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Post by Slim on Feb 28, 2015 7:12:53 GMT -5
IT'S HERE
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Post by Colter on Feb 28, 2015 7:46:15 GMT -5
^ Had some time to kill this morning so I watched it. Here's my thoughts. It's really not that bad. I appreciate the time and effort you put into this. A few things that irked me: Punch sequences. Basically, I saw when you had them punch each other first thing in the match (and other times, of course) is that a lot of the time, you'd have them just stand there. Like, what I mean is that say Punk punched Bryan, Bryan just stood there like a tower before he got hit - no reaction to seeing Punk's fist come towards him, and vice versa. Another thing that bugged me is right in the middle of the match, you cut to your stage before the piledriver spot. To me, that killed a lot of the momentum of the moment and left a lot of wonder as to how they even got into position for the piledriver to begin with. The commentary (it must have been a bitch finding all of it) seemed very choppy throughout and I think it'd be of great benefit to work on transitioning it better. One more thing: Speed. I watched the whole thing through at normal speed and thought it was a tad slow. Then I watched it through again with the speed on 1.25 and found it flowed much better and thought it was more enjoyable. All in all, it's a great effort and animating a match is no small task. Good job! Just try to work on some of those things I outlined and you'll be on your way! p.s. put "stop motion" in the title because some people might find it misleading and you don't want the comment section clogged with that mess... p.p.s the spot at 6:37 was my favorite moment of the match and I thought it was really well done.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2015 17:38:09 GMT -5
What happened to the royal rumble ppv? also not sure if this is the right place for that question!
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Post by wweleslie1 on Feb 28, 2015 19:04:22 GMT -5
Can you guys critique my first animation since December?
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Post by JL24FPS on Mar 3, 2015 1:42:10 GMT -5
Picked up Bluetista yesterday before work. Spur of the moment pick up.. Wanna make something with it!
In the mood to animate a move a little later. Who wants to see my last one?!
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Post by Jamie on Mar 3, 2015 4:00:26 GMT -5
Started making a super kick today. Have so many things I want to animate, just can't be stuffed doing it.
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Post by JL24FPS on Mar 3, 2015 19:11:25 GMT -5
Just posted my first animation since last July. Gimmie some feedback guys. Come on, please.
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Post by Slim on Mar 6, 2015 1:18:51 GMT -5
My Taker/Wyatt moment had 41,000 views and got flagged for unknown reason wtf now my video is down There wasn't any copyrights you Youtube
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Post by Jamie on Mar 6, 2015 1:41:54 GMT -5
My Taker/Wyatt moment had 41,000 views and got flagged for unknown reason wtf now my video is down There wasn't any copyrights you Youtube Misleading thumbnail/title, perhaps? For example, one of your videos is titled 'WWE Daniel Bryan eliminated from Royal Rumble 2015' with the thumbnail a picture from the event. Very misleading if you didn't know you're a stop-motion channel.
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Post by Colter on Mar 6, 2015 2:00:56 GMT -5
My Taker/Wyatt moment had 41,000 views and got flagged for unknown reason wtf now my video is down There wasn't any copyrights you Youtube Misleading thumbnail, perhaps? Probably a good call. "commercially deceptive" content is what it's called. Sucks that it got taken down, but you probably should have specifically outlined that it was an animation and just had the thumbnail be a frame from it.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 6, 2015 4:05:16 GMT -5
People that clickbait are the worst.
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Post by TheNinthCloud on Mar 7, 2015 1:59:25 GMT -5
100 pages! Congrats. Has anyone actually tried a non-wrestling stop motion film?
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Post by JL24FPS on Mar 7, 2015 10:11:13 GMT -5
100 pages! Congrats. Has anyone actually tried a non-wrestling stop motion film? I tried working on a Batman one a while ago, but it came out like crap, so I scrapped it. I wrote a Spider-Man one, but never actually animated it. It's so hard to find time anymore when you're working 40+ hours a week.
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Post by wweleslie1 on Mar 7, 2015 10:41:35 GMT -5
100 pages! Congrats. Has anyone actually tried a non-wrestling stop motion film? I was working on a Freddy vs Jason one, but didn't turn out as planned.
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Post by KKD on Mar 7, 2015 23:53:06 GMT -5
100 pages! Congrats. Has anyone actually tried a non-wrestling stop motion film? That's what I've been doing recently. I have a playlist on my channel.
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Post by Jamie on Mar 8, 2015 20:31:10 GMT -5
Does anyone have any or know where to find good crowd printouts?
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Post by Colter on Mar 8, 2015 20:42:13 GMT -5
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Post by Jamie on Mar 8, 2015 20:43:07 GMT -5
Cheers mate! Couldn't find his site.
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Post by JL24FPS on Mar 8, 2015 20:46:41 GMT -5
Speaking of Printouts... Anyone have any idea where to find printouts for the raw entrance stage? Maybe a Smackdown logo or for PPVs?
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Post by Jamie on Mar 8, 2015 23:19:47 GMT -5
Speaking of Printouts... Anyone have any idea where to find printouts for the raw entrance stage? Maybe a Smackdown logo or for PPVs? Matt did this video of him making some. I think it has the dimensions you can use.
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