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Post by Colter on Aug 4, 2014 15:37:43 GMT -5
Now Goose Gossage was one of the G.O.A.T. Probably the GOAT baseball stache next to Fingers
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Post by Sleazyness on Aug 4, 2014 15:37:45 GMT -5
Harold Snepsts
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Post by Colter on Aug 4, 2014 15:38:13 GMT -5
Oscar Gamble = GREAT NAME
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Post by T R W on Aug 4, 2014 15:38:52 GMT -5
Harold Snepsts I am impressed by a guy who looks asian being able to rock a stache of that magnitude.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2014 15:39:08 GMT -5
Where's @rowdyraider been? Wasnt he on yesterday? He used to be a big part of this thread.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2014 15:40:12 GMT -5
You know who else has a mustache? MEOWTH! THAT'S RIGHT! you are trying WAY too hard to be my best friend
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Post by Colter on Aug 4, 2014 15:40:43 GMT -5
"Dave Roberts will pinch run here..."
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Post by T R W on Aug 4, 2014 15:41:00 GMT -5
I don't think I would let Lee Tunnell near my kids though.
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Post by Spear Guy on Aug 4, 2014 15:41:10 GMT -5
This card was a prized possession of mine. I still own it too.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2014 15:41:53 GMT -5
You know who else has a mustache? MEOWTH! THAT'S RIGHT! you are trying WAY too hard to be my best friend
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Post by Ian from 616Entertainment. on Aug 4, 2014 15:42:33 GMT -5
This card was a prized possession of mine. I still own it too. "They don't think it be like it is, but it do."
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2014 15:43:41 GMT -5
RIP Davey Allison. My brother has/had a bigger mancrush on this guy than I have on Rick Viktor (srs)
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Post by T R W on Aug 4, 2014 15:44:30 GMT -5
Of course there IS Brian Wilson...
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2014 15:45:13 GMT -5
JEFF "STACHE" GORDON CLAP CLAP CLAPCLAPCLAP TD EARN-HARDT CLAP CLAP CLAPCLAPCLAP
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Post by Ian from 616Entertainment. on Aug 4, 2014 15:45:32 GMT -5
@monoxide23, I just listened to your new story. Extremely dark, felt uncomfortable listening to it. Sounded like something a school shooter would have on his YouTube channel and people would freak out and say "WHY DID NO ONE SEE THE SIGNS" when it hit the news. That said, I know that's what you were going for. It was supposed to be twisted, supposed to be dark. So you accomplished exactly what you set out to do. I will say I was impressed with the background sounds behind the narration. It's not easy to find the right song to use for certain things, but they all seemed to fit right in. The fire trucks and such at the end were a great touch, perfect amount of fade. The whole effect would've been ruined if it just cut and stopped. You faded it out perfectly. Here's a new challenge. How about your next one isn't dark and Manson-esque? Something completely different, out of left field from your normal style? Could be fun to see what you come up with. I dunno, I'm not really a writer, I just do it for fun occasionally. And that was kinda the point. That society creates kids like that. Isn't dark? Well, the last time I did that it was in 7th grade where I rewrote GTA San Andreas. You might not consider yourself a writer, but none of my friends could write like that, man. Maybe you should consider yourself a writer. Not everyone can tell a story like that. Most people fumble trying to describe someone who is dirty. "He was all covered in mud," is the best some people can come up with. No imagery, no description outside of his first glance appearance. You go into detail the way a writer was. A normal person would never throw something in about how the dirty guy is secretly most upset because he'd just but those jeans to look cool to the very people who shoved him in the mud, or that the cut on his knee was burning because the dirt was getting into the open wound. Ya know? You don't suck is what I'm getting at, haha. Keep it up. And try more stuff, yea. Switch up the styles.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2014 15:45:45 GMT -5
TEX-ASS TER-RY CLAP CLAP CLAPCLAPCLAP
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2014 15:46:14 GMT -5
TD Earnhardt>All
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2014 15:46:39 GMT -5
"THICK" DICK PET-TY CLAP CLAP CLAPCLAPCLAP
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2014 15:47:49 GMT -5
I just realized you didn't tag me, dickface.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2014 15:47:51 GMT -5
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