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Post by Deleted on Jan 7, 2014 23:26:26 GMT -5
Got done ahead of time. Expect other shows to be longer and feature more segments, this show was just (Storyline-wise) something to tape to show TV Stations.  |
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Post by T on Jan 8, 2014 16:23:30 GMT -5
This was a better showing than your previous ones. Positives: +Commentary was brilliant +Some cool storylines starting, that I think will work in your fed Things to develop: -I was more interested in reading the commentary than I was looking at the pictures. Good to see you're trying to use string, but those arms and legs need to move more -Invest in a lamp for some better lighting Enjoyed it more than your previous offerings though.  |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 8, 2014 17:01:30 GMT -5
Hilarious commentary. I'm not entirely sure what you were going for, but just as a personal preference, I feel like you sort of put too much stuff in, so that it's impossible to care about any of the big things. Like, you had a TLC match, a cage match, etc. It's your first show, so we're barely getting to know these characters, cages weapons and that sort of stuff doesn't mean anything in copious amounts if we don't know the characters a bit more.
Just my own personal preference though.
That said, obviously you're going for a bit of a wild environment, so maybe that was the intention.
Pictures could be a bit clearer, but it was a fairly well put together show for a first time out.
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Post by Jack on Jan 9, 2014 2:15:36 GMT -5
Nice too see a new show.
- I think you can simplify the way you book cards.
- Commentary was good.
- Poses were off. Really work on moving the joints and making them realistic.
- Also work on your lighting, another lamp would work.
Nice Job.
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Post by |»Champ«| on Jan 10, 2014 1:26:58 GMT -5
I had a good laugh watching this. I have no words to describe the commentary but hilarious. Few things I would work on for your next shows is poses and lighting. Photos are too dark during matches but are fine in the backstage segments. - Punk's running the show? Like to see how that goes.
- Will we see HHH & Vince at DBW in the future?
- The hardcore 24/7 rule? Awesome
- That ending... lol
It's a good start, just work on posing and the lighting. I'd say commentary but that was great. |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2014 23:42:15 GMT -5
I always forget when I watch your stuff, that it's not suppose to be serious. Like everyone else says, you need more lighting. Love your commentary, it's good quality humor.
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Post by Wicked on Jan 14, 2014 17:38:31 GMT -5
There is something about your fed that I love every time I watch it. You actually made me laugh a couple times. The posing and lighting is pretty bad but the humour of the fed makes up for it all. I would suggest bending the figures joints more. However I do commend you on using string! Good job buddy.
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Post by legendsguy on Jan 14, 2014 23:34:50 GMT -5
great effort. i liked it. =}
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Post by Tyler Black on Jan 15, 2014 17:49:42 GMT -5
i like this more serious fed attempt better.
your commentary is always spot on hillarious
storylines were all good
posing could be a bit better
some better lighting too
overall very good job ill be on the hunt for episode 2!
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