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Post by fall on Jul 23, 2013 6:27:00 GMT -5
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Post by deskjet on Jul 23, 2013 10:41:33 GMT -5
Welcome back. For a short show that was pretty entertaining. The lighing effect with the camera, intentional or not, looks pretty cool presentation wise. Arena looks good, and poses were pretty good. Except with a short match I woulda tried to put some time into editing string, but that's just me. So are you back full time?
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Post by fall on Jul 23, 2013 10:47:08 GMT -5
Welcome back. For a short show that was pretty entertaining. The lighing effect with the camera, intentional or not, looks pretty cool presentation wise. Arena looks good, and poses were pretty good. Except with a short match I woulda tried to put some time into editing string, but that's just me. So are you back full time? I'm far too lazy to be editing string haha. This I feel wa more of a warm up show. Think of it as part time. |
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Post by Wicked on Jul 23, 2013 13:34:18 GMT -5
That was great. I loved it all. Great Job. I really like the Indy feeling. I loved the buckle bomb reversal.there were very inventive spots and moves. Great job. I can't wait for the next one. I was really hoping for London to pull out the win and hit the london star press. I just seen London vs. Richards at Border Wars. It was great. I like the selection of wrestlers too. I wouldn't worry about string. It looked great. It was a great short show. 4 out of 5 stars ****.
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Post by billthomson1984 on Jul 23, 2013 14:18:36 GMT -5
I really enjoyed this match and can't wait to see more
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Post by Deleted on Jul 23, 2013 14:58:06 GMT -5
Good Match ! London loose  |
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Post by @brit_figs on Jul 23, 2013 15:20:44 GMT -5
OOOOHHHH MAAAAA GAWDDDD. so yeah i totally just cameo'ed in my first pic fed show. BUZZZZING! ya know tbh when you said im only gonna do the one match i was abit like awww because i was so hyped for like a propa show but wowwwweee did you impress with the one match. first of all, just gonna say great little arena. always loved that style of arena since day dot anyway, sick guard rails as well bro. anyway onto the actually match, great great choice of wrestlers, was shocked at when Tatanka came from behind the curtain but mannnn did you use him well. very Elgin. at first i thought 'ahhh Samoa Joe like substitute' but man he came into his own with the chops etc. great poses throughout, i am not even hating on the string because the light background most of the time cancels out the fact that there is even string visable. favorite moment in the match had to be the huge moonsault of course, but more specifically Londons direct talking to the camera. the whole match / arena everything reminded me of PWG, what with the side of the ring canvas bumps and the brawls in the chairs on the outside. very very entertaining, and well thought out. the match i guess could of gone on for longer but i really was happy with what was produced to be honest man. like you said this is just a sort of warm up match so i can only dream of what you got planned for the future shows / matches whatever. Londons comment at the end got me very excited and i nearly marked out as much as i did finding out that i was the freakin announcer for the match.
BARKER: sick comeback match Alex, absolutely thrilled to have you back bro~!
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Post by T on Jul 23, 2013 15:34:54 GMT -5
Very nice match. Poses were great and there were lots of creative spots. Would be interesting to see how full, regular shows would go for you, as this was definitely a PPV quality match. If you could produce matches like these for your normal shows, then I can't wait. A small nit-pick would be that you had chairs there for a crowd, but had no one sitting in them, so when a guy got whipped "into the crowd", he just got whipped into chairs. Like I say, only a small nitpick, was very impressed with the rest of the match.
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Post by fall on Jul 23, 2013 15:40:45 GMT -5
Very nice match. Poses were great and there were lots of creative spots. Would be interesting to see how full, regular shows would go for you, as this was definitely a PPV quality match. If you could produce matches like these for your normal shows, then I can't wait. A small nit-pick would be that you had chairs there for a crowd, but had no one sitting in them, so when a guy got whipped "into the crowd", he just got whipped into chairs. Like I say, only a small nitpick, was very impressed with the rest of the match. Ill go through and give responses to everyone later but as far as the crowd goes, I have enough figures for an entire custom crowd, however I just the arena looks much more clean and tidy with out them. |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 23, 2013 15:54:23 GMT -5
For a short show I found this entertaining. The posing was very nice here, really liked them and they fitted in wioth the background well. Some werea tad stiff though but thats being picky. Maybe find a way to edit the string. I use PhotoFiltre, it is very easy and works well. Anyways, the flow and storytelling was good, commentary was simple but I like it like that. I really liked how u captured all of the styles in this match so well done for that. Loved the ending sequence. It was a great match.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 23, 2013 15:59:12 GMT -5
Very nice match. Poses were great and there were lots of creative spots. Would be interesting to see how full, regular shows would go for you, as this was definitely a PPV quality match. If you could produce matches like these for your normal shows, then I can't wait. A small nit-pick would be that you had chairs there for a crowd, but had no one sitting in them, so when a guy got whipped "into the crowd", he just got whipped into chairs. Like I say, only a small nitpick, was very impressed with the rest of the match. Ill go through and give responses to everyone later but as far as the crowd goes, I have enough figures for an entire custom crowd, however I just the arena looks much more clean and tidy with out them. Well thats cool but I think Titch is right, It would be a lot better with a crowd IMO But I have to say, this match was awesome and I hope to see more  |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 24, 2013 11:19:17 GMT -5
Ill go through and give responses to everyone later but as far as the crowd goes, I have enough figures for an entire custom crowd, however I just the arena looks much more clean and tidy with out them. Well thats cool but I think Titch is right, It would be a lot better with a crowd IMO But I have to say, this match was awesome and I hope to see more I disagree with them. I think without the crowd it gives a more up close and personal / indy feel to it. The crowd would be too distracting unless you had this big arena for it. |
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Post by slowgraffiti on Jul 28, 2013 13:51:18 GMT -5
Good to see one of my old school pic fed dudes back in action, got all nostalgic at the thank yous, felt like the good old days when we all had our on/off feds existing in our own little universe, little nods here and there. Really enjoyed the match, plenty of action, and just from the way it was shot, the layout of the arena, felt like a real throwback to the 05-08 indy pic feds on here, which I obviously love. Interesting using Tatanka in alongside those guys, but I feel it worked. It's a tantalising thread to dangle before us, and it's definitely got me excited for more in the near future (hopefully!)
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Post by fall on Jul 28, 2013 14:52:41 GMT -5
Good to see one of my old school pic fed dudes back in action, got all nostalgic at the thank yous, felt like the good old days when we all had our on/off feds existing in our own little universe, little nods here and there. Really enjoyed the match, plenty of action, and just from the way it was shot, the layout of the arena, felt like a real throwback to the 05-08 indy pic feds on here, which I obviously love. Interesting using Tatanka in alongside those guys, but I feel it worked. It's a tantalising thread to dangle before us, and it's definitely got me excited for more in the near future (hopefully!) That's the exact feel I was going for buddy. I want to bring back some real fedding to this board. Titch is doing a good job with his. But really I haven't seen much else lately that made me think of the good ol days. |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2013 15:57:56 GMT -5
Fantastic match Fall, it was exciting from start to finish the poses were really good especially the pose of london jumping off the turnbuckle, to do the hurricanrana on Tatanka , your arena is good very indy like great match and there were some great spots in the match like the big swing/drop kick, and when london jumped 20ft of the scaffold onto Kash and Tatanka. it's good to see you pic fedding again Fall. |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2013 16:15:07 GMT -5
Okey dokey Fall lets see what you got here.
Okay one match , first off kudos for you using at the very least a back white background and a somewhat understated entrance but here's the first glaring gripe I have, it looks to cookie cutter from all the other indy feds I seen. I can add at least five guys name to this and I wouldn't be able to tell your fed apart from there's. You should of done something to separate your fed from the herd so it doesn't look like every one else's. Okay on to the action three way dance, WHOA! Tatanka, didn't see that one coming. Action good throughout lots of moves and poses but the string is really bothering me. I know you said you are too lazy but it really took away from what you were trying to do here. I mean when I think Indy wrestling I expect big, over the top high flying moves and seeing the string not only took away from that but also took away from the hard work you did actually setting the move up! Hopefully next show you will remove it as I think your fed will benefit immensely from it. Hate Paul London, but the way you used him was unique and fresh. This fed reminds me of the early days of fedding and that has pluses and minuses for me. I mean you were probably in your early teens when you first started pic fedding so one would assume that as you grow and mature as a pic fedder your fed should reflect that. I know this is only your first show back and all, just hoping the next show, or a one match as this one is, you add a lot more pizzazz to draw me in and keep me interested. Customs, more detailed arena ( a crowd would work great here) and maybe some back stage vignettes is really what pic fedding is all about and I would love to see what kind of stuff you can come up with. For right now I enjoyed it, a little too much of what I seen from other indy fedders, but lots of room for improvement and such.
If you need any tips or advice or want to just bounce ideas off of someone I am always available to help out.
Congrats on after all the hype and stalls you made your match!
Now get to work on a full show!!! Congrats and thanks for posting!
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Post by fall on Jul 28, 2013 19:12:32 GMT -5
Fantastic match Fall, it was exciting from start to finish the poses were really good especially the pose of london jumping off the turnbuckle, to do the hurricanrana on Tatanka , your arena is good very indy like great match and there were some great spots in the match like the big swing/drop kick, and when london jumped 20ft of the scaffold onto Kash and Tatanka. it's good to see you pic fedding again Fall. Thanks man! I appreciate it! Okey dokey Fall lets see what you got here. Okay one match , first off kudos for you using at the very least a back white background and a somewhat understated entrance but here's the first glaring gripe I have, it looks to cookie cutter from all the other indy feds I seen. I can add at least five guys name to this and I wouldn't be able to tell your fed apart from there's. You should of done something to separate your fed from the herd so it doesn't look like every one else's. Okay on to the action three way dance, WHOA! Tatanka, didn't see that one coming. Action good throughout lots of moves and poses but the string is really bothering me. I know you said you are too lazy but it really took away from what you were trying to do here. I mean when I think Indy wrestling I expect big, over the top high flying moves and seeing the string not only took away from that but also took away from the hard work you did actually setting the move up! Hopefully next show you will remove it as I think your fed will benefit immensely from it. Hate Paul London, but the way you used him was unique and fresh. This fed reminds me of the early days of fedding and that has pluses and minuses for me. I mean you were probably in your early teens when you first started pic fedding so one would assume that as you grow and mature as a pic fedder your fed should reflect that. I know this is only your first show back and all, just hoping the next show, or a one match as this one is, you add a lot more pizzazz to draw me in and keep me interested. Customs, more detailed arena ( a crowd would work great here) and maybe some back stage vignettes is really what pic fedding is all about and I would love to see what kind of stuff you can come up with. For right now I enjoyed it, a little too much of what I seen from other indy fedders, but lots of room for improvement and such. If you need any tips or advice or want to just bounce ideas off of someone I am always available to help out. Congrats on after all the hype and stalls you made your match! Now get to work on a full show!!! Congrats and thanks for posting! Thanks for the criticism John, I know its the cookie cutter indy arena, but it was meant to be. To keep the 05-08 vibe. I probably will edit the string next time. If you go to the website in the discussion thread there is a few poses on the roster where i did. Filming starts soon for the next show. Which will be full, backstage segments and all. Edit: I'll think about the crowd, however it will not be in the next show. I'll explain why down the road. |
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Post by fall on Aug 2, 2013 18:23:42 GMT -5
Thanks to anyone who replied. I started filming for the first full show back, give it a monthish hopefully. Work has been busy and I'm moving within the next couple weeks so I'm going to try to get all the matches filmed prior to moving.
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Aug 2, 2013 22:29:02 GMT -5
I must say this is the first time viewing your federation and for the most part I thought it was a pretty solid match overall. The commentary was on point, it corresponded well with each and every pic at hand and it had the realism that you would hear from any professional commentator in reality which made it really enjoyable imo. The only thing that I tend to pull out of the wastebasket is the importance of transition, the transition could have used a little bit of work as some of the pics lacked middle frames to show progression within a move such as the moonsault's, clotheline's, powerbomb's and that German Suplex into the corner onto Tantanka etc.
Be sure to take a efficient amount of pictures to make the follow-up sequences appear more effectively. Other the that, there isn't much to say as far as constructive criticism. The spots during the match were so crisp and unique, it wasn't bland and to simplistic and some of the moves you incorporated in the match were utilized respectively well. To be honest, I think this match had a good length that didn't make the match drag to long and become dull and unentertaining so good job finding a even balance between the two.
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Post by refused on Aug 3, 2013 6:55:03 GMT -5
i really enjoyed this fall. it is reminscent of the older days of pic fedding, although times have changed quite a bit now. it would maybe be better if you slowed the match down a bit, as i havent seen a match that fast paced not only in pic feds but in real life in a while now. tatanka was an interesting choice, and i hope this culminates in the launch of a new fed.
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