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Post by Wicked on Jul 30, 2013 17:33:20 GMT -5
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The Warsman
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Post by The Warsman on Jul 30, 2013 19:30:36 GMT -5
Cool, your set-up looks a thousand times better!
I like seeing DiBiase putting down Canadians, lol.
Your commentary is very good, I like the entrances and the little touches, like streamers for Mistico and Bourne. Tight action with those two, nice poses with the Mattels! You've gotten the 'hang of it!'
A little hiccup with linking between sites, but I made it over to Part II...
Wow, Armando has a LOT of microphones!
I like your crowd and the signs. Nice touch!
Nice match, good ending sequence!
Ohhhh YEEEAAHH! Oh no! Mach got knocked the...well, he got knocked out!
Poor Mick Foley is having a total breakdown. He thinks he's seen the light...has he?
Whoa, guess he hasn't what a potty mouth. I don't know of too many wrestling shows or PPVs that air cursing like that from the talent in a "pre-taped segment." They would beep it out.
Wow, Daniel Bryan is over EVERYWHERE, isn't he? YES he is.
"Most Animal-Friendly Athlete" LOL, there's an honor...
Surfboard into a curbstomp, ouch!
Whoa, Regal pretty much got squashed. Darn, lol...
The Captain's Corner segment was cool, a good way to advance storylines and give scoops.
Edge took out Christian and gave an easy win to Abdullah! As if that's not enough, he decimated him through a table, nice spot! Cool lil promos at the end hyped the next event, ohhh Lawler is coming. Commentary or in ring action??
Big improvement, fun show, thanks for posting!
Wars
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Post by Wicked on Jul 30, 2013 20:46:46 GMT -5
Cool, your set-up looks a thousand times better! I like seeing DiBiase putting down Canadians, lol. Your commentary is very good, I like the entrances and the little touches, like streamers for Mistico and Bourne. Tight action with those two, nice poses with the Mattels! You've gotten the 'hang of it!' A little hiccup with linking between sites, but I made it over to Part II... Wow, Armando has a LOT of microphones! I like your crowd and the signs. Nice touch! Nice match, good ending sequence! Ohhhh YEEEAAHH! Oh no! Mach got knocked the...well, he got knocked out! Poor Mick Foley is having a total breakdown. He thinks he's seen the light...has he? Whoa, guess he hasn't what a potty mouth. I don't know of too many wrestling shows or PPVs that air cursing like that from the talent in a "pre-taped segment." They would beep it out. Wow, Daniel Bryan is over EVERYWHERE, isn't he? YES he is. "Most Animal-Friendly Athlete" LOL, there's an honor... Surfboard into a curbstomp, ouch! Whoa, Regal pretty much got squashed. Darn, lol... The Captain's Corner segment was cool, a good way to advance storylines and give scoops. Edge took out Christian and gave an easy win to Abdullah! As if that's not enough, he decimated him through a table, nice spot! Cool lil promos at the end hyped the next event, ohhh Lawler is coming. Commentary or in ring action?? Big improvement, fun show, thanks for posting! Wars Thanks man. I was trying to go for an INDY feel for GWV that explains the cursing. Also on all the older ROH tapes I have watched they have promos after the show and I wanted tot do the same thing. Lawler was kicked off the announce team before Freedomania and he will be Wrestling a full time schedule now. It means a lot to hear these great things from you. Thanks. Big Up's. Thanks for replying. |
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Post by zaxary on Jul 31, 2013 5:23:02 GMT -5
I like how it's set up and the floor and the brick in the room actually make it look cooler! I don't mess with moves/poses, but your moves looked really cool.
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Post by T on Jul 31, 2013 8:43:22 GMT -5
-Very busy intro, looks like all change already. 'Rise to Glory' is a cool concept, although all of those announcements at once were quite confusing
-Great opener. Poses were very realistic and the match flowed really well
-The angle with Foley is very interesting - brilliant segment!
-Bryan winning was obvious, but the match itself was entertaining with the little ref exchanges
-Didn't see that coming. I'm intrigued to see what Edge's reasons will be
A very good show there. Looks like we're on the edge of some big things happening in this fed with angles being set up well across the board. Good work!
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Post by fall on Jul 31, 2013 11:35:31 GMT -5
Okay first off, this is just my opinion. I know you have a big crowd, which is cool and all. But personally I think it takes away from the action. Other members may disagree, I think a crowd looks cool for a play fed, but a picture federation it is just too cluttered if you ask me. Also I recommend a black backdrop, the brick idea is cool, but since they're actual, giant bricks, it just looks unrealistic to me. I would suggest to download Photoshop CS2, its free and it would help make your event photos instead of using paint.
Anyways, the matches were good, great poses and flow, good action as well. I liked the opening test of strength. Good technical stuff here. The matches were pretty solid. Another suggest I might add is making the matches a little bit longer, and maybe just taking out some of the extra steps to the poses. For example maybe using like 2 photos for a dive instead of 5. The 5 photo sequence looks good, but you end up filming for a long time then you realize you really dont have too much match in the end. I loved the Foley angle. Reminded me of Charles Manson, very cool.
This is my first time watching your fed and I have to say you did a good job! Very impressed with it only being your third episode. You have tons of potential.
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Tyler Black
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Post by Tyler Black on Jul 31, 2013 13:03:18 GMT -5
Okay wow right off the bat this was a vast improvement over your last show. The opening announcements were great, but would have flowed better if proper grammar was used
Loved the big crowd, I dont know if this was your intention but you had the greater than signs facing the wrong way so you were saying all those other shows are better than yours lol.
Great opening match string poses everything was superb except one thing that threw me off was Bourne acting like a heel in the opening promo and then shaking misticos hand before and after the match loved the streamers really gave it that Indy feel but the roster gives it that big time feel so this almost comes off like a tna to me. Macho men gets decked can't wait to see the pure title. would have been nice to see the x division title retired in Ultimate X but this match was great. One more thing you should pay attention to is the flow of a move, and by that I mean I think there was two or three times where you did a nice diving spot with Bourne, but you turned him the wrong way in the mid air shot.
The foley thing was just excellent man really Great stuff felt like an actual foley promo the straight jacket was a nice touch. Like wars said if its a pre tapped segment the f bomb should be censored. Still my favorite part of the show was this promo.
Great use of D-Bry loved the match was nicely paced with Great posing amd some fun spots I have a way for you to improve you're lebel lock pose i just have to dig up the pic from an old pic fed.
Edge attacking Christian yet again was a nice way to further both the edge Christian feud amd the Abby taker feud interesting use of Abby I don't recall him being used prominently in a pic fed before. Loved the promos after thought it was brilliant when both ROH and our own FIW did it great way to wrap up the show.
Overall I thought this was very entertaining defiantly your best work so far and I look forward to the next episode and your IPPV
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Post by Wicked on Jul 31, 2013 14:26:33 GMT -5
I like how it's set up and the floor and the brick in the room actually make it look cooler! I don't mess with moves/poses, but your moves looked really cool. Thanks man. Thanks for the reply and thanks for watching stay tuned next month for my next show. |
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Post by Wicked on Jul 31, 2013 14:37:21 GMT -5
-Very busy intro, looks like all change already. 'Rise to Glory' is a cool concept, although all of those announcements at once were quite confusing -Great opener. Poses were very realistic and the match flowed really well -The angle with Foley is very interesting - brilliant segment! -Bryan winning was obvious, but the match itself was entertaining with the little ref exchanges -Didn't see that coming. I'm intrigued to see what Edge's reasons will be A very good show there. Looks like we're on the edge of some big things happening in this fed with angles being set up well across the board. Good work! The intro had to be jam packed so i could get all the info out  Next time on X-Plosion Bret Hart has some stuff to say... Thank you for replying. Thanks for your input. I appreciate it Titch. |
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Post by Wicked on Jul 31, 2013 14:52:38 GMT -5
Okay first off, this is just my opinion. I know you have a big crowd, which is cool and all. But personally I think it takes away from the action. Other members may disagree, I think a crowd looks cool for a play fed, but a picture federation it is just too cluttered if you ask me. Also I recommend a black backdrop, the brick idea is cool, but since they're actual, giant bricks, it just looks unrealistic to me. I would suggest to download Photoshop CS2, its free and it would help make your event photos instead of using paint. Anyways, the matches were good, great poses and flow, good action as well. I liked the opening test of strength. Good technical stuff here. The matches were pretty solid. Another suggest I might add is making the matches a little bit longer, and maybe just taking out some of the extra steps to the poses. For example maybe using like 2 photos for a dive instead of 5. The 5 photo sequence looks good, but you end up filming for a long time then you realize you really dont have too much match in the end. I loved the Foley angle. Reminded me of Charles Manson, very cool. This is my first time watching your fed and I have to say you did a good job! Very impressed with it only being your third episode. You have tons of potential. Thank you for posting. I appreciate it. I have a new logo. (The one at the top) First I enjoy having a big Crowd I think it adds a lot to the arena. I have some more white board so i will put that were the bricks were.. I enjoy my ring, I might make a ring skirt or something, and change my ropes but besides that I like it. I will take that into my mind for the different commentators maybe Talking Tim could come to my fed I was going for a creepy Manson esc. promo.. Foley was called Cactus Jack Manson at the start of his career. I am going to remember to not do extra photo's for my sequences. Thanks for the kind words. |
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Post by Wicked on Jul 31, 2013 15:02:40 GMT -5
Okay wow right off the bat this was a vast improvement over your last show. The opening announcements were great, but would have flowed better if proper grammar was used Loved the big crowd, I dont know if this was your intention but you had the greater than signs facing the wrong way so you were saying all those other shows are better than yours lol. Great opening match string poses everything was superb except one thing that threw me off was Bourne acting like a heel in the opening promo and then shaking misticos hand before and after the match loved the streamers really gave it that Indy feel but the roster gives it that big time feel so this almost comes off like a tna to me. Macho men gets decked can't wait to see the pure title. would have been nice to see the x division title retired in Ultimate X but this match was great. One more thing you should pay attention to is the flow of a move, and by that I mean I think there was two or three times where you did a nice diving spot with Bourne, but you turned him the wrong way in the mid air shot. The foley thing was just excellent man really Great stuff felt like an actual foley promo the straight jacket was a nice touch. Like wars said if its a pre tapped segment the f bomb should be censored. Still my favorite part of the show was this promo. Great use of D-Bry loved the match was nicely paced with Great posing amd some fun spots I have a way for you to improve you're lebel lock pose i just have to dig up the pic from an old pic fed. Edge attacking Christian yet again was a nice way to further both the edge Christian feud amd the Abby taker feud interesting use of Abby I don't recall him being used prominently in a pic fed before. Loved the promos after thought it was brilliant when both ROH and our own FIW did it great way to wrap up the show. Overall I thought this was very entertaining defiantly your best work so far and I look forward to the next episode and your IPPV Thanks alot for posting -I only messed up at the start a little bit grammatically but whatever -It was my intentions I respect the great fedders before me and wont disrespect them. -The Bourne character is a complex character. We will have to see what he says. -I wish I wasn't compared to TNA ;P ... Hey the Wolves are coming. and just because the title is gone doesn't mean there could never be an ultimate x match. -As for the wrong mid air spots.... That F'N strings always move!!!!  -It is on the internet and GWV doesn't have the technology to bleep the F bomb .. In CZW, ROH, etc. people swear all the time. Thank you for the foley comment I tried to think of one that he would say. I am reading his books right now so I felt inspired. -I am trying to infuse the Old Bryan with the new Bryan for this gimmick. - The worst part of the show was my lebell lock... Thanks man also the IPPV is a two show event two days.. |
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Post by Wicked on Jul 31, 2013 15:03:52 GMT -5
Remember everyone to please vote on the poll.
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Post by Wicked on Jul 31, 2013 15:33:21 GMT -5
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Post by Wicked on Jul 31, 2013 17:25:32 GMT -5
Wow, Armando has a LOT of microphones! Wars Yeah a man has gotta announce. |
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Post by attitudesback on Jul 31, 2013 17:53:02 GMT -5
First off, the opening match was brilliant. Really enjoyed it, great poses, just an overall good match. The angle with Christian and Edge looks interesting and I think that the backstage promo's really added to the depth of it. The spots were cool, and Regal and D-Bry's match was also enjoyable. To improve I'd say to make sure that it's not too repetitive. I mean the matches were great and all but it felt like there was a lot of handshakes taking place. Might have just been me though, but I did enjoy it. Good job!  |
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Post by Wicked on Jul 31, 2013 17:55:47 GMT -5
First off, the opening match was brilliant. Really enjoyed it, great poses, just an overall good match. The angle with Christian and Edge looks interesting and I think that the backstage promo's really added to the depth of it. The spots were cool, and Regal and D-Bry's match was also enjoyable. To improve I'd say to make sure that it's not too repetitive. I mean the matches were great and all but it felt like there was a lot of handshakes taking place. Might have just been me though, but I did enjoy it. Good job! Thanks man for replying I hope you voted .. But as for hand shakes I am trying to capture the INDY respect between guys feeling. It is like I am using the Code of Honor like my ever so beloved ROH. Thanks again... |
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Post by attitudesback on Jul 31, 2013 17:57:17 GMT -5
First off, the opening match was brilliant. Really enjoyed it, great poses, just an overall good match. The angle with Christian and Edge looks interesting and I think that the backstage promo's really added to the depth of it. The spots were cool, and Regal and D-Bry's match was also enjoyable. To improve I'd say to make sure that it's not too repetitive. I mean the matches were great and all but it felt like there was a lot of handshakes taking place. Might have just been me though, but I did enjoy it. Good job! Thanks man for replying I hope you voted .. But as for hand shakes I am trying to capture the INDY respect between guys feeling. It is like I am using the Code of Honor like my ever so beloved ROH. Thanks again... Oh! I don't really follow indy feds but if that's what they do then cool. Sure thing I voted  |
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Post by EMW Figure Shelf on Aug 2, 2013 13:19:50 GMT -5
Excellent show once again brother!!!!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 2, 2013 17:45:12 GMT -5
Asparagus you are progressing very nicely in your pic fed career. Congrats on your new episode you seem to be moving in the right direction with your fed. Big crowd, decent arena setup and nice moves throughout. Backstage vignettes setup story lines well and I am glad to see you are using them. Just like a real little wrestling TV episode. Keep up the good work and hope to see you progress even further on your next show! Big Ups buddy!!!!
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Post by Wicked on Aug 3, 2013 7:19:21 GMT -5
Asparagus you are progressing very nicely in your pic fed career. Congrats on your new episode you seem to be moving in the right direction with your fed. Big crowd, decent arena setup and nice moves throughout. Backstage vignettes setup story lines well and I am glad to see you are using them. Just like a real little wrestling TV episode. Keep up the good work and hope to see you progress even further on your next show! Big Ups buddy!!!! Thanks man I appreciate it. Big Up's. |
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