'll have yourself a nice little show.
Of course, the most important thing is to keep having fun and I get the feeling that you're doing that, so good job.
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Post by T on Jun 20, 2013 15:09:36 GMT -5
-Interesting start to the show, glad to see Rey/Cara prove their point and get the win
-Not sure what your point of the Big Show match was. Could've had an attack after or a beat down or something
-Nice end with Cena finally calling out the pscyho fan. That match should be good
Poses are still a bit sloppy. The knees on the figures could do with being bent, as some pictures they were just very rigid, or it looked like they were leaning on things rather than standing independently. Over The Limit: Freedomania can be really good, but I recommend you try very hard with poses and presentation there, as there will be quite a few people who maybe don't view your show normally viewing it, and you want to put on a top show so that they will want to carry on viewing your subsequent shows.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 20, 2013 23:07:49 GMT -5
Thanks for the replies guys The big show match was actually part of the 2nd round of the tournament that's been going on since the beginning, the other 3 matches weren't uploaded for reasons stated above, but they weren't very good anyway. I may upload the team battle royal much later as a "dark match" because I thought that was decent. Anyway here are the semifinal matches to take place next week: Jericho vs. Edge Big Show vs. Ryback. I have taken your advice into account and I think episode 4 will be really, really good |
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