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Post by attitudesback on Oct 10, 2013 15:10:44 GMT -5
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Post by T on Oct 10, 2013 16:19:25 GMT -5
While I love the fact that you're currently churning out shows, I see a potential problem, but I'll cover that later. -A referee! ;D -Standard Santino squash, but anything different wouldn't have worked. It put The Rock over -I preferred the pics when they were a bit bigger -The Giant's definitely someone to be reckoned with. That Chokeslam was sick! -Not sure I like Cesaro having the same gimmick as he currently is having in WWE -Haha, poor Santino! -Punk/Austin was cool. Loved the spot with Punk putting on Austin's ring jacket! -Undertaker debuting was a surprise, although not sure he should have lost, even if he was cheated slightly Another good showing from you. Lighting and poses were much, much improved in this show, it definitely feels like you're stepping it up a notch and getting serious. What I was referring to at the start was that you've put out two good shows in the space of 6 days - no one can keep that sort of pace up! I'd recommend leaving at least 2 weeks (ideally 3) between shows to give time to people to watch each show. Some people don't get round to viewing a show until a fortnight after it has been posted. If you have the show ready to go, hey, great. But keep it up your sleeve and post it in a few weeks time. That way you'll always stay ahead of the game and be able to produce shows. Shatter #7 that I just posted was filmed in April of this year, but because I'd had my story arcs planned out I knew I could film it then and post it later in the year without having any long breaks/hiatuses between shows. It's really great to see that you're committed to producing really good pic fed shows, and you're going from strength to strength. I just don't want you to burn out and end up taking a few months off because you find the workload too much. Would rather have one show every three weeks, than four in a month and then none for two months if you know what I mean.
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Post by attitudesback on Oct 10, 2013 16:24:22 GMT -5
While I love the fact that you're currently churning out shows, I see a potential problem, but I'll cover that later. -A referee! ;D -Standard Santino squash, but anything different wouldn't have worked. It put The Rock over -I preferred the pics when they were a bit bigger -The Giant's definitely someone to be reckoned with. That Chokeslam was sick! -Not sure I like Cesaro having the same gimmick as he currently is having in WWE -Haha, poor Santino! -Punk/Austin was cool. Loved the spot with Punk putting on Austin's ring jacket! -Undertaker debuting was a surprise, although not sure he should have lost, even if he was cheated slightly Another good showing from you. Lighting and poses were much, much improved in this show, it definitely feels like you're stepping it up a notch and getting serious. What I was referring to at the start was that you've put out two good shows in the space of 6 days - no one can keep that sort of pace up! I'd recommend leaving at least 2 weeks (ideally 3) between shows to give time to people to watch each show. Some people don't get round to viewing a show until a fortnight after it has been posted. If you have the show ready to go, hey, great. But keep it up your sleeve and post it in a few weeks time. That way you'll always stay ahead of the game and be able to produce shows. Shatter #7 that I just posted was filmed in April of this year, but because I'd had my story arcs planned out I knew I could film it then and post it later in the year without having any long breaks/hiatuses between shows. It's really great to see that you're committed to producing really good pic fed shows, and you're going from strength to strength. I just don't want you to burn out and end up taking a few months off because you find the workload too much. Would rather have one show every three weeks, than four in a month and then none for two months if you know what I mean. Thanks bro! The gallery wouldn't change in size, but I'll look into that. I'm thinking of spacing it out more too, I guess I've got a lot of thinking to do, but I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Post by T on Oct 10, 2013 16:25:25 GMT -5
Thanks bro! The gallery wouldn't change in size, but I'll look into that. I'm thinking of spacing it out more too, I guess I've got a lot of thinking to do, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! No worries - if you ever want a second opinion or someone to bounce ideas off with scheduling or anything else, drop me a PM!
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Post by attitudesback on Oct 10, 2013 16:28:15 GMT -5
Thanks bro! The gallery wouldn't change in size, but I'll look into that. I'm thinking of spacing it out more too, I guess I've got a lot of thinking to do, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! No worries - if you ever want a second opinion or someone to bounce ideas off with scheduling or anything else, drop me a PM! Thanks, I think I might have to do that!
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Post by deskjet on Oct 10, 2013 19:01:32 GMT -5
That was just leaps and bounds better than the last show. the arena, picture quality and angles, even the poses. Much much better. It's great that you can take constructive criticism and apply it. It's really helped your show out. imo. I really enjoyed all the matches in this show and the altercation backstage with Show and HBK. You've got some great figs there too that make the posing so much better. Nice work with the Taker angle as well, although a little surprised Rock got the win. Austin vs Punk was fantastic. great poses and nice work with Punk taking Austins vest. And a ref!!! lol thank u. My only other suggestion would be maybe to make the pics a little bigger if you can. Otherwise, I just cant say enough how much better all around this show is. Good to see WFW back in full force:)
Oh, also, I agree with Titch about the pacing thing. always good to get a show out every few weeks than every few months:)
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Post by attitudesback on Oct 11, 2013 10:50:18 GMT -5
That was just leaps and bounds better than the last show. the arena, picture quality and angles, even the poses. Much much better. It's great that you can take constructive criticism and apply it. It's really helped your show out. imo. I really enjoyed all the matches in this show and the altercation backstage with Show and HBK. You've got some great figs there too that make the posing so much better. Nice work with the Taker angle as well, although a little surprised Rock got the win. Austin vs Punk was fantastic. great poses and nice work with Punk taking Austins vest. And a ref!!! lol thank u. My only other suggestion would be maybe to make the pics a little bigger if you can. Otherwise, I just cant say enough how much better all around this show is. Good to see WFW back in full force:) Oh, also, I agree with Titch about the pacing thing. always good to get a show out every few weeks than every few months:) Thanks dude, glad you enjoyed the show! The pics should be bigger next time, I have no idea why they happened to only go so small. I'm watching matches including the superstars I'm using as I'm making the show and it seems to be going well in terms of getting ideas!
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Post by brm on Oct 12, 2013 11:16:01 GMT -5
First time checking out your fed. First off, I thought your pics were kind of small. I can tell what's happening, but I'd rather they be larger so they can be appreciated more. Your arena looks awesome and the crowd printouts actually look fairly realistic in lots of shots. Rock vs. Santino lasted about 2 seconds! As expected, but not exactly a riveting match. Love that you're using The Giant in your fed as opposed to Big Show. Nice little segment there. Ryback vs. Santino. I think I'm seeing a pattern here. And another squash. It might not have been so bad if you used string, but this just seems like the main eventer vs. Santino show. Yeah, Rock vs. Taker is a real match, but 2 of the 4 on this show are squashes. Squashes are sometimes necessary, but two on one show makes it seem excessive. Stone Cold vs. Punk was a nice match. I liked how Punk put on Stone Cold's vest to taunt him, and got caught with the Stunner. Also, having Rock compete twice in one show seems excessive. Of the four matches you had, you had two wrestlers wrestle twice. You should consider shaking up your matches, including lots of different types of matches and types of wrestlers. Overall, I think you have the tools to really make this a good fed, you just have to utilize those tools. You have an awesome arena, but the pics are so small you can't really appreciate it. You're doing Rock Bottoms and Powerbombs, but you're not using string to pose them. You obviously have a larger roster (Giant, Edge, HBK, Cesaro), but you're using Santino and Rock twice in one night. These are all easily fixed problems, so I hope you consider what you can do to make this fed even better.
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Post by attitudesback on Oct 12, 2013 13:06:20 GMT -5
First time checking out your fed. First off, I thought your pics were kind of small. I can tell what's happening, but I'd rather they be larger so they can be appreciated more. Your arena looks awesome and the crowd printouts actually look fairly realistic in lots of shots. Rock vs. Santino lasted about 2 seconds! As expected, but not exactly a riveting match. Love that you're using The Giant in your fed as opposed to Big Show. Nice little segment there. Ryback vs. Santino. I think I'm seeing a pattern here. And another squash. It might not have been so bad if you used string, but this just seems like the main eventer vs. Santino show. Yeah, Rock vs. Taker is a real match, but 2 of the 4 on this show are squashes. Squashes are sometimes necessary, but two on one show makes it seem excessive. Stone Cold vs. Punk was a nice match. I liked how Punk put on Stone Cold's vest to taunt him, and got caught with the Stunner. Also, having Rock compete twice in one show seems excessive. Of the four matches you had, you had two wrestlers wrestle twice. You should consider shaking up your matches, including lots of different types of matches and types of wrestlers. Overall, I think you have the tools to really make this a good fed, you just have to utilize those tools. You have an awesome arena, but the pics are so small you can't really appreciate it. You're doing Rock Bottoms and Powerbombs, but you're not using string to pose them. You obviously have a larger roster (Giant, Edge, HBK, Cesaro), but you're using Santino and Rock twice in one night. These are all easily fixed problems, so I hope you consider what you can do to make this fed even better. Thanks. I often do use different superstars. RAW and Smackdown now have completely different rosters with a story line in my head for each superstar. The whole twice in one night makes total sense, thanks. Won't be happening again. The pictures should be better now? Thanks for taking the time to check out my show, Raw will be coming very soon!
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Post by Wicked on Oct 12, 2013 23:35:51 GMT -5
I think you made some progress and are improving every show. I love how your fed is like WWE but different. all the twists and turns were awesome. I love the nWo/DX sketch. Great job man. My only gripe is that some poses were off. but great job nonetheless.
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Post by attitudesback on Oct 13, 2013 5:19:44 GMT -5
I think you made some progress and are improving every show. I love how your fed is like WWE but different. all the twists and turns were awesome. I love the nWo/DX sketch. Great job man. My only gripe is that some poses were off. but great job nonetheless. Thanks dude!
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