WFW - Raw! August Episode 2

Nice one for putting a show up.

-Good opening segment. I like Bischoff vs Rock as a rivalry, kind of works
-Try and disguise your fingers better for poses - the Chokeslam one had a massive finger. Try and edit the picture or cut the fingers out
-Get the metal parts of the ring ropes hidden under the turnbuckles (just a small nitpick )
-Orton/Batista match felt like there wasn't much effort put into constructing a match. Some cool spots and the RKO pose to Batista with the string was great stuff, you should do that more often instead of using fingers!
-Ziggler/Punk had the potential to be a good match up, but again it felt rushed, although I get the idea of making Zigg look sneaky
-The Giant not fitting through the door was pretty funny
-The Undertaker coming was a cool move, some decent spots. Didn't like how quickly Rock and Taker seemed to recover from the huge bumps, and the ending was a bit dusty with no real decision being made (unless I missed it)

Some signs of development for sure in what's your second Raw episode. Would like to have seen some longer matches on the undercard. If it seems you don't care as much about the undercard, then viewers probably won't either. You showed that you can put on good matches though with the main event, so hopefully the next show can have solid matches throughout. Commentary is getting better, maybe try and start to get in some backstage segments? Nice to see another show from you.

I am glad someone put out another show. Big Up's for that. I agree so much with Titch about what he said. I enjoy your fed.
-I just think that you should take more time on posing and taking pictures and your fed will be awesome. Like if a pose or picture doesn't look right take two or three photo's. It took me about 10-20 minutes to do some of the complex poses I have done. So just don't RUSH with your pictures or your poses, or the commentary. Some of the commentary felt bland (NO OFFENCE!I am just trying to help). Try to add some substance to the commentary,
-I like that JR & King fight but I do not think that they should say Orton is the obvious winner and Batista is better than Orton.
-I thought Macho Man coming out was cool but him getting RKO'ed off the top could have potentially been an awesome pose but you didn't do a pose I felt like it missed a picture because there was mo mid air picture.
-I think if you used more String you could make some better poses.
- Ziggles and Punk coulda had a good match but that damn ZIGGLYPUFF!
-The cell match was cool. I liked some spots but I agree with Titch that is was weird that Rocky & Taker didn't sell the fall from the cell.
If you just worked on the some things your fed would be a lot better. But you are getting there.

Working backwards a bit. Really enjoyed the poses with the Rock. You nailed those quite well, which isn't easy.

I still don't necessarily like the presentation format, just because as I said before, when I try to scroll around it moves all over the place. Maybe I'll try it in a different browser.

I liked the Orton/Batista match, thought it had a few nice spots, but I think you have to be careful not to just do big things. I like to see the smaller interactions as well. Headlocks and hammerlocks. I know those two guys aren't really known for it.

Definitely got a "RAW" type feel from the show as it built to one big match with everything else being quicker and to the point. The main event was a lot of fun, but the Hell in the Cell didn't feel as important as it could have. With as many shows as you've done, you can afford to build things a bit more. Of course, I think you've got a bit of a "crash TV" formula going and it works. That's not a slight mind you, it's a good thing in pic feds to keep people hooked.

Liked the little disappearing Undertaker act. A bit of a non-finish but it's not like they don't do that in real wrestling from time to time.

Checked this out and didnt realize I hadn't replied till now. you have some good stuff going on here. Good storyline development with some decent pics. Great work with cage match. The dynamic between the 4 combatants was well done. I think the commentary was decent but could be a bit more fleshed out to explain more of what's going on, but that's just a little thing. The arena, while a little rough looking, isn't too bad. You've got a nice little fed here that has a nice attitude feel to it. hopefully you continue with this:)