artdehf
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Post by artdehf on Oct 12, 2013 7:55:17 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2013 9:28:28 GMT -5
I liked it not too bad for a debut. You have a lot of action going on and of course this being your first show you could improve on a few things mostly your posing but they weren't too bad. I love seeing that RA Abyss fig used and nice action in the hardcore match. Congrats on your debut and if you weren't here before welcome to the board man this place made such a huge turnaround its great seeing all this activity!
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Post by deskjet on Oct 12, 2013 9:46:40 GMT -5
It was alright. Didnt really like the setup as it was basically just the figures in poses with not alot of storylines/buildup. Open up the arena a bit more too with maybe a crowd or further away view. Was tough to watch even with the English subtitle, but welcome aboard none the less.
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Post by Wicked on Oct 12, 2013 23:57:20 GMT -5
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Post by T on Oct 13, 2013 4:37:26 GMT -5
Firstly, welcome to the board!  -The commentary ideally should be underneath each picture that it is talking about, rather than a big block before all the pictures -Cool mixture of wrestlers for the opener -Very chaotic hardcore match, but I liked it! -Decent match with Evan Bourne winning -The backstage pictures with Evan Bourne didn't work for me -Love the attitude that Ted DiBiase seems to have in your fed. He would be great as a main heel, so ideally he would have won Nice attempt at a first show. Poses could do with some working on, and maybe take down the picture hanging behind the ring. But, I like the mix of wrestlers you have and will look forward to another show! In the meantime, it may be good if you watch some of the other members' shows on this board. It will help you get ideas for all sorts of things like layout, presentation, poses, etc. |
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artdehf
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My username is a mystery :P
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Post by artdehf on Oct 13, 2013 6:51:54 GMT -5
Thank you very much !
I have already start the show 2 so it will be the same arena but for the third there will be a new arena
Titch: It don't work for me too, I will try to change that
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Post by Deleted on Oct 19, 2013 11:41:47 GMT -5
Thank you very much ! I have already start the show 2 so it will be the same arena but for the third there will be a new arena Titch: It don't work for me too, I will try to change that Yeah you do need to tighten a few things up but I hope you take the advice and use it to grow as a pic fedder. Cant wait to see what you do next! Good luck. |
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